NIBIR FF: Anybody Can Dance (epilogue updated on page no 127) - Page 48

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey frds

Bad news
My lappy is not working properly
Repair karana padega after that m able to post the next part😭


I was missing your update and was about to pm u for that ... and now this news... means have to wait more... 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg!😲
no problem😉

hey sonal, this is for ur lappy😊
dear lappy get well soon
because we all need u, for the ff 😆

p.s.- and of course sonal too.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the comments frds
look m posting through my tab thats why the update is short sorry frds
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Posted: 10 years ago

ANYBODY CAN DANCE

Part 10

(at DDA)

(at KK's cabin...nisha is still angry with kabir)

Nisha-sir files

KK-hmmm...so did u like the performance

Nisha-excuse me...suddenly yeh sawaal kyun...n everybody loved their performance

KK-yeah i know that...but what about u...did u like their performance

Nisha-of course they were awesome each n everybody was so graceful n raj toh best tha

KK(he dint like that name)-raj matlab

Nisha-arey apna raj sir

KK-apna...mujhe lga wo uske mon n dad ka beta hai tumne adopt kar lia kya(in an sarcastic yet funny tone)

Nisha-omg sir u cracked a joke...but m not interested...bye...have a nice day

KK-nisha stop...m...m woh main woh

Nisha-sir kya

KK-i m sorry

Nisha-ji

KK-hmmm that day i hurted u na...actually i was irritated n in a very bad mood...kisiko song yaad nhi tha sab steps bhool rahe the toh main bas gusse mein tha aur wo sara gussa tum par nikal gya...maine wo intentionally nhi kiya so plzz haan don't feel bad...look mujhe sorry bolna nhi ata...so issliye do hafte lag gye

Nisha-its okk sir n haan mujhe bura laga tha but now m fine

KK-ohh thats so sweet of u

Nisha-ji

KK-nothing u go...n haan...wait nisha...woh...raj tumhe nisha bulata hai

Nisha-yeah sir...actually everybody calls me nisha yeh mam sunke lagta ha that i m some 50+ old khusath type of boss

KK-ohh...go

(nisha went from there)

KK(monologue)-raj na hua salman khan ho gya...best tha

(at nisha's desk)

Nisha-waise bappa khadoos itna bhi bura nhi hai...i mean usne mujhe sorry bola...warna kon sa boss apni employee ko sory bolta hai aur wo bhi jab wo khadoos kamina ho

(raj entered)

Raj-so what r u doing

Nisha-nothing much...tum batao

Raj-bahar chalein...i mean KK sir gave us a half day hum jeetey hain toh as a prize

Nisha-par mujhe nhi diya

Raj-arey sham ko challengey na

Nisha-okk

(kk was passing from there n he heard their convo)

KK-main is raj ka muh na tod doon...dude have u gone mad u r kk aur yeh roadside ideas i mean muh na tod du...par iss raj ko dekhkar mera para high ho jata ha

(an idea came into his mind...kk smirked n went to his cabin)

(at changing room)

Hardik-dude tune wo 1960 ke model ko hug kiya...tu pagal ho gya hai kya...woh bandi chalti phirti hindi dictionary hai aur tu jake gale lag gya...hardik beta u need a doctor...waise dancer to wo 1960 ka model acchi hai(he closed his eyes n he saw lekha's face...suddenly he opened his eyes)what was that...nightmare...doctor chod hardik koi baba waba ke pass ja

(dishank entered)

Dishank-kon baba

Hardik-koi nhi tujhe kya hua hai aise Bandar jaise shakal kyun bana ke ghoom raha hai aise muh latkakar

Dishank-bandar hoga tu...yaar mujhe ammu ko bahar leke jana hai

Hardik-ammu ham sab mein sabse jada sophisticated hai...tujhe wohi nazar ayi patane ke liye

Dishank-sophie...kon sophie abbey mujhe ammu pasand hai...aur sophie kon hai

Hardik-sophie nhi sophis...chal chod koi nhi aur tu abhi ruk tu London mein ILU boliyo...tere bacche bhi sunkar khush honge papa ne mummy ko London mein ILU bola tha

Dishank-sach bhai...phir main apne bacchon ko bhi London ghumaunga mera future kitna bright hai

Hardik-sach tera future bright hai...ammu ka pta nhi

(at RH)

Lekha-ho kya gya tha humein...ek toh woh hardik waise hi ajeeb hain ab pta nhi kya sochenge hamare bare mein aur hum baba aur ma ko kya kahenge humne ek ladke ko hug kiya...lucknow mein sab kya sochenge ki humne sheher jakar yeh sab kiya hai

