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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5
After 2 days nisha was going to college on her scooty . suddenly her scooty punctured

Nisha : oh god aaj hi hona tha kya ??? Ab main kaise collage jaungi. .aaj tho meta seminar hai agar der se pounchi tho sab mera mazak udayenge. ..umesh bhayya ko call karungi (and she saw viraj.)aree ye vahi hai usdin main isse hi dant lagayi thi ..abi jaake sorry bolke aungi she rushes towards him

Viraj : aree aaj main koi accident nahi kiya hai please aaj mat dantiye

Nisha : laughs uncontrollably and took note book from her bag and write "I am very sorry "and show that to viraj

Viraj : sorry ??? par kis baat ki sorry

Nisha : vo uss din mai ne aapko bevajah hi dant liya aapki koi galati nahi thi phir bhi maine bina kuch soche samje aapko...

Viraj : hmmm iska matlap aapko pata chala meri koi galati nahi thi usdin thank god vahi mereliye kafi hai

Nisha : sorry please han aap bura mat maniye

Viraj : its k ab aap baar baar sorry bolte rahai tho mai bura manunga

Nisha : thank u ..main chalti hun ( and than she realise her scooty was punctured and she back to viraj)

Viraj : kya hua? ..accha baba maaf kardiya hai mai ne

Nisha : vo nahi...kya ye car aapki hai
Viraj : ji meri hi hai .kyun?

Nisha : kya aap mujhe collage tak drop karsakte hai vo kya hai na mera gadi puncture hua hai or mujhe der horahi hai
viraj : teek hai bait jayiye

nisha : aap mujhe aise aap kehke mat bulayiye or itna respect deneke zaroorth nahi hai

viraj : teek hai or aap sorry tum bhi mujhe aise hi baat karo

Nisha : main mere bhayya ko call karke mera gadi teek karne kehti hun and she called umesh

Umesh : hello nishu collage pahunch gayi kya?

Nisha : kaha bahyya raste main mera gadi puncture hogayi

Umesh : ab kaise javogi collage abhi batao kaha ho rum main abhi aati hun

Nisha : bhaiyya aap tension mat lijiye ..mujhe mera ek friend mila hai unke saat jarahi hun collage

Umesh : koun hai vo

Nisha : bahyya aap mujhpe shak kar rahe ho not fair

umesh : aisa nahi hai nishu bhayya hai na tumhara isiliye

Nisha : accha tho ghar main sab mujhe wish kuya kai par aap ne nahi kiya hai aap aaj jaldise dukan chalegye aaj

Umesh : accha teek hai. .meri behan kisi se kam todi na hai dhekte raho aaj ki seminar bahoti acche se hoga. .all the best nishu

Nisha : thank u bahyya main ab rakti hun han

Umesh : teek hai nishu sambal ke jana teri gadi ka repair main karwalungi ..bye (end the call)

Viraj : thank u

Nisha : kyun? Tum mujhe thank you kyun keh rahe ho

Viraj : tum apna brother se kaha na main teri dost hun isiliye

Nisha : vo kya hai na kamukha pareshan hojata hai isiliye aise kaha

Viraj : vaise aap ko kyun wish kar rahe the ..aaj aapka b'day ya koi khas din

Nisha : oh vo aaj collage main mera seminar hai isiliye sab wish kar rahe hai

Viraj : accha dhekiye bato baton main aapka collage bhi agaya

Nisha : oh ya thank you so much

Viraj : its k and ha all the best acchese kariyega aapka seminar

Nisha : thank u

Viraj : tum ghar vapas kaise javogi

nisha : mera ek dost hai sourav usko call karungi vo aajayega

Viraj : tho teek hai main chalta hun bye

Nisha : bye. .

viraj : ( was very happy) thank god aaj tak main apni zindagi main itna kush nahi tha products ye ladki se milke main kitna kush hun ye main bata nahi sakta (he was in doobi doobi mood)

Its evening

Nisha : aree yaar ye main kaha aagayi hun shortcut dundte dundte rasta bhul gayi ab main ghar kaise jau. .mbl ki battery bhi katam hona tha kya .subhah meri gadi ab ye mere mobile he bhagwan mujhe bachalo kaise bhi karke ghar pahunch a dena( viraj passing from that side he saw nisha ans stop the car)

Viraj : tum yaha kya kar rahi ho

Nisha : tum!!! Aree yaar aaj thi tun mereliye bhagwan ban kar aaye ho subhah or ab

Viraj : ( come out of the car) kya hua kuch pareshani

Nisha : pareshani nahi mussibat

Viraj : par hua kya ? vaise aapke seminar kaisa raha

Nisha : maine ko kia vo kaam teekse nahi hua aisa hosakta hai kya

Viraj : hmm that's good par aap itna pareshan kyun hai

Nisha : vo kya hai na ab tak main ghar main hona chahiye tha par meri gadi teek nahi hai na it kisiko pic karne bulau tho mobile ki battery bhi katam hui hai ab kya karun bohot tension horahi hai

