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After the misunderstanding created by vasu between Nisha nd kabir bth got separated. they could nt live without each other but their ego stopped them from confessing their feelings. After completing all the formalities of divorce kabir nd vasu went back to london. Kabir went their to live his dream bt actly he went there to forget the moments he spent with Nisha. Months passed away bt he failed miserably in his attempts. He ws no longer that fun loving kabir anymore. He was jst alive nt living his life. In jaipur Nisha was working with gangwal jewellers but even she coudnt forget kabir. Viraj approached her to accept his proposal of marriage many times bt she refused him completely. She can nt even think anyone else at kabir's place so hw can she gv his plc in her heart to viraj. Each family member wanted their jugadu nisha back bt they failed. Only kabir can bring old nisha back bt hez nt here. After 8 months vasu realised her mistake of separating hez son frm his love, his nisha. She told him everything tht hw she told him wrong story abt her nd ramesh, calling Viraj at KN house, provoking kabir against nisha. After hearing all this kabir could not understand how to react, he was getting all the flashbacks, their moments together, their sweet nok-jhoks, nd then their divorce. He started crying. He was feeling helpless bcoz he lost his nisha forever. Kabir: Why did u do this mom? U used ur own son to take revenge frm gangwals. Aapne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki in sabme mera kya hoga? Me kaise jiunga nisha k bina. Vasu: Im sorry beta.. Hun badla lene k liye andhe ho gaye the humne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki iska anjam kya hoga. Kabir hume maaf kardo...humne tumhare liye jaipur ki flight book kardi hai beta plz meri bahu ko vapas leke aao Kabir: Mom ab me kis muh se waha jau,aapne sab bigad diya mom After so much of arguments kabir nd vasu goes to jaipur to take nisha wid them. Kabir in his thoughts: What if she married someone else? Kya nisha mujhe maaf kardegi? Wo bhi itna sab ho jane k baad? He was scared of the situation which may come up to his way to his nisha. At jaipur Kabir nd vasu entered gangwal house. Everyone looked shocked after seeing them, before anyone could ask something nisha enters in completely married womens avtaar ( saree, mangalsutra, sindoor, bangles etc) kabir was hell shocked seeing her like this. He thought she married someone else. He was about to go back when vasu stopped him nd said atleast say for what v hv came here. Kabir signed her tht he can nt speak nw, bt after vasu insists him he tries to speak up. Kabir: Im sorry meri vajah se aapk sabko kya kuch nahi sehna pada. Pehle samuhik vivah then 3 mahine ki shaadi nd uske baad divorce. Me nisha ko divorce nahi dena chahta tha par situation aisi ho gayi thi ki mujhe laga Nisha aaj bhi viraj se pyaar karti hai, aur mein uske aur uske pyaar k bichme nahi aana chahta tha. ( and he starts crying again) nisha im sorry fr whatever i did nd congratulations fr ur marriage.( he signs his mother to leave when he feels hand on his sholder) Ramesh: Nisha ko sath nahi le jaoge? Kabir was shocked of what he heard. Ramesh: Ha beta, nisha ne dusri shaadi nahi ki hai kyuki wo ab tak tumhe bhula nahi payi hai. Wo aaj bhi sirf tumse pyaar karti hai. Kabir: To ye simdoor nd mangalsutra wo bhi jab humara divorce ho chuka hai? Nisha: Kyu ki mein aaj bhi wo divorce ko nahi manti u duffer. Ek ppr thodi humara future decide kar sakta tha. Me kal bhi tumse pyaar karti thi nd aaj bhi karti hu...plz mujhe kabhi chodke mat jana kabir( she says in between her sobbing) Whole family nd vasu gets happy after seeing their children like dis.kabir nd nisha takes everyone's blessings nd vasu apologized to nisha fr her plottings, nisha forgave her nd they started preparation fr nibir's wedding. Yes again they were getting married nd this time permanently. After all the rituals they r again official mr & mrs kumar. Their ramantic journey started without any trouble. After one yr in london nisha gave birth to a cute little baby boy who's eyes nd nose r exactly like his dad nd smile like his mother. They named him ansh, Part of their soul, their life. He made their bond even stronger. Bt they still fights like tom nd jerry nd nw everyone is used to it even ansh will b used to it once he grow ups. hws it?? This is my first attempt in writing anything. Plz do comment. Ur criticism, rotten tomatoes, chappals everything is welcomed. -Pooja

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz comment guys, even if u dnt like plz let me knw..
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awesomeee...!!!yaar was it really your first attempt...??seriously...??it was really amazing...!!do write more on nibir yaar...waiting...!!👍🏼👏👏
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Lovely.don't lie that this is your first attempt.😉
It was simply great👍🏼
And next time pakka it must be a SS or a FF okay..like to read more frm u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnx a ton guys fr ur valuable comments and yes its my first attempt...
Was very scared to share it bt nw i can't stop myself frm dancing..
Thk u guys fr reading 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was nice! 👏
i know the excitement when someone comments or likes your story
hey! Do write this story in detail next time
i will pakka be the first one to read it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dat was a beautiful os
Would love to read more of ur work on nibir
Thnku for the pm
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It was really a beautiful os...👏Loved it. ..
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Never felt as this os was your first attempt..
loved it.. keep writing more.. 😛
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Nice OS...
Loved it...
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