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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TsmAm01

Niraj moments!! 👍🏼 Why is viraj crying?!

Coz he might be missing his mom😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Amazing yr why viraj is crying.😊


Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one aarvi... Nisha aur laxhmi ka convo was superb...😊 And eagerly waiting to knw y viraj is crying...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AISHU183

Hey aarvi .thanks for giving those NIRAJ moments we could'nt get in the show.😉


👍🏼😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TsmAm01

Niraj moments!! 👍🏼 Why is viraj crying?!


thank u 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachi...20

Nice one aarvi... Nisha aur laxhmi ka convo was superb...😊 And eagerly waiting to knw y viraj is crying...


thank u prachi ...and am ending my story😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 50

And the last part of "adore tumhare bina" ...

Nisha : vaise naani maa kab tak aayegi

Nani : dopehar tak aayenge

After some time

Viraj : hai nisha kya soch rahe ho

Nisha: kuch nahi bas aise hi ..or sourav,ballu tumdono viraj ke saat kaha gaye the ..

Sourav : tumhare liye ek surprise hai

Nisha : kya hai vo

Ballu : hum kyun bataye ..vaha dhekho

Nisha : (teary eyes) maa ..paapa ran towards them and hugs them

Ramesh : kaise ho meri pari

Nisha : main teek hun ..aap kaise hai

Sourav :bas bas bohot hua andar tho aane de tut ho apni maa se mil liya tumhari maa ko bhi apne maa se milne dona

Nisha : ha ha mujhe pata hai tu jyada smart mat bano

After some times..aal are having fun with each others

Ballu : aree viraj bhai aap itna udas kyun ho ...kya hau shaadi nahi karni hai kya

Lakshmi : han beta kya hua koi pareshani hai kya ..nishu puch na jaake

Nisha : viraj kya hua ..tu itna sad (he hugs her and started crying)

Ramesh : viraj beta kuch baat hai kya bato beta

Nisha : viraj am scared ..please tell me what happened?? Is everything ok??

Viraj : aapsab kitna kush hai ..actually nisha tu or tumhare ye cousins kitna lucky hai tumsab ko mamma ,paapa,bhai,behen,dadaji,dadi,tauji ,tayiji,mama,mami,naani sab hai par mujhe koi nahi hai ..aisa kyun hua mere saat ??

Naani : shayad ye hi bhagvan ki marzi hi samjalo beta..bura mat maano par main jo keh rahi hun vo samjo ...agar tumhareliye parivar hota tho shayad tumhe nisha nahi milti ..ab dhekho tum kehrahe ho tumhe koi nahi hai par yaha tho tumhe nisha ke saat saat uska pure parivaar milraa hai

Sukku : han jiju ek Bandar ke saat full zoo bhi aapka horaha hai

All laughs

Nisha : ab ye tumhara aansu ko yaha jaga nahi hai..hamsab hai na tumahreliye

Sourav :specially nishu hai aapkeliye don't worry ..har vaqt bak bak karke aapka dhimak ka halat kharab kardegi

Keerti :chachi vaise ab shaadi main jyada din nahi hai ...jaldi hi hamari nishu miss se mrs banjayegi

Ballu : nishu mujhe maaf karde yaar main tumhare shaadi main (nisha stops him)

Nisha: agar tum ye kehne wale ho kit u mere shaadi main nahi aane wale ho tho bhul jao aisa bilkul nahi hoga ..tumhe tho main zabardasti kichke leke jaungi sirf tumhe nahi tumhare uss kamine dostonko bhi aana padega bas no arguments this is final

Ballu : aree yaar meri baat tho suno main aaunga zaroor aunga or saat main mere dostonko bhi leke aunga par ladki wale banke nahi ..hum tho ladke walonke taraf se

Dolly :ye accha hai ye tho party hi badal di

Ballu : badalna tho padega kyun ki hamare dulhe raja ko 3 saliyan hai tho ladke walonke taraf se unko bachane keiye koi tho hone chahiye

Viraj : thank u ballu ..thank u so much

After 2 days all went back to jaipur ..

all preparation for wedding started only 5 days left for wedding

Dadi : vimala bahu ..aree roopan bahu kaha ho tum log

Vimala : ji maa humdono yaha hai ...

