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Posted: 10 years ago
mansi...tum title kyu nahi change kiya...
it shud be nibir ff right??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Loved it
Perfect and beautiful
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Originally posted by: angelanju

mansi...tum title kyu nahi change kiya...

it shud be nibir ff right??


ab kya karu.. too lazy u know😆
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Originally posted by: maniwood

Awesome update Loved it

Perfect and beautiful

thanks mansi😳
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ASPECIAL NOTE FOR SPECIAL PEOPLE
hi peeps... this iss gonna be the last part of this story and i seriously hope that i have done justice with it. the story is very close to my heart... i don't remember when and where did that prologue had apperead in my mind and i have just wrote it down here. i never had planned this story it always was a spontaneous write up. the response i got on the proluge was enough for me to start it. then some really really special people came and commented the way that i used to forgot that the thing theyy are talking about is my ownc creatiion. they only gave me the confidence and ideas to take it this far. its really been an amazing journey for me. the day nauc ended i wrote back to back three chapters out of my grief and missing session. i know m endind it a little abruptly but i have too.. and don't worry guys i will be back real soon. and and and u can count on me for a real big epilouge for this..😳 i know i hve ranted too much.. but i have too.. ur ab to sabko pta h ki mai kitna longg likhti hu🤣



last chapter



Chapter - 30

" society to bhot kuch bolti h taiji... uski fikar ki to kabhi kuch achha nhi ho payega" came a voice from the door. Everybody turned to look at viraj who was standing at the entrance with kaira on her wheelchair. " Bade bhaiya" kabir said. Viraj walked towards them with kaira who was looking tensed but yet confident. " namaste dadaji " viraj said and turned towards kabir. Both of them shared a warm hug. Everyone looked amazed at them except ramesh, nisha, kaira and cousins. "Kaise h kabir..." he asked. " Ekdum fit bade bhaiya... " kabir replied. Nisha moved towards kaira and extended her hand. " how's your journey kaira... aap kaisi h" she asked. " Hm bhot achhe h nisha... ur hmara bhot man tha aapse milne ka" she said and shook hands with her. This was another jolt for everyone. "Ye kaira h... " viraj introduced her to the family. " kaira... jinse hm sabse jyada pyaar karte h..." he said looking at her lovingly while she smiled. Laxmi was on the verge of having panic attack. " Cool down laxmi..." ramesh held her against him. Everyone looked puzzled at viraj. " Ye kya kh rho ho tm viraj" mohan asked.
" Whi jo sach h tauji... hm kabir nisha k baare m jante h... unhe samjhte h... ye dno ek dusre k lie perfect h... waise bhi jo shadi ek compromise thi... us shadi ka koi matlab nhi h... us relation m na to hm kabhi khush rh sake na hi nisha... ur ab jab hm dno ko hi apni khushi mili h to fir is bejaan se rishte ka kya matlab..." he said. " ha dadaji... ye shadi sirf ur sirf ek samjhota thi ur kuch nhi.." nisha said. " Ur rahi baat kabir ki.. to kabir se achha ladka nisha ko khi nhi milega... jo apne baare m baad m dusro k baare m pehle sochta h... kaira ko bhi isine dhunda h... apne bade bhaiya k lie" viraj said his emotions reflecting in his voice. Kabir looked at him. " dadaji aap bhi maan jaye na... isi m hm sab ki khushi h" he said.

