NiBir 2 shot- I'll be there with you forever (part 2 updated on pg 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
awesome start dear
loved it
poor nishu missing her kabira😔
loved the way she told to viraj i love my hubby
continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
awesome yaar...pls nibir ko milade...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
It was Epic...I am totally in Love with it...pls do pm me...when u update...the idea was brilliant!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
loved the way VSR played the role of cupid
awesome part👏
update soon😊
do PM me😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
thanks a lot guys for your likes and comments. It really means a lot to me.😃 I'll update the next part soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
hey NiBirians...😳
I'm back with part 2 of the TS.
i hope u all like this whole TS.
plz do comment and ya silent readers thoko like.

Part 2:


She flipped the next page and there it was... Their last selfie before Kabir left for London.

*Flashback*

Nisha was in a total turmoil of emotions. Kabir would be leaving for London within 4 hours and here she was pacing the room to and fro. She so badly wanted to confess her feelings to Kabir. But her mind stopped her.

Nisha (self talk) - nahi Nisha tu itni selfish nahi ban sakti... Kabir ka dream London School of Dance hai... uska career, dream jiska usne na jaane kabse intezaar kiya hai.. Agar tu use jaane se mana karegi, toh woh nahi jaayega...aur tu... khud ke liye uske dream ko haat se jaane degi???Nahi Nisha u have to give up ur feelings for Kabir...But Kabir... Does he love me???No.. no... Kabir doesn't love me... woh mujhe apna bestie maanta hai...Hum dono ka rishta yahi tak tha...

A tear slipped down her eye as she thought of Kabir and the moments she shared with him.

Suddenly Kabir entered. Nisha quickly wiped the tear.

Kabir - Nisha chale meri flight ka time ho raha hai..

Nisha - haan, chalo.

Both were at the airport. Nisha was trying very hard to control her tears from forming and flowing. Kabir sensed something unusual about Nisha.

Kabir- oiye tujhe kya hua?? Itni chup kyun hai??

Nisha- kuch bhi toh nahi.

Kabir cupped her face in his hands. Nisha's eyes met his.

Kabir- dekh nisha, in 3 mahino mein main tujhe bahut acchi tarah se samjhane laga hoon. Aur main yeh bhi jaanta hoon ki tu senti ho rahi hai... par we have no option. We both know that this contract is over now. Par tujhe mujhse ek promise karna hoga ki tu papa... oops... Ramesh uncle ka happy wala gana rahegi chahe jo ho jaye... hamara saath yahin tak tha Nisha... main bas yeh chahata hoon ki tu hamesha khush rahe...tu bahut strong hai wifey... bas aisi hi reh...

Their eyes locked in an eyelock. Kabir slowly moved in and placed a long kiss on her forehead. Nisha closed her eyes in anticipation as she felt his lips on her forehead for the last time. As he moved away, Nisha hugged him tightly and Kabir too hugged back.

Nisha - I lo...

Suddenly she realised what she was about to say... she controlled her tears which were threatening to fall.

Nisha- I'll miss u Kabir...

Kabir- I'll miss u too...

They broke the hug. Kabir took his luggage and went to the security check.

He turned around and looked at Nisha for the one last time and smiled weakly.

Nisha too smiled back and waited there till he was out of sight.

*Flashback ends*

Nisha wiped the tears that were making their appearance on her face. She heard someone knocking the door so opened it. Sukku entered the room and hugged her.

Sukku- (happy and excited) Nisha, mera selection ho gaya hai... I am going to be an actor Nisha...

Nisha- (happily) Sacch?

Sukku- Haan...

Nisha hugged him

Nisha- (breaking the hug) Congrats superstar Suketu Gangwal.

Sukku- (smiling) Sirf congrats se kaam nahi chalega... neeche chal...

Nisha- Arrey par?

Sukku dragged her downstairs and suddenly she felt as if he was there. She turned and faced the door. Kabir stood at the door with a bag in his hand and a lady standing near him. Both were smiling.

Nisha looked at him in shock.

Nisha- (mumbling) Nahi, yeh nahi ho sakta. Kabir waapas nahi aayega... Lagta hai main sapna dekh rahi hoon.

She closed her eyes so that he vanishes.

Suddenly she heard someone scream. She opened her eyes and it was Kirti who ran past her and hugged Kabir.

Kirti- (happily) Jiju, aap kab aaye?

