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I wrote this a while back but never had the time to post😃...this basically takes place after KN and VJ comes back from GH and after Nisha enters the room after pillow fight...VJ already slept in my version 😆 so no disturbance for KN😆...so here we go i know its a bit late but since i wrote it bear with me in this and excuse my stupid hindi😆


"Yeh duffer kab sudhregha...idiot ...logon ke feelings bhi nahi samachta...maa ko kaisi lagi hogi...hum dono andhar so kar maa ko bahar couch mein...duffer kahika" Nisha continued ranting as she walked into their room. "Kuch nahi hosakta iska...yeh kabhi bhi kisika feelings nahi samach sakta...bewakoof." Her anger had no bounds today. What does he think of himself? Apne maa ko koi bahar sone ko bolthe hai kya? Aur feelings he don't understand feelings at all. Suddenly she found herself angry at him for a completely different reason. "Bewakoof hi hai ...kuch smach mein nahi aata isse...baccha hai tu bacha...aur humesha rehega bhi..."She continued as she stood removing her earrings infront of the mirror. Kabir was standing at the door listening to her rantings and looking at her.

Nisha tried to reach the back of her blouse to loosen the dori. It was very tightly tied by dolly dii and she was having extreme discomfort with it. She tried to reach the knot but it was proving to be very hard. Kabir watched her silently as she continued her futile attempts. Then with a smile he began walking towards Nisha slowly. Nisha was too busy with the knot to notice Kabir's presence. She felt electricity down her spine as Kabir's hand fell upon her naked skin. Their eyes met in the mirror as Nisha looked up letting go of the knot. The intensity of Kabir's gaze mesmerized her. She felt her skin growing hot at his touch. Without breaking the eye contact Kabir slowly reached for the knot and opened it slowly his hands brushing her bare back lightly. Nisha closed her eyes trying to suppress those feelings which she was beginning to experience. Kabir moved his hands to her shoulder and brought his face close to her ear brushing her hair.

"Kaun baccha? He asked whispering the words into her ear "aur kya nahi samachta who?"Nisha shuddered and opened her eyes only to find him standing near the door. She was about to go to him when the main light went off. But instead of it there were blue led light across the walls of the room lighting up the whole room in a mesmerizingly beautiful way. Their bedside tables were adorned with candles. The room was decorated beautifully yet had a simplicity to it. Nisha stood in the middle of the room her mouth hung open in surprise. She turned around to look at Kabir and saw him locking the room. Kabir approached Nisha slowly and took her hand in his. He led her to their bed and made her sit on it. Nisha was still staring at him in astonishment. He settled down next to her, holding on to her hand and began.

"Kaise lagi surprise? "He asked with childish excitement. Nisha began smiling at his expression and looked around the room. "this is very beautiful kabir...khoobsurat...issiliye tum insist kar rahe the ki hum andar so .."

"Haan haan...ab samach mei aayi meri maa" Kabir said cutting her off." Who kya hai naa kuch dino se tumhare saath kuch waqt bithane keliye try kar kar mei dhak chukka hun. I mean whenever I try someone will come...either tumhari cousins or tumhari baki ki family yaa meri apni maa...kuch kehna chahta hun tujhse..." Kabir said hesitantly. Nisha looked at him with anticipation.

"thank you Nisha ...for everything...agar tu nahi hota toh pata nahi..." Kabir said with emotion looking into Nisha's eyes. Nisha was a bit disappointed but she smiled at him "aur thank you...mere liye itna sab kuch jhelne keliye..."

Kabir took a deep breath and began."tumhe yaad hai jab hum pehli baar mile the..." Nisha smiled fondly at the memory. "tune mujhe hug kiya tha...aur apna pyaar ka ishara kiya tha...mein bechara...darr gaya tha kayi yeh pagal ladki mujhe rape toh nahi ..." Kabir laughed lightly and Nisha slapped his hand annoyed.

"Phir mujhe tumhe trip par mila...kya kuch nahi kiya tune mujhse chutkara pane keliye..." Kabir smiled.

" Haan lekin Tu kitna irritate kar raha tha mujhe..." Nisha said pouting and folding her hand . Kabir shook his head smiling

"phir hume chandu mila.." Nisha smiled yet again at the thought of chandu.

"Aur phir tamasha ...bhabhiji gunday goli kidnapping" Kabir sighed thinking of those events " and then..."Nisha began.

Kabir held Nisha's hands again and looked at her with a mixture of adoration and anticipation "Humari pehli jhooti shaddi...Kabhi nahi socha tha mein shaddi karunga who bhi samuhik vivah mei...ha zaroor hum uss shadi ko shaadi nahi mana...par-"

"aur phir tumhara entry into Gangwal house..." Nisha said trying to change the topic.

"Aur kya entry mara tha meine...sab impress hogaya tha mujhse...ek dum hero ki tarah.." Kabir said lifting his collar and winking at Nisha.

Nisha shook her head."oye hero ke bache ...tu kitna darr raha tha Singham ko milkar...bhool gaya?"