There was a pause in the conversation as the four of them looked at dadaji.
" kabir idhar aao " dadaji said while kabir obliged. Dadaji stood up and started " tum hamesha yhi sochte rhe ho ki mai tmse baat kyu nhi karta... kyuki mai pehle se hi janta tha tumhare ur nisha k baare m..." every one was shocked to hear it specially nibir. " kabir.. itna hairan hone ki koi baat nhi h... mai budha jaroor ho gya hu... par insan ki aankhe abhi bhi pad sakta hu... tmhe pta h jis din tum is ghar m aae the... us din nisha k chehre p jo khushi thi vo kabhi nhi dekhi maine...nisha ka tmhari har ek baat ki fikar karna.. ur tmhara uski har baat ka dhyaan rakhna... mjhse nhi chhupa... " he took a look at the people around him who were dumbstruck at his talks. " mai bhot gussa tha kabir... is baat se inkaar nhi karunga... ur hona bhi chahie... par tmhara swabhav... tmhara hm sab k sath is tarah ghul mil jana... tmhe alag bna gya kabir... tmhari sachai ne mera gussa bhi khatam kar dia..." he stopped. Kabir and nisha were in surprise. " mai janta hu tm dno ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte ho... mjhe fikar thi to bus viraj ki... ur ab to vo bhi nhi rhi... " he smiled looking at kaira and viraj. " ramesh... tjhe chinta karne ki jarurat nhi h... is baar tera baap tere sath h... ur mai khush hu ki tune apne bachho ka sath dia... jo shayad mai kabhi nhi kar paya" he said looking a little disappointed. " Nhi babuji esi koi baat nhi h... aap ne aaj tk jo bhi kia h vo hm sab ka achha soch kar hi kia h" ramesh said. " achha sochne ur hone m farak hota h ramesh... khair chhodo vo sab baatein... ur kisi ko kuch kehna h" dadaji said. " Viren... mai samjhta hu... tm ab paristhiti ko samjh gye hoge ur apna gussa shaant karoge" he said taking a glance at him. " Ji babuji" viren said. " Kabir ur nisha idhar aao tm dno..." dadaji said. They came forward, dadaji put his hands on their heads and blessed them " mai chahta hu tm dno ese hi ek dusre k sath raho.. ur khush rho...". Nibir were on cloud nine at the moment. Nisha hugged her dadu " u r the best dadu in the world" she said crying out of happiness. " n u r the best granddaughter my child" he said patting her head lovingly. Kabir smiled and folded his hand in front of him. " I promise u dadu... I will keep nisha happy... always" kabir said. " That I know beta.. are u still afraid of me" he asked. " No... I mean a little" kabir said in a small voice. " Don't be" he said and hugged kabir. Kabir was taken aback with a surprise but he was overwhelmed by the warmth of his hug. Ramesh and laxmi were super happy and cousins were overjoyed seeing it. Viraj and kaira smiled while others were still in shock. " Are bhai tm log ese muh khol k kya dekh rhe ho... " dadaji asked "chalo bachho ko aashirwaad do" he added. Dadiji came forward and blessed nibir. Kabir and nisha took blessings of everyone and cousins hugged them. " Viren tauji.. won't u forgive me..." kabir asked to him innocently. Nisha too looked at him hopefully. Viren take a look at their faces and said "thik hai... par ek shart p... tere jokes bhot bore karte h yaar... mat sunaya kar" he laughed. Kabir smiled widely and hugged him.
" Are bhai gale lagne ka programme katam ho gya ho to aage ki baat kare.." ramesh said. " Ha papa... " kabir said. " Viraj beta... m really very glad for u and kaira..." laxmi said. " Viraj... tmhe kuch btana tha na" kaira said. " ha... dadaji mai ye kehna chahta tha ki nisha ur hmara divorce abhi 6 months tk nhi ho sakta... jaise hi ye 6 mahine katam honge... hmara divorce file ho jaega... par hme kaira ko india k best neurologists ko dikhana h islie hm chahte h ki nisha yhi rhe... vo chahe to hmare ghar bhi rh sakti h par hm kaira ko lke chennai ja rhe h" he completed. " viraj... aap jaie ur dekhiyega kaira ekdum thik ho jaengi..." nisha said. " Meri fikar mat kijie mai yhi rahungi" she added. " Bade bhaiya... sab thik ho jaega" kabir said. Viraj smiled at him. " Chalo bhai kisiko kaam p nhi jana h kya... viren mohan dukaan nhi khologe kya aaj" dadaji said and all dispersed leaving nibir, kaira viraj and cousins.
" Thanks god aakhir sab thik ho gya" dolly said. " Ha mai to darr hi gya tha yaar" sukku said " chalo finally... ab to nishu happy hai na" saurav said. Nisha smiled widely. " Chalo guys... ab lgo ko akela bhi chhodo yaar... kya kabab m haddi bne hue ho" umesh said. " Let's go..." kirti said and winked at nisha. " viraj aap hmare sath chalie kaira ka introduction nhi karwaenge hmse? " dolly said. " Ha kyu nhi... chalie" kaira said and viraj trailled her wheelchair inside. Kabir looked at nisha and pulled her into his tight embrace. Nisha too reciprocated with equal intensity. " Maine kha tha na sab thik ho jaega... dekh sab thik ho gya... ab tu kabhi mjhse door nhi jaegi... hmesha mere sath rhegi... mere pass..." he said tears of happiness forming in his eyes. Nisha doesn't said anything. She didn't need to. She felt happiest today... a feeling of being with him filled her with unbound joy. She tighten her grip on him. " Kabir... I luv u" she whispered. Kabir smiled despite the tears " I luv u the most jaan". She looked at him and wiped his tears. She kissed his eyes " u r mine now... n m yours" she said and crashed her lips on his. He kissed her back with an unmatched passion pouring the happiness they just have experienced.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 28- Another amazing chapter Mansi👍🏼 Fabulous👏
" waise tu bhi parrot jaisi hi dikhti h... teri naak h na bilkul uske jaisi hi h" kabir said bursting in a laugh. " Kya... kya bola tune... meri naak parrot jaisi h... to tere kaan bhi na gadhe ki tarah h.. samjha" she said hitting him. " Oe... mere to kaan hi gadhe jaise h na tu to puri bandariya ki tarah dikhti h... " kabir said running. " Tu... ruk ja kabir abhi btati hu... cockroach ki tarah masal na dia na to bolna..." she ran behind him. They were running in the whole room throwing stuff at each other. - Love their nok-jhoks and their cat and mouse chases 😆😆😆

