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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks cousins for liking the prologue so here is the first part do tell me how is it😉

...AASMANON PAY LIKHA...

(Part 1)

Rathore Mansion

Anu(after seeing the decoration)-What the hell

Finu-what happened dear

Anu-bua what is this i told them to use roses but see only orchids

Finu-its okk dear mamma loves orchid na

Anu-but dad hate orchids

Finu-dad ki chamchi

(finu saw mr n mrs rathore coming)

Finu-mom see na this junglee billi

Anu-bua

Finu-okk okk my angel

Vasundra ji-what happened princess okk i got it orchids na

Anu-yeah dadi

(kabira enters)

Anu-dad

Kabir-what happened princess

Anu-dad u hate orchids na but see

Kabir-its ok princess dad told them to use orchids

Anu-u told them

Kabir-yes now just go n get ready after all today is ur mom n dad's weddind anniversery na

Anu-correction 5th wedding anniversery

(finu kabir and mr n mrs rathore together)-yes mam😆

At 8 pm

Mr and mrs rathore r busy in welcoming guests and then gangwals came

Everbody greeted each other and then the cousins saw kabir coming with finu and anu.They all go to him and congratulated him then they asked about nishu

Jenny-hey jeeju where is nishu

Kabir-dont know yaar she said she is coming but...

Kirti-aww how sweet jeeju so someone is very restless haan

Kabira-listen u ...(suddenly kabir stopped)

Kirti-what jeeju kuch to bolo kya hua

Anu-mamma

(nishu is coming and kabir is lost in her beauty)

Baarish ki boondon mein

Chaand ki hatheli mein

Dekha hai tumko mere humnawa

Resham ke dhaagon ne

Rishton ki dori ne chun liya tumko humsafar mera

Ek pyaas hai ek dard hai bin tere na tere bina

Tere saath hi mera naam bhi

Asmanon par hai likha

Asmanon par hai likha

Finu-bhai what r u doing stop staring n go n get bhabhi

(Kabir came back to his senses and then he go n get nisha)

Kabir-looking nice

Nishu-thanks

Everbody clapped 4 them

Anu came to nibir and said happy anniversery mamma n dad

Nibir hugged her then nisha go to the guests

Anu-dad tell me one thing

Kabir-what

Anu-background mein konsa song chal rha tha

Kabir-asmanon pay likha..(after realising what he said)hey wait what background song

Anu-when mamma came u were just staring her so i thought u know

Kabir-u monkey

Then mrs rathore called everyone for cake cutting

Nibir cut the cake and they enjoyed the party with everyone but mostly with the cousins.everybody was teasing jenny n sukku because soon they r going to be married

Finally party was over and nibir were very tired

Kabir n anu both were in anu's room and kabir telling a story to anu after sometime he realised that anu is sleeping peacefully then he give a peck oh her forehead and left the room silently.

In nibir room

Nishu is standing at the window n watcing the moon.suddenly she felt a hand on he waist and she smiled.

Kabir-so did u like the party

Nishu-yeah kabir

Kabir-what

Nishu-kabir wo,,ummm... i want to tell u something

Kabir-what

Nishu-kabir i love(suddenly she heard a sound and she saw kabir coming)

Kabir-what happend

Nishu-nothing(bewkoof tu sapna dekh rhi thi)

Nishu-kabir party acchi thi

Kabir-hmm

Nishu-kabir wo

Kabir-gud night nisha

Kabir took the pillow n bedsheet and like always go to the sofa and slept there

Nishu(inner voice)-why kabir why.she too go to the bed and sleep

Kabir-dont worry nishu mujhe apna promise yaad hai and again his heart started crying

Kya karoon shiqwa apne khuda se

Jo bhi hua hai naseeb mera

Mere kadam toh paani par they

Jaane main kaise paar laga

Hain dooriyaan majbooriyaan

Bin tere na tere bina

Tere saath hi mera naam bhi

Asmanon par hai likha

Asmanon par hai likha



Sorry for the mistakes😃

Edited by SONAL30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Anu is Dadda ki chamchi 🤣 🤣 🤣
Anu bada pyaar aa raha hai Kabir pe 😉
Kabir ne Anu ko monkey bola 😡
Bechari bachi is taking his side and he is calling her monkey 😡
I have a few questions 😆
1. Kabir sofa pe kyun so raha hai ? 😕
2. Nisha ko bhi reason nahi pata ?😲
3. Konsa promise ? 😕
Answer for them is in next updates I know but still couldn't control asking them 🤣 🤣 🤣
This is from which movie I want to hear it 😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Sonu..
Just love finu , Anu and jenny 😆
Aur ye Anu kitni Anu thi...🤣
Nibir 's Wedding anniversary.. ❤️
Oh sorry Anu we know it is 5 wedding anniversary 😆
Amazing use of characters Sonu 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor anu nisha is her maiyan no longer saiyan now 🤣
good job sonu 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
sonu tune KK ka poora family tree ulta kar di🤣🤣🤣
amfi actually anu ki beti hai lekin yahan to ulta ho gaya🤣🤣
btw..mujhe bhi enrty chahiyei😉😳
Edited by Lekha.Mayur4eva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jenny and suku 🤣

Sona i want to kn dono main dooriya kyun hai

Post the next part asap 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wah, Badi bahna... Kya story hain..
U r such a k 🤣

Hav a strong feeling dat Anu is niRaj's beti n Kabira her step father 🤣
N Finu Kabira's behna n jennu-Sukku 🤣🤣

Hwevr,really Sonu, osm part n suspense haan... Liking it 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
But what is happening...didn't understand...
Why Kabir is sleeping on sofa...and which promise...
Felt very sad for Kabir...i was about to cry while reading the last part...
Plz clear the confusion in next part...
And ANU was awesome...PAPA'S GIRL...really loved it...
Plz post the next part soon as i am very anxious to know what is the problem...
And lastly ... but not the least " You are an awesome writer"...

And thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss_Deewani

Wah, Badi bahna... Kya story hain..
U r such a k 🤣

Hav a strong feeling dat Anu is niRaj's beti n Kabira her step father 🤣
N Finu Kabira's behna n jennu-Sukku 🤣🤣

Hwevr,really Sonu, osm part n suspense haan... Liking it 👍🏼

@bold
choti behna kuch bhi
i mean height of imagination
anu is niraj's daughter😆 yeh toh maine bhi nhi socha tha🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Anu is Dadda ki chamchi 🤣 🤣 🤣

Anu bada pyaar aa raha hai Kabir pe 😉
Kabir ne Anu ko monkey bola 😡
Bechari bachi is taking his side and he is calling her monkey 😡
I have a few questions 😆
1. Kabir sofa pe kyun so raha hai ? 😕
2. Nisha ko bhi reason nahi pata ?😲
3. Konsa promise ? 😕
Answer for them is in next updates I know but still couldn't control asking them 🤣 🤣 🤣
This is from which movie I want to hear it 😳

thanks yaar
and this is not a movie song
its a pakistani show's title track
dear go n google asmanon pay likha ost😃

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