(Natasha entered)

Natasha-oye kya kiya hai...aur tu kya badbada rhi thi...aur mujhe ek baat bta Mumbai mein kya hua yeh kabhar tere lucknow tak kaise pohchegi teri mummy ne kabru chod rakhe hain kya

Lekhu-nhi...hum khud batayenge

Natasha-agar darti hai toh batane ki kya zaroorat hai...tu bhi na unique piece hai...chal main ab ja rhi hu mujhe ali ke sath bahar jana hai

Lekhu-acchi ji aap date par jar hi hain

Natasha-hmm(with a blushing face)

(at KK's cabin)

Niya-r u sure KK...i mean why...woh log apne plan bna chuke hain

KK-saath mein aur maja ayega

Niya-kabhi kabhi mujhe tumhara samajh nhi ata

KK-samajh nhi ata thabhi toh kk hoon

Niya-whatever

(niya called lia)

Niya-liya sabko RH me bulao

Lia-okk

(at RH,kk entered)

KK-guys i know u all r very happy but hum bhi khush hain yaar so i was thinking saath mein celebrate karte hain

Ali-but sir hum logo ne toh plans bna liye hain

Nisha-yes sir sabne

KK(while smirking)-toh kya hua agar plan aapke hisaab se na bane toh usey change kar lo...n nisha tumne bhi plan banaya hai kya

Nisha(she looked at raj)-main kyun banungi

Maggie-sir brilliant idea jab jeetey saath hain toh celebrate bhi saath hi karenge

Kshitij-well said Maggie

Natasha-sahi kaha sir(she gives an assuring look to ali n he smiled)

Lekhdik"good idea sir

KK-lia party arrange karo...n guys

Stunners-sir hum bhi help karein

KK-but the party is for u toh phir tum kyun

Ammu-sir haemin accha lagega

Dolly-yes sir...plzzz

KK-ok...shaam ko milte hain

(kabir looked at nisha n smirked)

KK(monologue)-nisha nhi jaanta maine yeh kyun kiya but tum raj ke saath bahar jar hi thi option nhi tha mere pass...sorry to ruined ur plan...bt i don't think m feeling bad...actually m loving it...m satisfied with the result

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my God mosiji kya awesome update tha 👏
Loving this j kabir too much 😉
Nisha now feels kk is not so khadus 😆
Finally love story started properly par wo to pehle se hi hai 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update... awesome yaar... kk is jealous ...loving it sooo much ... i m very excited for the next update...plz continue soon ...
And thanks for the pm ... 😊
Edited by A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow sonu what an update...!!👏
I'm loving this j kabiraa a lot..😳
Nishu aur Raj ke plans ko flop kar diya...😈

Lekhu the 1960 model abb kya mooh dikayegi...🤣

Ammu...! Wah...! London mein ghumegi..! dishank ke saath..😉🤣

Waiting for the next part eagerly.. Update soon sonu..
Once again awesome update...!🤗
Edited by ItsMeAarushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Sonu ( Hope I can Cal u sonu) Me Saru😉🤗
I m Newbie didnt comment on ur story till nw... Aaj comment kar rahi hu😆
(Ab sirf 8 Posts😭😆)

Par mein Hamesha follow karthi hu saare NiBir Stories n posts
Ur previous work "Aasmanom pe hai Likha" was suprb👏

This Story also is amazing 👏 (Wat If We Get MishRi Pair in such a similar story onscreen)
Abt 10 parts of the stroy I like all the parts.. Plus U r the writer who wud like to introduce ur forums friends too in ur story dats really nice dr..👏

I really liked the lst two parts more bcz we r used to see J Nisha but here We r watching J Kabir😆🤣 dat too in full form😆🤣 n BTW Raj ka kya connection hai??😉
Hmm Mujhe NiBir chahiye bass🤣🤣🤣

waise jab tumne bola tha ki tum discontinue kar rahi ho toh bura laga bt thank u dr 4 continuing the story n pls dnt ever think of discontinuing it.. We all love NiBir stories🤗
N Do Write More q ki DMM (Dil Maange More)☺️

Aaj se Like karunga sab parts ko comments aise late aayenge jab restriction hat jayega den wl surely comment tab tak Like se kaam chala lo😆😉🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg
Kabir is so devil
He ruined nisha and raj plan
Awesome update di
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
jealous KK
hardik n dishank(especially hardik saying "tera future bright hai...ammu a pata nahi🤣)
hayye hardik☺️
me and picachu

all were too good.


upd8 soon.


if u have a smartphone download "Jotter pad" or use the google docs app...I write on that..its not that difficult. try it out. then you can write.

waiting fro next part

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