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Posted: 10 years ago
Mansi unres ed on pg 108 &118 😆
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan



UNRES NO: 27😆

Mansi Finally Unres ng the Third post on ur stry

Sorry dr 4 making u wait so long 4 My 3 unres😆🤣

Abt the update It was awesome..👏👏👏

Apart frm niBir u highlighted other bonds too.. 👏RajBir & My Favzz ie RaKa & KL Bond

Loved Kabir's Thoughts at the start abt RajBir👏👏👏 @Red This line was my fav😳

Viraj left the room and
kabir lie down thinking about this strange relation of him and viraj. How strange
it had been since they met. There was that instant connection between them. How
easily he could click it up with viraj. How caring and understanding viraj had
been. He had so much respect for him, the way he had reacted in that awkward
situation when they have met for the first time. The way he introduced him to
the cousins and now to rest of the gangwal family. The way he say his heart out
in front of him make viraj an amazing person. His concern for him, when kabir
was hospitalised. He simply adore this
special bond of them. <font color="#FF0000">Destiny although somewhat late but had given him a big
brother in real sense. He smiled at his thoughts and thanked god for all of
this.

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<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">I was expecting NiBir meeting at night as I mentioned in my previous comment 4 Chapter 25 & U surprised me with Kirti-Aashu meeting😲😆🤣

Loved Kabir's K Dialogue..</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣 esp @Red</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font>

" Are yaar... tm dno
ko romance karna h to bahar jao na... <font color="#FF0000">mjh bechare bimaar aadmi p kyu atyachaar
kar rhe ho</font> " kabir said switching on the night lamp.

KL scene was also Nicely written.. Loved Kabir's Funny antics😉😆<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣

So.. Kabira's Jaadu Sab par cha gaye Sirf Singham ke Aka Dadu ke..😉</font></font><font color="#000000">🤣</font><font color="#000000">🤣</font><font color="#000000">🤣</font><font color="#000000">🤣

RaKa Bonding & Talk & Hugs Awwieee Awesomly written👏👏👏
@Red Aww... Aww.. Aww.</font><font color="#000000"></font><font color="#000000"></font><font color="#000000"></font>


He was standing at the terrace in the middle of
the night when someone placed his hand on his shoulder. He turned and saw
ramesh smiling at him. " Kisi baat ko lke pareshan h kabir.." he
asked. " <font color="#FF0000">Kuch nhi uncle... bus yu hi" he said. " Kuch kehna h to
keh sakta h kabir" he said assuring him. Kabir looked at him. " Uncle
m feeling like m betraying everyone here... they had given me so much of luv
and made me a part of their life but when they will come to know about me and
nisha... what will they think... they would judge me for being mean. I don't
want to hurt them specially laxmi maa" he said all gloomy. Ramesh smiled
at him. " U aren't betraying anyone kabir... u r just making a good
relationship with everyone... that too because u wanted to warna tm nisha ko
lke ja sakte the kyuki she is viraj's wife now and viraj has understood the
situation well... is parivar ki manjuri lene ki tmhe koi jarurat nhi thi. Par
tm yha aae... itna sab kuch kia... kyuki that mattered to you beta and thats
enough... if they know you they will understand it" ramesh said. "
Sach pa... sorry uncle" kabir said in a small voice. " U can call me
papa kabir... " he said smiling at his innocence.
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<font color="#FF0000">" Sachhi..." kabir asked delighted
and hugged ramesh as he nodded a yes. He was beyond happy today because he got
what he yearned for years I.e. a love and understanding of a father.
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<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">Finally Mansi I thought U forgot abt NiBir Meeting.. thank God Dolly ki dimaag + Cousins ki help se I m soo Excited 4 NiBir Meeting
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<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">Abt NiBir Meeting- Bas Blush karna hai Mujhe Samaj liyo Mansi☺️ Samaj gayi nah??</font></font><font color="#000000">🤣</font><font color="#000000">🤣</font>


