FF-||'Growing up with You'- A NiBir Journey||Updated LAST CHAPTER-pg70 - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nikhad, this is absolutely FANTASTIC😃😳👏
Love everything about ur writing👏👏 The characterization, setting, plot everything is just perfect.👏
It is a beautiful story 😃🤗😳😊
What an amazing piece of work Nikhad 😊😃😆😳👏😉
It is so good that it has made readers like me speechless
Have no words to describe your masterpiece😊
Please continue writing like this.
I wish the story never ends 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwwh my lovelyyy girl Mihiku...What to say more, you made me emotional, speechless, I am having goosebumps...I love you and I love you all...So the chapter 21 is up!
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CHAPTER 21
The sound of the crackers was making people almost deaf...The perfect wedding songs were being played...The boxes of gifts and sweets were seen everywhere...The aroma of the delicious meals were all in the air...The palace looked like a bride itself which was all decked up beautifully...It was the Haldi Day...Everyone was busy with their works...Kabir was getting ready for his ritual as his one would happen first and then his used haldi would go for Nisha...Kabir got ready and called Nisha...They were talking, suddenly Kaynaat came into Kabir's room...
Kaynaat: How am I looking Bhaiyu? *excited*
Kabir looked at his sister...He was amazed, Kaynaat was all grown up and he never did notice...
Kabir: Why are you all decked up like this? You are still a kid Kayu... *elder brother mode*
Nisha heard what Kabir said and told him to put the phone on the speaker...
Kaynaat: What Bhaiyu, I am a university student now and you saying me a kid?!!! Tell me how am i looking?
Nisha: *on speaker* Kayu I guess your brother is just acting extra protective like the elder brothers..*teasing*
Kaynaat: *laughs* You are right Nishu Bro...
Kabir: Look kiddo, I know you are all grown up but still you are a kid to us..You saw na how Jwala took you on her lap that day? *touching Kaynaat's face with one hand' Oh and I don't have any issues with having a boyfriend but it is just that, choose someone carefully, hmm?
Nisha: Yeah your Bhaiyu is right, baby.
Kaynaat: Oh Bhaiyu *holding Kabir's hand* and Nishu Bro don't take tension..If I will ever feel something for someone, you two will be the first one to know about it...
Kabir and Nisha smiled...
Kaynaat: Now come on Bhaiyu, we should go out...All are waiting for you..Bye Nishu Bro...I will come with the haldi to you...
Nisha: Bye love...Bye Kabir...
Kabir: Bye Nisha, I don't know how I will stay without seeing you today * sad face*
Nisha: *laughs* Now go...BYE!

Kabir went out to the place where his haldi ritual would be done..He saw the family gang there and Samaira was also there...He smiled at them...
Suketu: Uff, you came too early..You should come after 2-3 hours *sarcastic*
Samaira: Oho, look who is talking...Remember how much late you were at the airport?
Suketu: What sweetheart? We all were late because of him *pointing at Kabir* and Nishu...Now this is nice, you are scolding me...
Samaira: Ohohoho baby...*pulls Suketu's cheecks*
The other ones laugh...
Umesh: Kabir my baby, shall we start the ritual?
Jwala: Wait, Nishu calling...*picks up the phone and turned the speaker on* Hello Nishu..
Nisha: Where is Kabir, Jwalu? He is not picking up...
Saurav: Guddi, try to have some patience...He will be all yours from the day after tomorrow..Let the poor kid enjoy his moments at least...
Nisha: Okay, so the whole gang is there to pull my legs...
Kabir: Nishu, my phone is in the room..Now the ritual will happen..Anything important? We just talked before a while na?
Nisha: Oh, I just called you to say that don't go near the orchids...There are some orchid flowers in the decoration of the stage, you may have not noticed..You have allergy from orchid na?
Gang: Awwwh chooo chweet...
Kabir blushed and Nisha too which clearly reflected on her voice...
Nisha: Guys, byee..Have fun...*blushing*