"Haan haan.. lekin yaar who ekdum don ki tarah baath kar raha tha ...aur yaad hai uss din jab he came to know about our shaaddi...yaar mujhe lag raha tha who hume maar daalenge. Aur tu...tu toh humesha badi bak bak karte rahate ho ...uss din kya hogaya tha tujhe..tu who who dadaji kar raha tha unke saamne...oye madam aap bhi kuch kam nahi hai" Kabir said a bit hotly

"Acha baba..woh sab chod tujhe holi yaad hai?" Nisha asked trying to cheer him up. Kabir smiled "Kaise nahi yaad hoga?...i won our bet...miss kar rahi thi naa tu mujhe just like I predicted...tujhe ek pal bhi mere bina reh nahi sakta..." Kabir said in blissful ignorance but his last line struck Nisha. She looked at Kabir who was blabbering on about holi "Kaise bathavun tujhe ki sach mei mein tere bina nahi reh sakti " Nisha said in her mind.

"Humara sangeeth yaad hai tujhe?...i made you dance ...and-" Kabir said breaking Nisha's thoughts. Nisha blushed at the memory of Kabir kissing her. He made her feel special that day. Nisha's blush was not lost to Kabir. He brought his hand to her face and brushed a stray strand of hair and brought his face close to her's.

"Aur humari Shaaddi. You know something Nisha I never thought mein shaadi karunga who bhi do do baar same ladki se." Kabir chuckled "par who kehte hai na we cannot know of what life has in store for us aur mera kismat mujhe tumhare samne khada kar diya. Nisha hum iss asli shaadi ko asli maan ne keliye tayyar nahi dhe. Kya kuch nahi kiya hum iss shaddi ko todne keliye lekin har bar hum haarte rahe par humari rishta badtha raha. Pata hai Nisha kab mujhe who choti cheese important lagne laga, morning ka fights, saath mei breakfast banana...pata hai tumhe tumhari saath coffee piye bina I can't sleep " Kabir cupped Nisha's face." Tujh se daat khaye bina ek minute bhi reh nahi sakta mein. Tumhari gaaliyan sunna meri aadat ban chuki hai. aadat ho gaya hai Roz subah tumhari face dekhne ki aur tumhare saath sone ki. Aadat ...tumhari saath ki. Aur pyaar...pyaar hua hai tujhse. I love you Nisha. I love y-

Nisha silenced Kabir with a kiss right on his lips. Kabir was shocked but kissed her back smiling. They broke of and Kabir started smiling looking at her. But then again Nisha is Nisha, full of surprises. Nisha slapped him.

"yeh kis keliye?" Kabir asked rubbing his cheek.

"itni der karne keliye...i thought u were leaving me duffer...i love you bolne mei itni der-Kabir cut her off by another kiss."ab tu bol na" Kabir said breaking the kiss

"kya bolun?" Nisha asked pretending to know nothing.

"arre who baat jo abhi abhi mein tum se kaha tha...bol na." Kabir said frustrated.

"I will think about it.." Nisha said laughing as she stood up.

"Kya matlab" Kabir asked understanding that she was in playful mood.

"matlab ab mood nah hai batane ki" Nisha tried to move away but Kabir held her hand

"toh tum nahi bataungi who baat?" Kabir asked again and Nisha shook her head laughing. Kabir smiled at her innocently and pulled her by the hand. Nisha fell on Kabir , Kabir flipped her so that he was on top of her and he began tickling her.

"Kab...kabi...kabir...chod ...chod na yaar...ok ...fine I..i will say " Nisha said in between laughs. Kabir stopped tickling her for a moment.

"Kabhi nahi socha tha ki tujh jaise duffer se shaddi hoga aur yeh sab karni padegi...par kya kare shaddi bhi tujhse hui aur pyaar...pyaar bhi tujhse hua ...mein tujhse bahuth pyaar karti hun Kabir... i love you too " Kabir looked at her adoringly.

"ek baat poochun?" he asked looking into her eyes

"Kya ?" Nisha almost whisphered

"Now that you loveme...tumhari chocolates jo tumne fridge pe rekha tha...kya who mei le sakta hun please?" Kabir asked making an innocent face.

"Kabbbirr...tu kitna K ho" Nisha screamed and Kabir's laughter echoed throughout the room

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hayee.. Ek OS main sare flashbacks aa gaye ..
It was so good Lachu
But I love the chocolate ka twist 🤣 🤣
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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awesome lachu👏😆
tum aur romance?😆😆😆
loved the confession-so nibirish😆
continue writing😉

edit:oops i wrote the wrong name😆😆😆
Edited by anulovessarun - 10 years ago
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beautiful os!!
everyone here r gud a romantic stuff!! 😆
chocolate ending was gud!! 🤣

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Superb yaar... I loved it... actually i am niraj fan bt I liked ur os... Awesome... 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: -Lachu-

res ki bache😡🤣

anu ki bachi😡🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

Hayee.. Ek OS main sare flashbacks aa gaye ..

It was so good Lachu
But I love the chocolate ka twist 🤣 🤣


i wish we had confession for real soon

thank u for liking it...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anulovessarun

awesome lachu👏😆

tum aur romance?😆😆😆
loved the confession-so nibirish😆
continue writing😉

edit:oops i wrote the wrong name😆😆😆


why so surprised ...i am romantic when the situation demands...maybe sucks at originality😆😆

i saw the edit😡😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prachiii

Superb yaar... I loved it... actually i am niraj fan bt I liked ur os... Awesome... 👍🏼


thank u for liking it😊
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Loved it lachu.. 😳
Nisha's slap and kabiraa wants chocolate.. 😆
I hope we get Nibir confession soon.. 😭
Keep writing more

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