Do Write More🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆<font color="#000000">🤣</font><font color="#000000">🤣</font><font color="#000000">🤣</font>

tu blush kare na kare... awww to jarur karegi baki next update k baad
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Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res

UNRES NO:25😆 Silver Jubilee Of My Unres Mission🤣🤣🤣

Awesome Update Mansi👏👏👏 Loved it...
Ramesh- Nisha Scene made me remind My real life incidents When Me & My Papa Talk..😳
I m My Pap's Girl & He is My Best Friend❤️
(Ramesh papa was wrong... I believe Papas r Beti's Best Friends❤️)

Quoating my fav parts..😳

Nisha sat beside him. He looked thoroughly at her, her gloomy face was saying her plight. He
couldn't bear to see her like that. His heart squeezed painfully, he felt like
his life was leaving his body. <font color="#FF0000">He pulled her into his chest and hugged her
tightly</font>. <font color="#FF0000">She couldn't control herself, she know he is her solace. She cried...
cried her heart out. </font>" Kabirr... papa... papa... ko...kitna dukh dia
maine... mai bhot buri hu kabir... vo...vo... kabhi itne udas nhi hue... sab
meri wajah se... aaj tak... maine unhe kabhi rote hue nhi dekha... par aaj
meri wajah se unki aankho m aansu aae... mai unka happy wala gaana thi kabir
par... maine hi unhe itna hurt kia... mai kaise sab thik karu kabir... kaise..."
she cried harder. With her every tear his pain was increasing manifolds. He
know what it meant when you can't talk to ur father. He knew that pain very
well. " Shhh... nisha... stop crying... all will be ok... m with you
always... I will talk to ur father"
kabir tried to pacify her. Her cries had now
turned into her sobs but she was still in his arms. " I know this is all
because of me... I will correct it... I promise u that I will" kabir said.
<font color="#660099">His words tugged at her heart. She looked at him...hurt. " how could you
say that... I don't regret loving u kabir... u aren't responsible for this...
its me who have messed it up... u r the best thing that had ever happened to
me... don't u ever blame yourself for anything" she said looking in his
eyes. He smiled lightly at her " but I still want to talk to him " he
said. " Sirf ek shart p... u won't blame yourself... promise me" she
said. " Ok my jaan... I won't... but u promise you won't hurt yourself
more by crying like this.." he said. " Promise" she said. He
hugged her once again and kissed her eyes</font>
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@Red Aww.. Such a Cute & Strong Bond NiBir Share.. 😳Adorable Loved it..👏👏👏

@Violet They care eachother So Welll again well written Mansi👏👏👏

NiBir KISS☺️😳 & The Hug

<font color="#FF0099">Nisha closed her eyes firmly and waited for
whatever is going to come. He smiled at her and leaned over her. She can sense
what is coming back to her. She waited with a hold breath, when his lips
touched hers. Softly he kissed her... trying to take all her pain. Nisha let a
lone tear escape through her eye. She can feel his unconditional love for her
and she kissed him back. He smiled between the kiss and broke apart before he
goes further. He kissed away her tears. She opened her eyes smiling. She didn't
shy away from him because she isn't needed to be. He is what she has yearned
for years. She thanked god for giving her kabir.

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<font color="#FF0099"><font color="#000000">@Pink Mansi.. 🤗Kya batavu yaar.. U made me Blush, U made me Aww, U made me Dream, U made me Love more & more NiBir In this just one para... 😳Ur words & Writing Skills I tell U Magical yaar👏

Loved it To the Core👏
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Kabir was rt he has Magical Powers..😉😆🤣

