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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maniwood

Awesome update👏

Loved it
Nibir kiss☺️
Raka and rn bonding👍🏼

😳 thanks mansi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally I m updating my comments😆
Chapter-24-Beautiful Chapter Mansi👏👏
The Nisha-Ramesh scene was very nice and so touching😳 U described Ramesh-Nisha's emotions so well👍🏼
The cousins comforting Kabir was nice. Kabira worried for his Nisha even in this state was adorable 😳
The Nibir scene at the hospital was beautiful and surreal. Have no words to describe it👏
Nisha sat beside him. He looked thoroughly at her, her gloomy face was saying her plight. He couldn't bear to see her like that. His heart squeezed painfully, he felt like his life was leaving his body. He pulled her into his chest and hugged her tightly. She couldn't control herself, she know he is her solace- Love these lines ❤️ THEY ARE SOULMATES😳

She cried... cried her heart out. " Kabirr... papa... papa... ko...kitna dukh dia maine... mai bhot buri hu kabir... vo...vo... kabhi itne udas nhi hue... sab meri wajah se... aaj tak... maine unhe kabhi rote hue nhi dekha... par aaj meri wajah se unki aankho m aansu aae... mai unka happy wala gaana thi kabir par... maine hi unhe itna hurt kia... mai kaise sab thik karu kabir... kaise..." she cried harder. With her every tear his pain was increasing manifolds. He know what it meant when you can't talk to ur father. He knew that pain very well. " Shhh... nisha... stop crying... all will be ok... m with you always... I will talk to ur father"

kabir tried to pacify her. Her cries had now turned into her sobs but she was still in his arms. " I know this is all because of me... I will correct it... I promise u that I will" kabir said. His words tugged at her heart. She looked at him...hurt. " how could you say that... I don't regret loving u kabir... u aren't responsible for this... its me who have messed it up... u r the best thing that had ever happened to me... don't u ever blame yourself for anything" she said looking in his eyes. He smiled lightly at her " but I still want to talk to him " he said. " Sirf ek shart p... u won't blame yourself... promise me" she said. " Ok my jaan... I won't... but u promise you won't hurt yourself more by crying like this.." he said. " Promise" she said. He hugged her once again and kissed her eyes- Beautuful indeed😳 These lines describe Nibir relationship so well and why Nibir are perfect for each other😳❤️

Nibir are each other's support, life and much more😳 Both of them comforting each other

" U took ur medicine" she enquired. " What medicine... abhi to khae thi 2 ghante pehle" kabir said. " Kabir... u have to take it in every two hours" she said. " no... I don't want to... pls nisha" he replied. She glared at him and took medicine and a glass of water in her hand. " Take this kabir.." she tried to give him the medicine. " No nisha... I hate medicine pls... na pls... pretty please" he made a baby face. " Koi trick kaam nhi karegi kabir... chup chap khale warna mai khilau" she tried to suppress her laugh. " Nhi khaunga..." he said. " thik hai mat kha... mai bhi ja rhi hu... bandar khi ka... ab toote hue hath pair lke ghumega na to pta chalega... kuwa khi ka " nisha said. " Oe..." kabir's word never came out as nisha stuffed medicines in his mouth and made him drink the water. He didn't get time to react. She looked at him with a winning smile. " Cheater khi ki... " kabir said angrily and turned his face away. Nisha chuckled at his antics and pulled hid face towards herself " are mere cutie baby... gussa mat ho na" she said pulling his cheek. Kabir was still angry. "Offo kabir sorry na... achha bol kya karu jo bolega vhi karungi" she said. He looked at her with a naughty glint in his eyes. " Achha.. to thik h... close ur eyes now" kabir said. " Kyu... kya karega" she asked. " Maarunga tjhe" kabir said. " Sachhi.." she asked with an haaww expression. " Nisha tu chahti h na mai aage bhi dwai khau to jo bola h vo kar" he said. " Ohk... par iske baad tu pakka time se dwa lega" she asked again. " Promise " kabir said. Nisha closed her eyes firmly and waited for whatever is going to come. -The medicine scene was tooo cute😳 Nibir are beyond adorable😳 Nisha's haww, kabir's pretty pls😆