Viraj : offo mujhe tho laga aap bohot daring hai par aap itna dar rahe ho

Nisha : mujhe bas maa or dadaji ki tensions maa tho Bina kisi vajah se tension leti hai or dadaji der se ghar pahunci thi gussa karte hai

Viraj : bas itni si baat keliye aap itna dar rahi hai..main aapko ghar chodungi

Nisha : itnisi baat. ..kyun aapke mummy tension nahi leti jab aap ghar derse pahunch thi ho..kyun unhe tumhari fiqure nahi hai

Viraj : felt very bad remembering his mom and dad and he dint say any single word and left from there )

Nisha : aree yaar kya hua. .mujhe drop nahi karoge aree ruk ( she shouts) ...ab mai kya karun kaise ghar jau ..agli baar ye mila tho chodungi nahi main

Sourav : are nishu tu yaha hai main tumhe kaha kaha nahi dunda. .pata hai tumhari mummy ne 50 baar mujhe call karchuki hai..tumhari phone ko kya hua hai

Nisha : vo battery katam hogayi hai yaar kya karu extra class thi isiliye der hogayi ghar jaldi pahunch ne ki chakkar main rasta bhul gayi kounsa shortcut hai ye yaad hi nahi

Sourav : bacchu tu aayi hai na ye shortcut road nahi main road hai shortcut vahase hai
Nisha : vahi tho main dhekhu ye kaha aagayi pata hi nahi chala

Sourav : vaise kisike saat jagla hua hai kya ?? Tumhara chehra aisa kyun hai

Nisha : she explained everything thing what had happened in the morning and now

sourav : so finally tune usse sorry boldiya ..

Nisha : han yar par vo aisa kyun kia mujhse tho kaha vo drop karega par bina kuch kahe chod ke chala gaya

Sourav : shayad uski mummy ki yaad aagayi hogi. ..tune pucha nahi uska naam kuch

Nisha :mujhe usse kya lena dena

Sourav : jo bhi hai ab chalo ghar main sab tumhari wait kar raha hai chalo (and both left )

Finally nisha safely reached home

Precape : nisha says viraj : aaj meri shaadi hai
Edited by aarvi123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Thsi chapter was amazing ..but wait ! Nisha ki shadi ...are you kidding me ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome one!!
haayyee...niraj always steal my heart!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you dear 😊
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#65
it was just superb
continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, nice one now viru in doobi doobi mode pls update soon.👍🏼
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Originally posted by: heart_nishkala

Thsi chapter was amazing ..but wait ! Nisha ki shadi ...are you kidding me ?


pata chal jayega next part main 😃
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Originally posted by: achirasingh16

awesome one!!

haayyee...niraj always steal my heart!!


Thank you dear
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Originally posted by: candy.shameema

Hey, nice one now viru in doobi doobi mode pls update soon.👍🏼


Thank you dear 😊
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Part 6


Lakshmi : nishu kya hai ye ghar ye koi vaqt hai ghar aane ka


sourav : aunty vo


Lakshmi : sourav tu iske side matlo sare bhai behan or tu sab milke aajate hai isse bachane


Nisha : maa ab main aagayi hun na relax me lakshmi


Ramesh : lakshmi ab bas bhi karo nishu sahi salamat ghar aagayi hai na chodo vo sab


Lakshmi : nishu kal se aise der nahi honi chahiye teek hai aaj choddungi par yaad rakha kal se


Nisha : teek hai vaise kal collage koun jaane wala hai


sukku : kyun kal chutti hai kya


Sourav : kyun kal collage kyun nahi jarahi hai


Nisha : vo kal na koi traditional day hai sare girls ko sari pehenke jaana hai tho main nahi jarahi hun


Sukku : vo ya u r right tum kisi bhi angle se ladki nahi dikti hai thi tum collage mat jao


Dolly : shut up sukku aisa mat kaho ...nishu yahi hai moka sari pehenke jaana ..kaash tumhari jagah ab main hoti tho 4 din pehle shopping karleti or accha designer sari purchase karke vahi pehenke jaati thi


Keerti : how blah ! Dolly di. .aapko tho bas bahana chahiye shopping karneki ..main hoti tho accha wala make set leleti


Umesh : guys aap ye kya baate kar rahe ho baat yaha aap logo ki nahi nishu ki horahi hai


Nisha : bas aap log iske aage kuch nahi kahenge ..main kal nahi jarahi hum matlap nahi jarahi hun


Lakshmi : ruk nishu tu kal sari pehake jarahi hai bas maine kehdiya


Nisha : maa please ap mat shuru hojao

Sourav : nishu tu sabse acchi lagegi pehenlena


Nisha : sourav tu bhi in logoko tarah shuru hogaya


All try to convince nisha but nsiha is nisha she will never agree for this lakshmi gets upset and left from. Their again all the cousins and sourav try to convince her but she dint agree


It's morning

jwalu : nishu bro get up der horahi hai apko collage nahi jana hai kya


Nisha : jwalu tu jaa yaha se sone de mujhe aaj nahi jaungi collage


Jwalu : nishu bro lakshmi chachi bohot upset hai aap jaldise utke unke mood teek kardiya please please


Nisha : kya hua maa ko ??