Loved Ramesh- Kabir Convo..👏👏👏 again wonderfully written..👏👏👏

<font color="#3300CC">" Uncle... I know u are angry on nisha and I think one of
its reason is me. But uncle please forgive her... she doesn't do anything
wrong. I know what it meant when you can't talk to ur father. I know what she
is going through now. I didn't saw my father ever uncle... I have always felt
that void engulfing me. There was no one when I needed my father in my life. I
have always seen my mom trying to be my father too. But she had responsibility
of our survival. I was alone... no one was their when I first tripped from my
cycle to catch me. No one was there when some boys try to bully me... no one
was there when I bunked my classes for dance rehearsals..." kabir wasn't
looking at ramesh anymore. He was somewhere else. With every word his heart was gripping in
pain. Ramesh was looking at him reading every expression of his. He can his
pain and felt bad for the poor boy. " Nisha loves u very much uncle... she
can't bear ur silence... I know u r hurt but u too need to listen to her... I
know its hard to forgive us but pls give a thought to it" kabir said
trying to read his expressions. Ramesh was still lookong at him with a no. Of
emotions readable at his face.

<font color="#000000">@Blue each word is stressing Kabir's pain & cravings for his father😭😭😭 so emotional & U wrote it so well dat it just passed to my heart😭😭 juss hope RaKa soon came & Kabir"Papa" bole "uncle" se 😃😃😃

Last part where Nisha- Ramesh Convo too I loved it👏👏👏 again reminded me my real life😃

Awesome Update Mansi..👏👏👏
Thanks 4 PM..😳 Sorry 4 Late Comments😳
Do write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆</font></font><font color="#3300CC"><font color="#000000">🤣
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awww thanks saru yaar... u made me aww on my own writing
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res 4 chap 25😆

UNRES NO: 26😆

Mansi Suprb Update again yaar👏👏👏

So.. 😳Finally Viraj & Ramesh made GF to agree 4 Kabir's stay at GH👏👏👏

Kirti-Aashu talks so cute😆🤣

Loved NiBir Scenes again bcz U wrote it so intense & Well dat i can see them B4 My eyes👏👏👏

@Bold Liked Nishu's Thoughts while Kabir was sleeping...😳

" thank u bhagwan ji... kuch jyada bura nhi hone
dia aapne.. ise kuch ho jta to pta nhi mai kaise jinda rehti... I couldn't
imagine my existence without him... he is my reason.to live... ye to hai hi
bander... bilkul akal nhi h isme... par pls bhagwanji aap isko kabhi kuch mat
hone dena " she was still in same
position when kabir wake up.<font color="#FF0000"> He admired
her beauty as she was busy in her thoughts.
Her touch was so soothing that his pain was vanishing.

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<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">@Red Juss Wow.. Mansi loved the sentence.. 👏 gud use of words👍🏼

Kabira 😡 tera Prank Made Nishu Cry nahh😭😡 apne pranks par kabo rakh SYS😡😆

Loved the way Aashu- kirti helped NiBir to patch up👏👏👏

NiBir patch up scene made me agin go Awww😳 Mansi How do u write so well??👏
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@Red I was Juss Awww.. Aww... & Aww...