Suddenly kabir slipped on something and nisha in a process of holding him landed on floor with kabir trapped under her. She again get drowned in those beautiful brown eyes of his. The time stop as they get lost in each other again. Their faces were inches apart and one can feel each others breath on their faces. A desire to taste those lips arise in kabir and his eyes traced their way to her soft juicy rosy lips. Her eyes mimicked his and her breath hitched. kabir's intense look set her lips on fire. She can feel the scorching heat of his body under herself. His eyes were still on his lips as if tasting them. He so wanted to explore the hidden heaven. His look at her lips was now unbearable for her. She wanted to crash them against his. He looked in her eyes and again gave a scorching look at her lips. She felt being kissed with that mere look. She blushed pink at her own thought. Kabir saw her cheeks turning pink and rolled over trapping her this time. Her eyes widened in shock at his act. " ka..." she was silenced by him as his finger rub against her soft lower lip. Kabir lowered his head to kiss her and she closed her eyes.- My favorite part ❤️Nibir romance ☺️ Love your description 😳☺️
Suddenly she felt a hand on her lips and opened her eyes. What she saw melted her heart, kabir put his hand on her lips and kissed her. She smiled as kabir removed his hand. " kabir... tu mjhe ese bhi kiss kar sakta h... rokungi nhi tjhe " she said. " Abhi nhi nisha... jab sahi waqt hoga to khud ko tjhse door nhi rakhunga " he said smiling and kissed her forehead instead. - Hayee Kabir In this moment I can fall in love with his character all over again😳 He is so sensible and adorable kya kahoon 😳

Loved the way Ramesh explained everything to Laxmi and supported Nisha. The way he tried to convince her about Nibir and the way he made Laxmi realize that they should think about their daughter and not the society is commendable👏

