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Posted: 10 years ago
one more amazing update ...it was awesome nibir and ashu part was really cute n rajbir part was so nicely written loved it
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

one more amazing update ...it was awesome nibir and ashu part was really cute n rajbir part was so nicely written loved it

awww thanks yaar...
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most welcome
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all the parts together I like the story it's very different. Waiting to know how nisha's family will react to this.
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Read all the parts together I like the story it's very different. Waiting to know how nisha's family will react to this.


awww... thanks😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter - 21

Kabir and ashish has just packed up their stuff and was heading towards viraj's home. "Tjhe yaad hai na tjhe aaj kuch kehna h" kabir said to ashish. " Kya kehna h...kisse"he asked. " Oo bhole insan... jyada natak mat kar... agar tu nhi bola na to mai ur nisha dhol bja k sabko bta denge fir soch lena sab tera kya haal karenge" he said smirking. " You're blackmailing me??" Ashish said. " Yes my dear friend " kabir said. Ashish glared at him but kabira smirked. " What the hell yaar" ashish hissed. " Are bol k to dekh... hell heaven ho jaega" kabir winked at him. Ashish shook his head.

"Bade bhaiya... " kabir called out for viraj who was still in his study. " Kabir... aao ander" he said. " Bade bhaiya mai ja rha hu.." kabir said. " Jaa rhe ho... itni jaldi... nisha ki family se baat..." viraj was cut off by kabir. " Janta hu bade bhaiya par kaam h islie jana padega... par aap se kuch puchu" kabir asked. " Ha kabir" viraj said. " Kya faisla kiya aapne" kabir asked. " Kuch nhi..." viraj said. " Pta h tumhe kabir... hm ur kiara sath m padte the... hamesha sath rehte... kabhi hmne koi baat nhi chhupai unse... ye bhi nhi ki hm unhe pasand karte h... jab vo yha se gayi thi hmne wada kia tha unse ki jab hm ek bade sports star bn jaenge to unhe waapas le aaenge apne pass. Vo chahti thi ki hm dno hi kuch bda kare apne career m ur hmne kia kabir... hmne unki har baat maani h kabir... ur ye bhi manenge... agar vo chahti h ki hm unse door rhe to yhi sahi" viraj said with a pained expression. " Bade bhaiya... kya sach m aap yhi sochte h ki vo khud ko aap se door rkhna chahti h..." kabir said " look at me bade bhaiya... ask ur heart... don't u wanna meet her ask her what has happened to her... why she left u in middle when she has always loved u" kabir looked at viraj and holded his shoulder. " Please bade bhaiya give a chance to kiara, to this feeling and to urself... please for me.." kabir pleaded him. Viraj closed his eyes to stop those tears. He looked at kabir " tmse hm kabhi jeet nhi paenge kabir... thik hai jaenge hm kaira k pass" he said. Kabir was overjoyed. " Sach bade bhaiya... aap sabse achhe ho... u r the best" he hugged kabir. " par aapko bhi hmse promise karna hoga kabir... ki aap jaldi waapas aaenge..." viraj said. " Promise" kabir said.