Nisha got blank at what has happened to kabir. She rushed
inside and saw kabir in pain. " kya hua kabir... tu thik h na... kha
dard
ho rha h... bhot jor se dard ho rha h kya... doctor ko bulau...doo" she
couldn't shout as kabir covered her mouth with his hand. " <font color="#FF0000">Shhh... mera
ilaaj doc nhi sirf tu kar sakti h..." he said. Her eyes got widened as
he
turned her around with such a force that she landed straight on his
chest. She
lost herself in those dark brown pools of love. She was half on the bed
lying
on top of kabir. " bhot dard ho rha h nisha... esa lag rha h jaise jaan
hi
nikal jaegi meri..." he said in an intense voice. " kha dard ho rha h
Kabir" she was still in her trance. " Yha... mere dil m" he
indicated towards his heart. "Tera dil jo dukhaya h... tjhe bola tha
maine
tera har aansu mjhe kitna tadpata h" he said without breaking the
eyelock.
" mjhe pta h nisha... tu bahar ro rhi thi... m sorry nisha... mai bus
majak kar rha tha... tjhe lgta h tere ilawa mai kisi k baare m soch bhi
sakta
hu... " he asked her softly. " waise bhi dunia ki sabse sundar ladki
to mjhe pyaar karti h fir mjhe kisi ur ko dekhne ki kya jarurat h" he
said
pinching her nose adorably. " Tujhse jyada ur kuch nhi chahie mjhe...
because u complete me... my beautiful angel
" kabir said kissing her eyes.</font> <font color="#FF0000">She saw him with a look that contains all
her love care and respect for him. She was overwhelmed by her own
emotions so
she just rested her head on his chest with a dreamy smile and a content
look at
her face. Kabir smiled and kept her close to himself. </font>" kabir... "
she said after some time which felt like eternity. " Hmmm " kabir
replied. " khana nhi khana h...
medicine ka time ho rha h" she said. " Hmmm " kabir replied and
tighten his grip on her. " Are mjhe chhod kabir... " she said. "
Achha thik h..chhod dunga par tu bhi to kha le... dekh kirti ur ashish
tere lie
khana lekar aae hai" he said and try to sit. " Dno sath khaenge...
" she said and held his plate while kabir held nisha's plate. <font color="#FF0000">They both
start feeding each other.They both kept talking for a long time and
didn't realise when sleep took over them. Kabir held her hand close to
himself while she kept her head on his arm. A smile was lingering on
their faces which reflect the satisfaction and feeling of being complete
with each other.</font>

I m giving My NiBir & their Cute Relationship A KAALA TEEKA☯️ (Sab Buri nazar se bachaye)

Finally Kabir is at GH... U knw Mansi I like Love stories where Aashiqzz chup chup ke milthe hai Ghar walom ke nzar se bachthe.. Functions ke beech.. U knw Wat I meant to say😉😆🤣

Mansi pls Yaar aise scenes GH main bhi NiBir ke saath kar dena..🤣

Do write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣



😳 I will certainly if I will get so much of cute comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was an awesome update mansi u have made me addicted to this ff.Do update the next part very very soon waiting for it eagerly. And ya loving RajBir and LaKa 😊
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Mansi I will try to unreserve my post by tom 😊 Also I will be really busy for d next two-three weeks now so won't be able to comment. But will try and read all ur updates 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Mansi I will try to unreserve my post by tom 😊 Also I will be really busy for d next two-three weeks now so won't be able to comment. But will try and read all ur updates 😃

its ok mihika... but jaldi waapas aana... u know how much I wait for your comments
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Originally posted by: Suhani_12

This was an awesome update mansi u have made me addicted to this ff.Do update the next part very very soon waiting for it eagerly. And ya loving RajBir and LaKa 😊

awww thanks suhani... I will update real soon
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Chapter - 27

Next morning was full of chaos in gangwal house as saurav has planned a trip to mandir for all the elders and they had a tough time convincing them especially dadaji. " the mandir is 100 km far so we have time till today's evening as they won't be back till then" saurav told to the gang as they gathered in dolly's room. "Nisha and kabir should be in their rooms till all of them leave... ok" dolly said. " I will take care of that" kirti said. " Good... jwalu and umesh bhaiya help me na... half of the things are packed and half are still lying... they have to leave in half an hour" dolly said. The cousins did their packing and called a mini bus for them. " dolly u too come with us na... and call nishu too" vimla said. " Are nhi mummy hm bhi chale jaenge to kabir ka dhyaan kaun rakhega..." she said innocently. " Thik h beta... u all take care... hm log shaam tak aa jaenge" mohan said. They bid good bye to the gang and left.
" yuhooo... half of the work done... just half is left..." jwalu jumped. " Yesss... nooo" sukku'S reaction changed. " are kya hua..." saurav asked. " Yaar maa... vo to school gyi h na... " he said. " Koi baat nhi ramesh chachu h na unhe sambhal lenge..." umesh told them that he had talked to ramesh about it early morning. " tab thik h...chalo baaki ki tyari kare" saurav said.