Kabir steadied himself and pulled her up. " Kabir... tu kabhi kabhi mere lie paheli bn jata h... " she said. " nisha... ye tu bhi samajhti h ur mai bhi ki abhi hmare lie kya imp h.. hai na... " kabir said. " idhar aa... yha baith mere sath" kabir said and they both sat in the balcony. " Kabir... tu bolega kuch... " she said. " Nhi... aaj baat karne ka mood nhi h... bus ese hi rh mere sath... please" he said. She smiled and put her head on his chest. They both closed their eyes and felt lucky to have each other - Cuteness overlaod😳

He smiled and walked towards her. Kabir made laxmi sit on the sofa and knelt down before her. He holded her hand in his " laxmi maa mai aapki beti se bhot pyaar karta hu... itna ki shayad mai khud nhi janta... kab mai use itna pyaar karne laga ye mjhe bhi nhi pta... vo meri zindagi h maa... mera sabse sunder sapna jo sach ho gya... mai janta hu ki vo married h... janta hu ki ye society ye log bhot kuch bolenge... par isse bhi bda ek sach h... meri zindgi ka sach... vo ye hai ki mai nisha k bina nhi jee sakta... shayad zinda rahu par jeeunga nhi... mai janta hu vo mjhse kitna pyaar karti h... ur ye aap bhi janti h ki bina pyaar k rehna... usse door rehna kitna tadpata h " he looked in her eyes " isilie yha aaya hu aap sab ki permission lene... apni zindgi ko apne sath le jane... dengi na mujhe permission.? Mjhe is society se koi lena dena nhi h.. mere lie sirf ur sirf nisha important h ur important h uski khushi" He asked hopefully. - Hayee😳 Kabira agar aise kahega aur aise samjhaayega toh saamne waala usse apni jaan tak dene ko tayyar ho jaayega😆😉

Viren and the elder's entry into the situation was perfect especially the way Kabir was so calm in explaining to them that he loved Nisha😃
" Tauji... mai pyaar karta hu nisha se ur yehi sach h" kabir said. Viren was out of control now. All the others were confused at what was happening. " how dare u..." viren said raising his hand on him. Nisha came between them " tauji..." nisha screamed with all her might. " mai bhi kabir se pyaar karti hu... " she said tears rolling through her eyes. - The courage with which Nibir face the world and are proud of their relationship proves that their relation gives them so much strength and why this relation is so important in their life. The way Nibir did not feel ashamed in confessing their love to the family and the way Nisha stood for Kabir is amazing 😳 It is just surreal

So loved this chapter also thoroughly 😆🤗

Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Res 😆 I had a feeling u will update today CZ I had been following ur movements on d forum 😆
Am updating other comments on thus story by this weekend 😉

😆 u stalking me...🤣 m waiting as always
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Posted: 10 years ago
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last part😭 😭
I just love this story bt I know every good things have to come to an end n I m waiting for the prologue😊
the update it was amazing as always 🤗
dadaji impressed with kabir👍🏼 viraj and kaira's entry was perfect👍🏼
the last scene was the best aawweee
and the most important thing come back with a new stort sooon 😃
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Mansi yaar tu hamesha khush karti thi mujhe par aaj rula diya last part
I remember that the day nauc ended ur update was a big relief to me
really enjoyed this journey
I want a very big epilogue plz plz pretty plz
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
its over😲😭😭nxt story kab start karne wali hai😉😉
coming to the last part
superb yaar...Dadu rocked others shocked😉😉
dadu tho bohuth smart nikla yaar😆😆bina kahe hi sab samj gaya😉..VJ se inspired hai kya😆😆
sab problem solved and Nibir hamesha ke liye sath👏
Kaira and Viraj ka bhi sab set hogaya👏
Rockstar of this part is Dadu⭐️⭐️just loved him
Nibir romance😳😳😳
waitng 4 ur epilogue long one 😉😳😳
Edited by ammu4u - 10 years ago

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