Dadi: ye ke kar rahe hai tumlog ye sab chodo ghar mainmeheman log aanewala hai kamara sab tayyar karna hai shaadi keliye jyada din nahi hai chalo chalo 5 din hai bas

Roopan : han maaji pata hai aapko maine uss tailer ko blouse stitch karne diya tha par usne abhiu tak diya hi nahi pata nahi shaadi ke din tak ayega bhi nahi ..

Mohan: roopan tumhe apni blouse ki padi hai .bahot kaam bacha hai jao jaake tayyari karo

Roopan : ha ha pata hai mujhe

Aman : mummy ji ye dhekiye maine sab reay kardiya hai ..aaplog tension leneki koi zarorath nahi maine saare guestkeliye kamara ready kardiya hai job hi zaroori chis hai sab rakdiya hai or upper vale kamreka key ye lijiye uskamre main shaadi keliye job hi saman chahiye sab hai or kuch karna hai kya ??

Dolly :aree bhabhi ji or koi kaam reh gaya tho hum bitiya log kardenge ..aap apna bahuka responsibilities poori kardi hai tho aap apne behen ki responsibility poori karne jaa sakti hai

Umesh : aman main ready hun chale kya ??

Ramesh :are umesh aman tumlog yahi pe hai jao beta der horahe hai vaha viraj bhi tumlogoka intezar kar raha hai chalo

Nisha: aree koi mujhe bhi batayega yaha kya horaha hai koun kaha jaraha hai or ye luggage kiska ..

Aman: humlog jarahe hai nishu

Nisha : kya!! Are you guys serious !! aaplog koi mazak tho nahi kar rahe hai ..yaha meri shaadi honewale hai or tumlog..this is not fair ..umesh bhayya aap bhi !!

Umesh : sorry nishu par kya karu jaana hi padega

Lakshmi : bas nautanki todi zyada hua !! nishu chodo indonoko vaha viraj inka wait karne raha hai

Aman : vaise abhi tho main jarahi hun 5 din baat tum ajana meri bahbi banke

Nisha: hmm aungi nanand ji zara bachke rehna iss bhabhi se kyun ki ye bhabhi aap jaise acchi bhabhi nahi hai

Aman : vaise ye nanad bhi tumlog jaise acchi nahi hai tub hi zara bachke rehna

Sukku :umesh bhaiyya aap yaha kya kar rahe hai viraj jiju tho 10 baar call karchuke hai agli baar vo call nahi karenge vo khud aayenge yaha

Sourav : aane do yaha..kyun ki yaha kisiko bahot accha lagega unki yaha aanese hai na

Keerti : oh ho nishu blushing and all hmmm

Daadi : nishu beta ye aarti lelo maine bhagwans eprarthan ki hai aaj se meri nanni pari badi hogayi hai ab uski shaadi honewali hai bina koi vign ke ye shaadi poora karo ..ye le aarti or prashad

Nisha is about to take arati but sunddenly it fell from dadis hand

Nisha : baunty dhekh kar nahi chal sakta hai kya dekho aarti ki thali gir gayi na niche

Bunty : sorry daadi ..maine dhekha nahi

roopan: hey bhagvan ye tho apshagun hogayi ..pata nahi ye nishu ka shaadi hoga bhi ya nahi ab meri keerti or jwalu ka kya hoga

vimal :bas kar roopan (lakshmi started to cry )

nisha: lakshmi relax mi kuch nahi hua hai ..ye apshagun aisa kuch nahi hota ye ... daadi aab hi pareshan ho maa ko smajayiye na

all cousins try to convince them and aman and umeshreached virajs house

aman: (explains every thing to viraj what had happen )bhai lakshmi chachi bahot pareshan hai or daadi bhi aap ek baar phone karke samjahiyena

viraj : teek hai main baat karta hun aaplog jaake aaram kijiye ..