" Kya yaar kirti kab se is kamre m band kar rkha h... bahar jaane de na..." kabir said. " Are chale jna mna thodi na kia h..bus thodi der ur fir u r free" she said. " Offo..." he got irritated and lied down again. " Fula lo muh jitna fulana h... abhi thodi der m pta chalega" she thought and smiled. Here nisha was constantly banging her door. " Dekho ab room khol do nhi to saari haddiya tod dungi" nisha was getting angry but no one was listening to her.

" All set... " sukku asked. " Yes " jwalu said. " Jao dno ko leke aao" he said. Bunty ran towards nisha's room and opened the door. " Bunty k bachhe tu h... itti der se mai chilla rahi hu to sunai nhi deta tjhe" she screamed. " Are maine thodi kia h... sukku bhaiya ne..." bunty said. " Kha h sukku... bta mjhe aaj to sach m jaan le lungi uski" she hissed.
" Dolly di k kamre m" he said and ran towards dolly's room.
Kirti opened kabir's room." Jail time over... now follow me... dolly di bula rhi h" kabir looked at her in complete annoyance. " Bachhu iska badla to mai lke rahunga" he said and left with her. " Dekhenge" she said.
Both nisha and kabir entered into dolly's room at the same time and found it beautifully decorated. " Kisi ka bday h kya" both asked in unison. " Nhi... bus chhoti si rooms party" dolly said. " Rooms nhi dolly di room ur ye room party kya hoti h... nya invention h kya" nisha asked. " Are tm logo ko party se matlab h ya nhi" umesh said. " Sab bade bahar gye h to hmne socha thodi masti ho jae waise bhi kabir ki welcome party to hui hi nhi na" sukku said. " Ha chalo guys... lets begin the fun" saurav said. They all get seated in a circle. While sitting kabir pulled nisha towards him and she landed straight on his chest. The magic appears again and a beautiful eyelock begin making them getting loat in each others love. Jwalu saw them and coughed nisha broke the trance, she started moving away when kabir pulled her again "kabir chhod na tjhe lag jaegi yaar... abhi thik nhi hua h tu.." "nhi... tu door rhti h to ur dard hota h nisha... bina tere mai thik kaise hounga" he made a cute baby face and tucked her stranded hairs behind her ear lovingly. She looked at him with love and quickly gave him a tight hug which go unnoticed by others " m always here for you kabir... ". Kabir pulled her and this time she seated against him resting her head on his shoulder. Jwalu saw this and coughed again but this time kabir glared at her "jwalu tu cough syrup kyu nhi le leti" everyone stared at them and then at jwalu. They understood what he said and bursted out laughing. Kabir winked at jwala while she made faces at him. Finally they started playing games. "Chalo cushion pass karo yaar jaldi jaldi..." saurav said.They had a lot of fun together. Music stopped and turned out to be in sukku'S hand. " Sukku to dance karega aaj" kirti said. " Yes... sukku bhaiya will dance " jwalu said. " Mai... paagal h kya" he said. " Kyu darr gya kya. ." Umesh chuckled. " Mai nhi darta... abhi batata hu" he said and got up to turn on the stereo.


Rule saare break karo
Jo kabhi na kiya wo karo
Party karne ka mood bane toh
Weekend ka na wait karo

Sukku started dancing like he is a star in the middle of the circle in a typical bollywood style. All were watching in amazement.

Rule saare break karo
Jo kabhi na kiya wo karo
Party karne ka mood bane toh
Weekend ka na wait karo

Now saurav got up and joined sukku in his unique style. All started clapping.