Nisha was staring at ashish from a long time now whereas he is avoiding her. " Kya h yaar nisha... kyu ghoore ja rhi h" ashish was annoyed. " bol do kirti ko... fir ghurna band" she said. " He bhagwan dno paagal mere peeche hi lgae hai aapne" he muttered under his breath. " Ha ha.. paagal hi sahi... dekho kewal 15 minute h tmhare pass kabir k aane se pehle bol do nhi to..." she said. " Offo... kya musibat hai" he said turning towards the balcony and nisha was facing his back. Suddenly nisha saw kirti passing by, she signaled her to come. " kya yaar ashu tum chhoti si baat nhi bol sakte" nisha said signaling kirti to be quite. " ha ha... chhoti si baat... khud ne to diary m likhke chhod dia tha...mjhe gyan de rhi h" he said. Nishu blushed at it while kirti teased her. " Are meri baat ur h... tm to ladke ho na tum to kh sakte ho" nisha said. " Ha ha.. bhot aasan h na... achha tm hi btao kya kahu mai kirti se jaake... ki kirti waise to tum mjhe bus do teen din se hi janti ho... par mjhe tmhe dekhte hi pyaar ho gya tha... tm itni achhi ho ki I couldn't stop myself from falling for you." he said still looking at the sky. " Kyaa... sachhi" kirti shouted. Her mouth open wide and eyes widened. Ashish turned at the voice to see it's owner. " Crap" he muttered. Nisha was doing her winning dance when a pair of eyes were glaring her. She smiled cheekily and excused herself. Now the only souls present in the room were kirti and ashish. Kirti who was still in the shock while ashish was looking everywhere but at her. When the initial shock subsided, kirti walked towards that poor soul who was embarrassed and was looking at the ground. "Kya kha tmne" she asked. " Vo... mai... m sorry kirti... dekho I didn't want to hurt you yaar.. ye nisha ki bachhi..." ashish said fumbling. " Tmne jo kha vo sach tha?" Kirti asked. Ashish knew now there is no other way around,he has to accept it now. " Ha... 100%" he said looking at her. She smiled at him widely and hugged him... actually threw herself on him. Ashish was taken aback both by surprise and her push. They both landed on the floor. Kirti was still hugging him and he hugged her back. " Budhhu khi k... pehle nhi bol sakte the... mai to yhi soch k mari ja rhi thi ki tmhe ye sab kaise kahungi tmhare jaane se pehle." she said. He smiled but realised their situation and steadied her and himself. " kya karu... thoda slow hu na... par tm to fast ho tm hi bol deti" he said. She flushed red at his question. " par chalo koi nhi... kisine to bola" said kabir. Kirti and ashish looked towards the door to find kabir nisha and others at the door smiling. " dekha kabir... m so smart" said nisha. " Ha my jungli billi" kabir said pinching her nose. " Ab to kirti tu bhi bol hi de" sukku said. " Ha bhai" saurav supported him. Kirti looked away shying. " Oe hoe ms world sharmati bhi h..." kabir smirked. " Achha don't disturb them let her say... chalo yha se guys" said dolly. " Chalo" nisha said.

They all headed towards drawing room. While everyone was busy gushing about Nibir and kirti ashish. Kabir pulled nisha towards terrace. " Are kabir kha leke ja rha h..." she said. " Shhh" kabir said. Once they reached the terrace kabir locked the door behind him. " Kya hua kabir... " she asked. " Baat karni h " he said. " Viraj is ready to go to meet kaira" he said. " Sachhi..." nisha asked to which kabir nodded in a yes. " M so happy for him" she said hugging him. " Ur ek ur baat... I have to go london" he said looking at her. " For two months" he added. He was expecting her to beat him once again but instead of that she smiled and hugged him tighter. " Go kabir... work comes first... I don't want to be an obstacle instead I want to be ur strength..." she said trying hard to steady her voice which was going haywire due to emotions. He was astonished at her. She never fails in surprising him. " Never you say that again... u have been my strength and always be... got that" kabir said. Nisha nodded. " don't try to cover your tears nisha... u don't have to do it... just let your tears fall baby... I know what u r feeling..." kabir said patting her back. His words break all her unsuccessful tries to cover her sadness with a smile. She did what he said. She let her tears fall silently still clutching onto him. He too had tears in his eyes. He couldn't believe how would he is going to live without seeing her face. She looked at his face and wiped his tears and nodded in a no. " m ok" she said "don't feel bad that u made me cry... because u only gave me world's most precious feeling..." kabir looked at her. " M gonna wait for u kabir... because I know u will come back to me" she said kissing his forehead. He engulfed her touch in himself.