Kabir's haldi ritual was done perfectly..Kaynaat and the family gang left no stone unturned to make Kabir a yellow ghost...Then they did a photo session with Kabir...Then it was the turn for the Nisha's one...They took Kabir's haldi for Nisha and went to Nisha's stage side...Nisha was on the stage, she saw them coming and smiled like the sun, but her smile got even more prettier when she saw two very gorgeous ladies were there with them...She stood up and went to them...
Nisha: Dolly di, Kirti?!!! Guys when you reached??! Finally we are meeting!!!!!! *hugging Dolly and Kirti*
Kirti: Hi Nishu, just a while ago when Kabir's ritual was almost done...
Dolly: We are really late na? Our brother is getting married and we are such late..*sad face* Sorry love, but you know this *touched her baby bump*
Nisha: Awww di, I know and what are you even talking about? I am so happy that you guys are here, especially you in this state. By the way where is jeeju?
Dolly: Uffo! Don't say Nishu...These army officers...Preet said, he will be here by the wedding day morning..
Nisha: Haha, no problem di! After all, jeeju is a super hero!..
Dolly: Haha yeah...
Dolly, Kirti were the daughters of the neighbour of Nitin and Ridhima back in India...After marriage to till the birth of Kabir, they were neighbours..After Kabir's birth, they shifted to Germany but the bond of the two families never changed...Whenever Kabir came to India his other two sisters were always there for him...For Kabir, Dolly and Kirti were just like Kaynaat..They used to send him rakhi every year and Kabir used to send them gifts too...

Nisha's haldi was done perfectly too...Umesh and Saurav played the song 'Gudiya Ri Gudiya' for their sister which made Nisha very emotional..Umesh and Saurav were emotional too but they tried to hide it and told her that the crying session will be done at tomorrow night...Sunita and Rakesh got emotional while applying haldi on their one and only daughter, Nisha too was emotional...

Gudiya ri gudiya tera gudda perdesiya
Jodi aasmani ho gayi
Shagun pe dekho shaad maani ho ga...

Then the family gang and Kaynaat, this time with Dolly and Kirti made Nisha a yellow ghost...They did a photo sesion with the yellow bride also...

After all these funs and rituals, at the evening Nisha was sitting on the bench at the garden of the palace...She saw Jwala, Kaynaat, Samaira, Dolly and Kirti coming...
Nisha: Hello girls, wow all together...
Kirti: Yeah, we are here and the guys are there with your hubby *teasing*
Nisha: *blushing* Haha okay...
Kaynaat: Bhaiyu and you can't meet today na, so Bhaiyu is almost mad there...
Nisha: Yeah anything na Kayu?
Dolly: Truly Nishu...
Samaira: Kabir is acting like a totally a gone case...
Jwala: Nishu, look at your phone...Suketu giving you a call on skype...
Nisha picked the call...
Suketu: Hiii, Nishu...*Tries to tease Kabir*
Kabir heard the name Suketu took and he ran to him, trying to look at the screen...Seeing him, Suketu turned the video camera off...
Kabir: Now what shit is this Sukku? *Irritated*
Suketu: Hehe, no face seeing today bro! *winks*
Kabir: I know we can not meet...*disgusted face*
Umesh: So? No skype video calls also then...Haha!
Kabir: WOW! *fed up face*
Saurav: Ahaha...poor beauty queen...should I give you a kiss?
Kabir: Shut up Sauro...
Everyone laughed...They heard the girls laughing too along with Nisha..
Kabir: Yeah, yeah Nishu keep making fun..You just don't love me..
Nisha: Awwh..No no, I love you rat...
Kabir: I hate you cockroach..
Nisha: Oh that is sad...
Kabir: Oh wait no, I love you..
Everyone laughed out loud again...Then Suketu told the girls to meet them at the hall because they needed to practice for the sangeet and he told Nisha not to come then as Kabir would be there, later they would take Nisha when Kabir would leave...Except Dolly all the girls went to the hall...Dolly kept sitting with Nisha...