Arey common yeh sabke vichar hune chahiye
Hafte mein chaar shanivaar hone chahiye
Hafte mein chaar shanivaar hone chahiye
Shanivaar bole to Saturday
Wo bhi chaar chaar

Umesh got up too and they started dancing like there is no tomorrow.

Kabhi aisa bhi ho suraj chhuti pe ho
Ghadi ke kaante mutthi mein hon
In the lambi Limo full-on masti bhi ho
Saath mein hot beauty bhi ho
Are speaker ka volume hazaar hona chahiye
Hafte mein char shaniwar hone chahiye
Hafte mein char shaniwar hone chahiye

Kirti and dolly too got up and showed some grooves of theirs. Jwalu joined them too.

Maine kaha party karo
Kehna kyun nahi maante
Jeene ke din hote hain
Bas chaar insaan ke
Sharmana aur ghabrana
Yeh dono cheeze chhod do
Rules aur dance floor
Ye dono cheeze tod do

Bunty got up like rapping the words while nibir laughed their heart out at his cute act. Others continued their dance.

Jab ye gana bajega to
Automatically hi tu dance karega
Kaan ke niche de dunga
Jo kabhi faltu bakwaas karega
Jisne party nahi karni
They can go to hell
But your boy is in the house
Baby all is well
C'mon.. All is Well!

Sukku and saurav rapped while umesh act as if slapping them. They pulled kabir and nisha in to their madness.

Saal ke yaar gin 365 din
52 hi shanivar hai
Kar calendar ko flush
Chhod de saare rush
Din jawani ke bas chaar hai
Worldwide yahi prachar hona chahiye
Hafte mein char shaniwar hone chahiye
Hafte mein char shaniwar hone chahiye

They danced like maniacs. They were dancing like no one's watching. Nisha and kabir enjoyed to their hearts content. At last the song ended so their dance with loud noise of cheering.
All fall back to their position out of breath. " Wah yaar kya dance kia" nisha said. " Kyu kabir... hu na mai rockstar" sukku said. " Ha bhai tu to superstar nikla" kabir said. " chalo lets continue the games na" dolly said. " Games nhi game dolly di" everyone said. " Achha thik h na" dolly said and they all laugh out loud. " Chalo passing start karo..." n they started passing the cushion while umesh controlled the music. Dolly signalled umesh to stop the music when cushion was in kabir's hand. " ahannn ab kabir ko kya karna padega" umesh said. " ye... yeh nishu k lie gana gayega.. thik h na nishu " saurav said winking at nisha. " Yaar gaana... gaana kaise gaunga mai..." kabir said horrified. " Ab to gana hi padega... " every one said. " Gana... gana...gana..." they started shouting. " Achha thik h " kabir said and stood up. Nisha hit her head at this.

Haal-e-Dil ko sukoon chahiye
Poori ik aarzoo chahiye
Jaise pehle kabhi kuch bhi chaaha nahi
Waise hi kyun chahiye

Kabir started singing looking at nisha with an intense look. Nisha blushed hard and lowered her gaze. Kabir walked towards her and held his hand for her.

Dil ko teri mojoodgi ka ehsaas yun chahiye
Tu chahiye, tu chahiye
Shaam-o-subah tu chahiye
Tu chahiye.. Tu chahiye..
Har martabaa Tu chahiye

Nisha gave her hand to him and he pulled her onto himself. He started twirling her around him.

Jitni daffaaa jid ho meri
Utni daffaaa tu chahiye

He held her against himself and started his perfect moves having her with him.


All the cousins look at them in awe. Dolly signalled everyone to leave the room and they left for the terrace. Here kabir and nisha were so lost in each other that they didn't noticed anything.

Koi aur dooja kyun mujhe
Na tere siva chahiye
Har safar mein mujhe
Tu hi rehnuma chahiye
Jeene ko bas mujhe
Tu hi meherbaan chahiye

Ho..Seene mein agar tu dard hai
Na koi dawaa chahiye
Tu lahu ki tarah
Ragon mein rawaan chahiye
Anjaam jo chaahe mera ho
Aagaaz yun chahiye

Kabir and nisha were dancing pouring their emotions. Nisha was matching his fast pace steps with perfection. Kabir pushed her and pulled her again spinning her throughout.