Kirti was still standing and ashish was looking at her. The roles has been reversed now and kirti was shying and ashish was smirking. " Are yaar bol b do na" he said giving up. " achha thik h mat bolo waise b jane ka time ho rha h... bye". Ashish turned to go when kirti hold his hand from behind. " gussa ho ke ja rhe ho..." she said. " Kya farak padta h... mai khush hoke jau ya sad hoke" ashish said turning towards her. " She holded her ears and said " sorry... ashish" "sorry nhi sunna mjhe...jo sunna h vo to tm bologi nhi " ashish said. He turned and left the room. She remain standing in disbelief. " arghhh... idiot ladki... 3 words hi to bolne the... waise to din bhar bakwas karti h... bechara kitna sad ho gya... koi nhi mai bhi dekhti hu iska muh kab tk phoola rehta h" she said smiling.

" Nisha lets go... mere jaane ka time ho rha h" kabir said to her. She was still in his arms unwilling to leave him. " tu jaldi aaega na kabir" she asked. " Ha... tjhse door rh sakta hu kya". He said. " Dekh tu rona mat thik h... ur bus days mark kar... mai aaunga tere ghar teri family se baat karne... fir tjhe apne sath le jaunga hamesha k lie". He started walking towards the gate still holding her in his arms.

" Ok guys... bye... I hope hm jaldi milenge..." kabir said. " We will wait for you" umesh said. Kabir and ashish hugged everyone. "Bade bhaiya aapko yaad h na apna promise" kabir asked. " Ha kabir yaad h... I will go next week... fine" viraj said. " Absolutely bade bhaiya" kabir smiled. " Where is nisha?" Kabir asked his eyes searching her. " she won't come kabir... u know how she is" saurav said. He smiled at him weakly. " Ok guys final bye... are ashish kha gya" kabir said.

" Are... kirti kya kar rhi h... dheere se mai gir jaunga yaar" ashish said while kirti was dragging him. " Shhh... chup" she said putting her finger on his lips. His eyes widened in shock. " Ese muh phula k nhi jaane dungi... aankh band karo" she said. He looked at her questioningly but closed his eyes. She closed her eyes and moved forward towards him. " I luv u" she whispered in his ears and stood there. Ashish snapped open his eyes and looked at her. She was smiling shyly when he hugged her "luv u too kirti" and rushed out.

Kabir was waiting on gate for ashish. Nisha pulled him aside. " Oe mjhse bina mile ja rha h" she said. " Tu... tu hi nhi aae niche... mai kitna wait karta" kabir said. Nisha said sorry to him when she saw ashish coming. " Close ur eyes jaldi se..." she said. " Why" kabir asked for which he received her glare. " Ok" he did what she said. He can feel her breath on his face as nisha came closer to him. His emotions were going haywire when he felt a quick peck on his lips. He opened his eyes to see nisha running inside winking at him. He was still in his trance when ashish came and shook him up. " Kya hua.." he asked. " Kuch nhi.." kabir said smiling widely at him.

Nisha was in her room, a bit sad but still she was smiling at herself for what she had just did. " nishu... kya kar rhi h" dolly asked. " Kuch nhi dolly di... bolo" she said. " nishu hm sab bhi shaam ko nikal rhe h waapas jna h na" she said. " Shaam ko hi... dolly di thode din ur ruk jao na... abhi to kabir gya h" she said pleadingly. " Ruk jate yaar... par u know na dadaji ka order h" she said all upset. " Hmmm" nisha said.

" Ok nisha... apna dhyaan rkhna thik h.." said umesh hugging his little sis. " Aap bhi" she said. " Bye everyone" she said. " Bye nishu" all said and shared a group hug. Nisha waved her hand till they were in sight. She goes back to her room and opened her diary.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
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Originally posted by: Anshi1509

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Awesome update


😃 thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
so so so swweeet...awesome as always...nibir are soo cuuuttteee... aashish and kirti are also lovely...kabir and ashu in shock by girls reaction awesome... curious to know what happens next...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
so so so swweeet...awesome as always...nibir are soo cuuuttteee... aashish and kirti are also lovely...kabir and ashu in shock by girls reaction awesome... curious to know what happens next...update soon...n tysm for the pm...oops double posts
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