nisha: hai viraj tujhe meri yaad aagayi kya ?

viraj : oyee hello mujhe hamesha tu yaad rehti hai bas tumjhe meri yaad todi kam aati hai

nisha: accha isiliye hamesha main hi call karta hun ...aaj achanak meri yaad kaise vo bhi tum hi khud hi call kar liya kya baat hai

viraj: viase mine maa se baat karnekeliye call kiya tha

nisha: kyun mujhse baat nahi karni hai kyat ho teek hai main abhi jaake maa ko phone deke aati hun

varaj : nishu dhekho gussa mat hojao yaar ..aman ne mujhe bataya aaj kya hua or vo pareshan hai isiliye main

nisha: accha accha teek hai ye lo derahi hun phone..maa baat karo viraj ka call

lakshmi : hello viraj beta ..kaise ho

viraj: main teek hun maa aap kaise hai ..mujhe pata hai aap parehan hai ..hai na mujhe aman ne sab bataya

lakshmi : vo beta vo

viraj : maa maine nisha ko bohot bohot pyaar karta hun ..chahe job hi hojaye uska saat main kabhi nahi chodungi aap chinta matkijiye or viase ye apshagun aisa kuch nahi hota aap dhekhiyega humdono ki shaadi acchese hogi dontworry maa

laksmi : teek hai beta

viraj: teek hai nahi meri pyaari maa ke chehre pe ek meeti si muskan chahiye ..chaliye ab acchese smile kijiye ..mujhe pata chalega kyun ki meri detective hai vaha

lakshmi : accha mere piche detective chodoge pehle iss shaadi honedo baa main dheklungi

day passes only 2 days left for wedding

virendar: sab function ke hisabse decoration kardena aaj shaam ko sangeet,kal subha haldi or shaam ko shaadi

sukku : teek hai tauji main sab dheklungi aap aaram se baitke chai pijiye or mujhe batate rahiye ...or mere saat hai na sourv or sumit jiju mere madat karnekeliye

dolly : keerti mujhe tho bohot tension horahi hai yaar ye nishu kab ki gayi hai abhi tak aayi nahi aaj uski snageet hai kal shaadi hai iss ladki ka main kya karu agar dadaji ko pata chala tho kya hoga

keerti : call karke dheko na di ..saat main humese kisikobhi leke jaati tho accha hota par ye hai ki sunti nahi

jwalu : ek kaam karte hai viraj jiju ko call karke boldete hai

dolly :aree aisa karna hota tho main kab ki karti par vo unikeliye gift lene gayi hai

sourav: guys kya hua tumlog itna pareshan kyun ho

sukku :keerti bolo kya hua

keerti: vo .ek minit(she close the door)

sumit: kuch serious baat hai kya ??

dolly : sumit vo nishu na bahar gayi hai abhi tak aayi nahi

sourav :kya!! Bahar vo bhi akele tumlog aise kaise janediya kal uski shaadi hai

keerti : hume pata hai..par kya kare ye nishu hamri baat sune tab na..jiju ko kuch gift lane gayi hai par 3 ghante hogayi ahi tak uska pata nahi na phone utarahi hai na uski koi khabar

sukku :teek ahi main jaake dekh ke aata hun kounsi hope main gayi hai

jwalu : vo tho pata nahi..kya lene gayi ye bhi nahi pata ..

lakshmi : nishu darwaza khol na ..kya kar rahi hai ..nishu dadi niche byularahi hai nishu

sourav: ab kya kare

keerti: sacch batana padega ..