Tu chahiye, tu chahiye
Shaam-o-subah tu chahiye
Tu chahiye.. tu chahiye..
Har martabaa tu chahiye
Jitni dafaa.. zidd ho meri
Utni dafaa.. haan, tu chahiye

Nibir were swiftly waving in each others arms when kabir pushed her again bending her with his arm support and pulled with such a force that nisha has to clutch his arm to stop falling on him.


Mere zakhmon ko teri chhuan chahiye
Meri shamma ko teri agan chahiye
Mere khwaab ke aashiyane mein tu chahiye
Main kholun jo aankhein sirhane bhi tu chahiye

He sang the last words with his love reflecting in his voice. They stopped dancing and were standing still in each others embrace lost in their own world when nisha suddenly felt something hot and sticky trickling through her hand. She broke the eyelock to see what was it. Soon her vision got blurred from her tears and her heart squeezed in pain as she saw blood oozing out from kabir's wound. She had clutched on it so hard that it opened up again. Kabir's eye followed her gaze and he hit himself mentally for making her cry once again. " Nisha... its just a wound... rone ki kya baat h yaar" he said. She looked at him with pain in her eyes and hugged him tightly. All her helplessness which was stabbing her till now is now out in open. She tried hard to control her tears from falling and left him immediately baffling kabir. She returned in a second with a first aid box placed in dolly's room. " Idhar baith jaldi se..." she made him sit and knelt down in front of him. Nisha started tending his wound with utmost care. Kabir was smiling throughout the procedure. Whenever he flinched, a pain gripped her heart.she tried her best to soothe his pain. " m so sorry kabir... meri wajah se tjhe itna dard hua... mjhe bhi dhyaan rkhna chahie tha ki tu abhi tk thik nhi hua h poori tarah.." she said. He smiled at her and made her look into his eyes " tune choo lia na ab dekhna kitni jaldi thik ho jaega... ur agar tu ese hi mera khayal rakhegi na... to mai roj apne hath pair tudwa k aaunga..." kabir said. She smiled at him " Oe... tu uski fikar mat kar... ek baar sabko sab kuch pta chal gya... to kya pta tera ye sapna yhi poora ho jae " she giggled. " Tu dra rhi h mjhe... thik h mai ja rha hu phir" kabir said and try to stand. " Oe mjhe chhodke chala jaega " she said with sad face. " he! I was just joking yaar... tujhe chhodke ja sakta hu mai kabhi... tu to meri parrot ban gyi h" he said hugging her. " mai tjhe parrot jaisi dikhti hu.." she said looking up at him frowning. " Are gussa mat ho baat to sun le... jaise purani kahanio m har kisi ki jaan ek tote m hoti thi na... waise hi meri jaan tjhme hai nisha.." he said. She looked at him in awe. " tjhse door to mai kabhi ja hi nhi sakta na... warna zinda kaise rahunga... kuch bhi ho jae nisha I will never leave you... I will take u away with me for forever." He said. She just hugged him again without leaving a bit of space between them. He too closed his eyes and reciprocated with same intensity.

A pair of eyes were watching them with disbelief. Those eyes had witnessed their love from their longing for each other to the care and concern they have for each other. An expression of confusion, hurt and happiness arises in them. Suddenly someone put a hand on the figure's shoulder making it turn and held it's hand.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Kya dance kiya hai sabne👏🤣

Tu Chahiye...
Hum bhi sirf NiBir chahiye..
Ohoo.. Nisha 90's ki heroines ki tarah hamesha roti kyun hai
RL watching them😲
Rammy will take care of Relax-me😆
continue soon😉
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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