Kabir- abhi- abhi. Par lagta hai, mere aane se meri wifey khush nahi hai.

Nisha- (happily) Kabir, it's you? Sacchi?

Kabir ran and hugged her. Nisha felt so overwhelmed that he is back and hugged him more tight.

Kabir lifted her off her feet and twirled her around.

Kabir- (breaking the hug) Sacchi, mucchi, kucchi, Nisha ki bacchi...

Nisha hugged him again happily. The lady came and stood next to her.

Kabir- Nisha, this is my mommy, and Mom, this is your daughter in law.

Nisha suddenly realised that if he is back, means he has come for the proceedings of the divorce. But then what does he mean by "your daughter in law" Maybe he said simply.

Nisha- (trying to hide her pain) Divorce ke proceedings kab start hone waale hai?

Kabir- Tujhe mujhse divorce lena hai? Main tumhe bilkul divorce nahi dunga, kyunki Divorce toh woh couple lete hai jo alag hona chahte hai, aur main tumse kabhi alag nahi hona chahta...

Nisha ignored the eyes of the family members that were stuck on her and the tears of happiness which beamed in her eyes and hugged him.

Umesh- (teasingly) Waise, Nisha ki bacchi ke baare mein kya khayal hai?

Nisha broke the hug and blushed. She looked at Kabir whose face was red.

All the family members welcomed Kabir and his mom with happiness. After dinner, the cousins sat to chat for a while with Kabir.

Umesh- Kabir, we missed you yaar...

Aman- Pata hai, Nisha tujhe bahut jyaada miss kar rahi thi... Hai na Nishu?

Nisha- (hesitant) Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...

Kirti- How blah Nishu... jab bhi tu Kabir ko yaad karti thi, woh scrapbook tere haat mein pahuch jaata... And inn 2 mahino, maine tumhe uss scrapbook ke saath har din dekha hai...

Sukku- Haan, aaj bhi bethi thi...

Nisha tried to argue but was interrupted by Kabir

Kabir- Aye, bahut ho gaya, meri wifey ko pareshaan mat karo...

Saurav- Haan, ab Doston ka saath kaun denga? Ab toh wifey ki hi chalegi...

Nisha and Kabir blushed.

Jwala- Kabir jiju, mujhe lagta hai, you should rest for sometime...

Dolly- (with mischief in her voice) You goes, with Nishu in her room...

Kabir noticed the mischief in her voice and blushed but Nisha failed to notice it and saw that Kabir was blushing.

Nisha- tu itna laal kyun ho raha hai...

All face palmed.

Dolly- Nishu, you so innocent yaar...

Aman pushed them both in Nisha room.

He closed the door and pulled her closer. Wrapping his arms around her waist, resting his back on the door and started playing with Nisha's hair.

Nisha- (wrapping her arms around his neck) Kya baat hai, someone's getting romantic?

Kabir- (pulling her more closer) Waise toh main bahut jyaada romantic hoon, par kabhi tumne mujhe romance hi nahi karne diya...

Nisha- Accha? Toh ab mauka de rahi hoon. (and blushed)

Kabir- (leaving her) Ek minute.

He removed a small jewellery box from his bag and removed a diamond studded ring from it. Kabir kneeled down infront of Nisha

"Tumhare bina yeh 2 mahine kaise bitaaye hai, sirf mujhe pata hai. Har waqt sirf tum yaad aati thi, your eyes, your smile, your anger, your bubbly nature... I can't explain ki jab mujhe realize hua ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon tab mujhe kitni khushi hui thi. Nisha Gangwal, tune meri life bana di yaar... thank you for coming in my life and making it more crazy yet amazing."

He stood up, slid the ring in her ring finger and kissed her hand. A tear was about to fall from Nisha's eye but he wiped it, touched his forehead with her's and whispered, "I'll be there with you forever."


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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Both the parts were amazing... The first one made me miss Kabir along with Nisha... And the second one made me smile like anything...!!!!
Please keep writing such beautiful stories...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
awww...happywala gaana jaise feeling aa rahi hai... <3 <3
beautiful ending...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Loved it dude. You wrote it really well. I can't wait for Rajbir's mother to come into the picture and i'm hoping she will be a positive character. Either way loved the concept and everything.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
it was great dear..loved that Kabir returned with his mom and was so sure about not just his feelings but Nisha's feelings too..thats what these two share..such comfort that everything seems perfect and everything just falls in place like its meant to be!
thanks for the lovely part 😊

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