Jwalu : pata nahi aap hi jaake dheko

Nisha : ( gets up and went to her mom)maaa kya hai ye kya hua aapko jwalu ne bataya aap upset kyun ho. .


dolly : sab teri vajah se


Nisha : mai ne kya kiya


Keerti : nishu dhek na yeh sari or iske matching set chahi ne tumhareliye ready karke tak diya hai. .nishu pehenlena


Nisha : phirse shuru hogaye hai tum log ..aap log samajthe kyun nahi hai ye kapde ka dukan main nahi sambal sakti


Lakshmi : tu samj kyun nahi rahe hai tu is mai bohot acchi lagegi ..


Dolly : nishu chahi itna kehrahi hai unka man raknekeliye tho pehenlena please


Nisha : accha teek hai. ..main pehle fresh hoke aati hun bad mai aapko kya karna hain sab kuch karlena


After sometimes dolly, keerti, lakshmi forcefully make nisha wear sari and she real looks like princes

Nisha : maa main aapki baat mani hai tho ab aap bhi meri baat manning padegi


Lakshmi : kya hai vo bol


Nisha : main scooty se ye sari pehenke nahi ja sakti tho main car leke jaung


Dolly : chachi man jayiye varna ye yahi pe sari utregi


Lakshmi : teek hai ..sukku... car key leke aao yaha


Sukku : ye lijiye maa ..par kyun ?


Lakshmi : nishu aaj car leke jayegi


Sukku : par nisha hai kaha


Keerti : kyun sukku aankho main kuch problem hai kya ..yaha dhekho


Sukku : oh my god !!! Ye meri nishu ham ye nahi hosakta


Dolly : jyada notanki mat karo



Ramesh : nishu bohoti pyari lagrahi hai tu ab der horahi hai chalo ( and she takes blessings from everyone and left from their )


Nisha : ( stops the car in front of temple) yahi pe jake bad main orphanage chali jati hun bacchose milne collage tho bilkul nahi jaungi sab mujhe hasenge or vo boys ragging karenge isse accha main aah collage nahi jaungi kounsa mere gharwale aake collage main puch ne wale...(she is thinking something than she saw someone fell down on the road)aree ye koun hai kya horaha hai usse main dhekti hun she rushes towards him


Aree ye vahi hai jo kal mujhe raste main chodke gaya tha isse kya hua ..(she hear a some one's voice) ye awaz kaha se aaraha hai. .ye phone shayad iska hi hoga she takes that mobile


Nisha : hello


Darji ; hello beta aap koun


Nisha : ji aap jis se baat kar rahe he vi yaha bevosh hoke gir gaya hai

Darji; kya vo kaha kaha hai kya aap mujhe address batadijiye main abhi aajaungi vo kal raat se kuch nahi khaya hai a isiliye chakkar agaya hai ..kal kisine unse unki mammy papa ke bare main pucha liya isiliye


Nisha : she realise that nisha hi kal viraj se unki mummy ke bare main baat ki thi. ..ji kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai unhe itna bura kyun laga unke mamma paapa ke bare main baat karne se...vo kya hai na kal main inse mili thi main janti hun inhe isiliye


Darji : beta vo jab vo chote the tab unke mummy paapa guszar gaye the isiliye bachpan se lekar aaj tak vo akele hai isiliye jab hi unse inke mummy paapa ke bare main koi puchte hai tho vo udas hojate hai


Nisha : ek kaam kijiye aap yaha mat aayiye main inhe sambalungi inhe hosh aaye hi aapse baat karwadunga


Darji : teek hai beta main intezar karungi ( and ends the call )



Nisha : anjane main hi sahi iski ye galat ki zimedar main hi hun..kaise bhi karke isse hosh main lana hi hoga and she make him sit on her car and spray some water on his face


Viraj : open his eyes ...tum yaha !!!


Nishu : pehle ye paani pelo..or ye rahi tumhareliye aalu ka parata

viraj : parata mere liye


nisha : han tumhareliye ..and pura khalo


Viraj : eats all the parata's


Nisha : itna bhook laga tho khana kyun nahi khaya


Viraj : tumhe kaise pata


Nisha : kaise bhi pata chala am really sorry meri vajah se tum udas hogaya hai na


Viraj : nahi aisa nahi hai. ..or am also sorry


Nisha : kyun ?


Viraj : kal main tumhe raste main chodke gaya aapko drop bhi nahi kiya bad main bohot bura laga vapas aaya tha par tum vaha nahi thi. .

nisha : vo Sourav mera dost vo Aya tha mujhe pick karne


Viraj : vaise aaj Tum bohoti acchi lagrahi ho kuch khas baat hai kya


Nisha : han aaj meri shaadi hai


Viraj : (feels like someone pinch his heart by pin , he felt very bad ) kya ? He was like toota toota


Precape : friendship begins
Edited by aarvi123 - 10 years ago

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