He smiled at her and leaned over her. She can sense what is coming back to her.She waited with a hold breath, when his lips touched hers. Softly he kissed her... trying to take all her pain. Nisha let a lone tear escape through her eye. She can feel his unconditional love for her and she kissed him back. He smiled between the kiss and broke apart before he goes further. He kissed away her tears. She opened her eyes smiling. She didn't shy away from him because she isn't needed to be. He is what she has yearned for years. She thanked god for giving her kabir.- My favorite part in the chapter. Loved it sooo much 🤗 So Romantic☺️ Hayyee😳☺️

Ramesh Kabir conversation was so heart-rendering ❤️ Loved it🤗 Kabir opening his heart in front of Ramesh and telling him about the void of not having a father in his life was so touching😳 and Ramesh empathizing with him was commendable👍🏼

Rajbir convo was also very nice😃
pta nhi aap hme itna kaise samjhte h.." he wondered. " Kabir k pass magical powers h bade bhaiya..." kabir chuckled at his own words. " Aap bilkul paagal h kabir" viraj shook his head.- Kabir ka charm😉

Ramesh - Nisha convo again was beautiful.
"par aap hi kehte h na papa ki jo hota h achhe k lie hi hota h... agar mai jaane ka faisla na leti to shayad mjhe kabhi kabir nhi milta... mjhe kabir mila h papa... ur uske sath sabkuch mil gya jo maine kabhi chaha tha... aap hi kehte h na pyaar karna sabse khoobsurat hota h... to phir aap mjhse kyu naraj h papa... mjhe vo hi mila h jo mere lie sabse best h... ha bus thoda timing galat ho gya" she said and chuckled at her own words. Ramesh looked at her. Her words were her heart's reflection. "- U can the see the love Nisha has for Kabir in the way she talks about him She was not ashamed but proud and happy of the fact that she met Kabir, the love of her life😳

Mansi u have penned down Ramesh-Nisha-Kabir's thoughts so well👏👏👏

" kabir... I know u two love each other.. n I can see that... I can see my daughter happy... happy in a way which I have always wished for... I always wanted her to be loved in a way which she truly deserve. Now I know she is right... right in falling in love with you... right in keep this going. I have always done what is best for my children and today too I will do that only... I know now u r best for my daughter... m with you two in this battle of yours" he said smiling and put his hand on Kabir's head. Nisha and kabir's happiness was at a whole new level. " thanks papa.. thank u very much" nisha hugged ramesh. Ramesh ruffled her hair lovingly. Kabir too smiled " thank u uncle... I will never let you down"- Aww cuteness overload😳😳 Big jhappi to u from my side 🤗

Ramesh smiled and hugged him, he didn't knew why he had trust on this boy "- perfect ending😳

In all, loved it thoroughly ❤️

Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Nice update ...
Loved it ... 😳
Continue soon n thanks for the pm ... 😊

thanks buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Res😆

I have a feeling i will update my comment on chapter 24 tom only😆Lets see😉😃
Too lazy to comment again😆
Will read d update again in d meantime😆

m waiting 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Suhani_12

Its osm read all the parts in one go really loved it ,It took about 30 min but worth reading :)

thanks suhani... thanku sooo much 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways

aww awesome update yaar mansi

loved eacha nd every bit of it
nibir was as always awesome, cute and caring
luved the raka part u highlighted kabir's pain very beautifully and the nisha ramesh part stole the show
waiting for the next part
ritika

😳 thanks ritika... I always adore rnk bond
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update ⭐️
NiBir 😳
Raka and RajBir rock 😃
Update soon... 😊
Edited by Itsmeriya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

it was so heart touching...I just loved it...nibir n Ramesh part was so beautifully narrated...u r really really a fab writter...ty for writing such an awesome story

😳 thank u yaar for such a lovely comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Itsmeriya

Res
Will comment tomorrow 😆

😃 😆 m waiting riya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome👍🏼
NiBir😳..
Raka and NR scene was nice😃...
update soon😊

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