and all came to know that nisha is not in home and viraj ,aman and umesh reached ghangwal house

viraj: nisha kaha ab tak tho aajana chahiye tha 5 gahnte hogaye hai ...police complain kare kya ??mujhe koi gift nahi chahiye tha bas vahi mereliye bohot bada gift hai

dadaji : hum kya kare beta iss ladkiko smajha samja ke main thak gaya hun ye sudarne walomainse nahi hai...achpan se apni manmani karneka aadadat hai

umesh : main ek baar call karungi ( he dialed her number) suddenly he fell down

aman : kya hua laddu kay hua ..ye phone ... dadaji nishu ne baat ki hai shayad yahi dekiye abi phone discoonect hua

keerti: bhaiyya uto kya hua bolo

viraj : please batayiye umesh kya hua kya hua nishu ko

umesh: (teary eyes ..his hands were shaking) ni nishuu ko ...aac accident hau hai kisine hospital main admit kiiya hai unhone abhi phone recive kiya or bataya ..vo bohot serious hai jaipoor highway pe bohot badi accident ..

all are shoked by hearing this and as soon as reached the hospital

ramesh: doctor vo meri beti hai doctor please batyiye vo teek hai na

doctor : please aap apne aapko sambhaliye abhi abhi admit kiya hai hum chechup kar rahe hai

nurse: doctor doctor us ladkike haat mai kuch hai shayad vo bohoti strong se pakdi hai usse hosh nahi hai par vo haat nahi chod rahi hai uske haat se bhi bohot khoon aaraha hai

doctor: kya !!chaliye dhekte hai..aap sab yahi pe rahiye

viraj : I don't care mujhe nsihu ko dhekna hai ...with viraj all get inside

sourav: itna khoon nishu ..

viraj: nisha plese uto plese nisha tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga utho kal hamri shaadi hai nisha plese utjao aaj dance karna hai na hame please

doctor: please aap sab bahar jayiye varna jabardasti bahar karwana padega ..please cooperate kijiye hum treatment karna hai please (than all went ouside except viraj)

viraj: (crying) nisha plese uto

doctor: sir please aap bahar jayiye ..dhekiye kuch nahi hoga inhe hume treat karne dijiye kitna blood flow horaha hai please

nurse: doctor isse hosh nahi hai phir bhi vo kisika naam pukar rahi hai suniye ..viraj viraj kehrahi hai

viraj: main hi hun viraj ..nisha nisha main yahi pe hun nisha

doctor: unhe oxygen dijiye ..shayad vo kuch baat karna chati hai aape

nisha: (slowly open her eyes) viraj viraj

viraj: han han main yahi pe hun tumhe kuch nahi hoga han

nisha: handover something in his hand than she became unconscious

viraj: (speechless) doctor isse kya hau

doctor: aap bhar jayiye main inka bandage karunga inhe bohot choot lagi hai isiliye unconscious huyi hai don't worry kuch nahi hoga aap bahar jayiye

sukku : jiju nishu ne baat ki hai kya kaha usne vo teek hai na

lakshmi : kuch tho bolo beta please

viraj: nishu ne ye diya mujhe

dolly : ye kya hai kuch dikayi nahi dera hau khoon se bharihuyi hai

viraj: main isse wash karke aati hun ( and he washed it) he started crying loudly by sseing that ..because its beautiful chain locate with the name of nisha and viraj

all try to console viraj all are breaks down by seeing nisha in that situation

after 4 hours

doctor: dhekiye hamse job hi hoskata tha hum sab kuch karchuke hai ..par patient ne koi respond nahi kar rahi hai ..aise main unka bachna bahot mushkil hai..humne operation bhi ki hai dhekte hai 24 hours observation mainrakte hai hosha aay tho teek hai nahi aay tho shyad vo permanent coma main jasakti hai

viraj: nahi nahi aisa nahi hosakta ..kal hamari shaadi hai vo bilkul teek hohjayegi ..paapa ,,maa aap boliye na inhe meri nishu ko kuch nahi hoga..hain dadaji

ramesh: bauji aapne bilkul teek kaha tha maine bachpan main kuch jyada freedom dedi nishu ko apni man mani karnekeliye ab dhekiye vo apni manmani kar rahahi hai humsabko pareshani maindalke