Nisha: Dolly di, won't you go?
Dolly: No, Nishu...What would I do there? I can't dance in this situation...
Nisha: Arreh di, that I know but you can go and enjoy their one...
Dolly: No no, I want to sit with my lovely sister-in-law for sometime...
Nisha: Oh di, you are so sweet...By the way you took your medicine? The evening one?
Dolly: Now I understand why my brother have choosen you..Such a gem of a person you are Nishu...
Nisha: *blushing* Nothing like that...Kabir always used to talk about you all...Never got a chance to meet...
Dolly: Yeah true that...Kabir mean a lot to me and Kirti...When he was born, I was the first one to take him on lap from the nurse...Nitin uncle loved me so much that he wanted me to carry him first...So I have a very deep bonding with him...As well as though even Kirti was born after 4 months than Kabir and they were already then in Germany, when Kabir and Kirti first met, no one could say they were strangers...Perfect little cute siblings they used to be like in childhood...We used to wait for Kabir that when they will come for a vaccation in India...
Nisha: That is so cute...Tell me more what he did at his early childhood?..He was in Munich then so I don't know all of it...
Dolly: Oh Nishu don't say...He was such a naughty kid...He used to spit on everyone whenever he got angry or irritated...
Nisha: WHAAAT???!!
Dolly: *laughs* Yeah Nishu and he never used to sit still..He used to eat up all our heads...I wonder how he changed into a calm and introvert one later...
Nishu: Now, me too thinking that di...
Both laughed...Nisha's phone rang and it was Kabir...Nisha picked up...
Nisha: Hello..
Kabir: Yeah, beloved wifey now it is your turn to join them..I have to leave now...Why this tough phase?
Nisha: *laughed* Kabir wait...*She turned the speaker on* Dolly di told me about your childhood mischiefs..
Dolly: Haha Kabira...Now you are gone..
Kabir: Oho di, tell tell...She should also know how much irritating her kids will be...
Nisha blushed hearing this...
Dolly: Wow brother, you are doing so much progress and leaving the shy Kabir behind *teasing*
Kabir: *being shy* Di yeah yeah...
Dolly: Hahaha...Now shy again huh? Nisha is still blushing here...
Kabir: I wish I could see her...Hey di, Nisha I need to cut the call otherwise these freaks will eat me up...I have to leave the place now and Nisha come soon here, they all are shouting...
Nisha: Okay Kabir...
Dolly: Bye Kabir...

Dolly and Nisha started for the hall room and Nisha texted Kabir on phone that she wanted to text on whatsapp that night and no calling since she wanted to live the memories of them again...Kabir smiled reading the text and knocked her on the whatsapp...Nisha smiled seeing the whatsapp icon on her screen just like those days...

TBC...



Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
oh wow I m the first person to like & comment... Yipiieee...
still didn't read it... But i know it b be awesome as usual 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww dat was such a beautiful update
Cant wait for Nibir to get married
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome!! This chapter was really superb!👏 When you told In the before reply that you will continue it tonight, i was waiting eagerly! Reading this update made me smile! Continue soon!! Your os are the best, if your free please do write an os of nibir and their happy family!!😊😉
Posted: 10 years ago
awww such cute part it was ^_^
loved it!! Dolly di & kirti kabir's sisters awww
sb main b soch rahi hu ye shararati bachcha itna calm & introvert kaise ban gaya????? Sangeet me dance yippie... Nobir dance... Plzzz mast mast songs plzzz.. My demand... 😉 Ranbir ke gaane... 😃
hihi
mujhe to ab next update ka intezaar rahega ^_^
thanx for pm kya bolu?? Maine inbox check hi ni [:p]
directly ye story hi kholi bas.. Bcoz u said na u will update isliye... Pm kiya hai kya??? 😆 wait let me check ... Lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update nik!!!
kabir and nisha became yellow ghosts!😆
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...loved it...

And thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
super duper update m soo excited for the marriage of nibir.
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Posted: 10 years ago
raat ko main kaise padi main hi janti hun...
all the time was waiting and thinking about your story...
i think this is the one of the most awesome work I have ever read...
you are awesome Niks
one request please update soon... i am so very excited...
thanks for the pm

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