Viraj 3S: ISSUES ~Part 3, 4th post~|28/4| -complete-

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Syahi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

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Thanks for commenting. Glad you like it. ☺️

Is it OK if I leave a scrap instead of a PM? There's a limit on the no. Of PMs. 😳

Also, next update may have very mild adult references, nothing graphic though. Hope that is OK. Before you ask, next update will be up by next week.

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Also, I'm waiting for more comments. It takes time and effort to write. Comments are all I get. Please don't deny me that. 😳

Edited by -Saraswati- - 10 years ago

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yulin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Loved it!! You made me cry! Very well written and viraj's psyche explored so well!!

I wish the writers of the show had also bothered to show us what's going on in his head. They just show an irrational Viraj without showing his thoughts. I would not have minded the turn his character has taken in the show if they had actually done what you have done with your TS.

Thanks so much for this.

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lekha24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

it is really interesting hope u update it soon

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zehra07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

i know its strange bt i luvd dis viraj.. his each statemnt gives d exact idea dat hw mch he is hurt n somehw i ws able to find sm hidden humor in his statemnts.. eagerly waitin fr ua nxt post

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Syahi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thank you so much! ☺️

Your comments mean a lot.

Please do send me buddy requests, for PMs/scraps. It's really difficult otherwise.😳

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Syahi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Teaser for Part -2-

"W-w-wwwhat's bothering you now?" Anhad asked.

Viraj stared at him, wondering if he should be honest or nice.

"Politely honest would be fine."

Viraj looked up in surprise. After a momentary pause he said, "I want to hate you, blame you for what happened... but... but I can't justify my hatred and-"

Anhad laughed softly, "It is the floor's fault w-w-wwwhen a child falls down and scrapes his knee, huh?

Viraj shrugged. "It would be convenient if it was the floor's fault."

Anhad chuckled.

"Sorry, I interrupted you... w-w-what w-w-wwwere you going to say after and'?" Anhad asked.

"I can't justify my hatred and... though I don't want it that way... I am fond of you."

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P.S.-TS stands for three shots, not two.😛

Edited by -Saraswati- - 10 years ago