dadaji : meri poti bohot strong hai dheklena abhi vobed se utke phirse bhagna shuru kardegi dhekte rehna( crying)

sukku : dadaji,dadi aap sab ghar jayiye ..hum sba hain yah hum dheklenge

dolly :han dadi ..vaise itna saara log yaha rehna allowed nahi hai

sourav: han virendar tauji,vimal tayiji aap bhi jayiye ,,

keerti: mummy,paapa aap log bhi chalo saat main jwalu or bunty ko leke jao

viraj:aap log chinta matkijiye kal tak usko hosh aajayegi job hi baat hai main aapko call karke batate rahunga

next day evening al gathered in hospital

dadi ;sab kuch teek hota tho aaj meri bacchi ka shaadi ..ab tak vo joda pehnke apne dulhe ka waot karti rehti thi

viraj: tho kya hua dadi aap uski dulha dulhan ko hosh aane ka wait kar raha hai bas

ramesh : doctor kya meri beti ko hosh aagay kya

doctor: aap lg chahe tho aap unhe dheksakkdte hai par its impossible unka hosh main aana ...unka heartbeat sab low horaha hai

viraj: bas bohot hua ..aise kaise vo mujhe chodkar jayegi usne mujhse vaada kiya tha vo abh kabhi mujhe chodkar nahi jayegi or main bhi maa se vaada kiya hai main nisha ka saat kabhi nahi chodunga ..usse vapas aana hi hoga main baat karta hun usse

all went inside

viraj: ( eyes wetted by seeing nisha) ye sab kya hai nisha hai ...bohot hua apni manmaani ab sbko gussa aaya hai bas karo chalo utho utho na ...utna nishu please

nisha utna (crying ) nishu dhek nishu tu janti hai na main tumhare bina adoora hun ..tum muujhe chod ke kais jaasakti ho nishu ..sabse kehti ho ki main diya hua vaada kabhi nahi todta hun ab kya hua tune vaada todhi diya na ..please nishu muje akele chodke mat jao na..vo tumhi ho sirf tumhi ho tumhare vajah se hi mujhe ye parivaar milraha hai ab tum mujhe chodke gayi tho main phirse akela hojauga ..uthpo na please ..tumhare bina meri zindagi adoora hai nishu bilkul adoora hai

jwalu :jiju nishu bro ne ungli hilayi abhi abhi maine dhekha

doctor: ek minit main chekupa karta hun...kamal hai miracle hogayi inka heartbeat tho normal stage pe aaya hai now she is perfectly all right

nisha: (open her eyes) main tujhe chodke kaha jau ..zindagi bar pareshan karneka vaada jo kiya hai kaise chali jaati

all are happy

dadaji :tune hamsabko darhidiya tha

nisha:aadat jo hai bachpan se.

dadi: vbas ab bohoth hua pareshan karna ab jaldise teek hojao

nisha: mujhe kya hua teek honeko ..mian bilkul teek hun

viraj: ilove u nisha agli baar aise bina batye chali gayi tho dheklena

nisha :agli baar tujhe saat main hi leke jaunga teek hai

viraj: mere zindagi adoora honese bachaliya ..and he fill sindoor on nisha's forehead

and all are happy

Guys am ending this story here ..thank you so much everyone for encouraging..and liking and commenting on my updates and also thank you so much for bearing me..am really happy that I got many friends here ..NIRAJ rocks always...love u guys

Edited by aarvi123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
True love prevails always no matter how many hurdles might come.👏
You made a good beginning as a result the ending is also good😳
May u come again with a nice FF/SS or atleast an OS of NIRAJ after marriage😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AISHU183

True love prevails always no matter how many hurdles might come.👏

You made a good beginning as a result the ending is also good😳
May u come again with a nice FF/SS or atleast an OS of NIRAJ after marriage😛


Thank you so much dear 😊 ya sure definitely i ll try
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Wow... Write another stories now... U ended it... U r not leaving forum na...

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