NIRaj ff ## Adoore Tumhare Bina##(part 50 updated on page 62) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anshi1509

it's awesome and i loved it

continue soon...
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Thank you
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Part 9


nisha : thank u sourav par tu iss baare main kisiko batayega tho nahi na


Sourav : kabhi aisa kiya hai maine tumhe diye huye vaade ko main kabhi nahi todingi par nishu.


Nisha : kya hua


Sourav : teri man main uskeliye feelings jyada badnese pehle tu ek baar usse batkaro vo kya sochta hai tumhare bare main...vo bhi aisa hi sochta hai tho teek hai tumse zyada main kush hun par aisa nahi hai tho tu


nisha : han hsn main strong hun ..par aise kaise puchu isse hamare dosti par asar pada tho


Sourav : dek tu tension mat le usse sahi vaqt aane par hi puch na.vo chod ye teri cousins abhi tak aaye kyun nahi


Rukma: nishu di aap yaha hai .dadaji ne sabko hall main bulaya hai


Nisha : kyun kya hua ??


Rukma : pata nahi didi dolly di karti di sab vaha hai bas aapka intezar hai


sourav : ye lob kab agaye pata hi nahi chala


Rukma: abhi abhi aaye hai ..nishu di aap jaldise aajo


Nisha : ab kounsa bomb fadnewala hai kisine kuch kiya kya chal sourav dekte hai (and both left )


In the hall


dadaji : sab log agaye hai na. .tho suniye puchle hafte dolly ko dhekne ladke wale aaye the na uske baare main aap sabse kuch baat karni hai


Sourav : nishu ye ghar ka mamala hai mera yaha rehna teek nahi hoga tho main chalta hun kal milungo


Nisha : rukna tu kounsa bahar wala hai duffer


Sourav : nishu please teek nahi hoga (and he started to leave )


Dadaji : sourav tu kaha jaraha hai


Sourav : vo dadaji ghar


Dadaji : kyun tumhe sunayi nahi deta main kuch kehrahi thi


Sourav : dadaji aap sab aapki family matter discuss karnewale the isiliye main


Dadi : je ke baat hui ...tu kounsa paraya hai beta tu bhi iss ghar ka hi beta jaise umesh sukku bunty vaise tu bhi hai ..


dadaji : sunliya na ab mere baat sab dhyan se suniye unsabko hamare dolly bahot pasand hai tho vo jaldise shadi karke apne dolly ko leke jana chahti hai tho maine pandit ji se baat kar liya or 4 mahine baad shaadi ka muhurat nikla hai


all gangwals are happy and wishing each others


It's morning


Nisha went for college ..except nisha all cousins are gathered in terrace


Jwalu : kisine bhi kuch socha hai kya kal nishu bro ka b'day hai kya karna hai


Keerti : iss bar na hum nishu ko ek surprise party rahenge


Sourav : (enters ) are guys aap logo ne mujhe yaha kyun bulaya aap logo ko aaj kuch kaam nahi hai kya ..pata hai main kitni mushkil se boss ko manakar chutti leke aayahun


sukku : chutti leke aaya hai na mujhe tho laga tu apna kidney deke aaya hai (he laughs)


umesh : sukku chup. ..sourav kal nishu ki b'day hai na usiki planning chal raha hai


Sourav : wow tho is baar kya socha hai


Dolly : vo main bataungi ..hum na iss baar nishu ko uski favourite place orphanage main party karenge vo bohot kush hogi


Sourav : idea tho badiya hai ...uss bacchoke saat nishu bohot kush hogi


keerti : or usse or bhi kuch surprise dena hai ..kuch socho na guys usse bohot kush hona chahiye


All are thinking. ... ...


Sourav : main kuch kahu


Dolly : yes sourav bol na


Sourav : kyu hum uss party pe nishu ka naya dost ko invite kiya tho


umesh : isme usse surprise honewali kya baat hai


Sourav : dhek jaha tak main nishu ko janti hun vo aisa kisko jaake nahi batadegi aaj mere b'day hai ..tho am sure uska ye dost ko bhi nahi pata kal uska b'day hai tho hum usse bulake nisha ko surprise denge


Sukku : hmm idea tho accha hai par uski vo naya dost ki hum kaise pata karenge na vo nam
janti hai or hum bhi usse kabhi nahi mila hai


Sourav : yahi ek mokha hoga hume usse milne ka


Dolly : nishu ke pass uska number hai hun kaise bhi karke uske phone se number pata karke usse invite karenge


Jwalu : so guys nishu bro ki mobile leke aane ki zimedari meri hai teek hai


Precape : cousins invite viraj for b'day party and viraj or cousins ka aamna samna

Edited by aarvi123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanx fr updating dear..really waiting fr d next part..nice one dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanx fr updating dear..really waiting fr d next par

thank you dear
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You are gradually building up the suspense. I am really eager for the next part now. Continue soon.
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#96
wow..
viraj aur cousins ka aamna samna
waiting eagerly for your next update..
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Amazing update , pls continue soon.😛
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Part 10





keerti : so guys sara plan ready hai na








Umesh : han hum sabki b'day ko nishu ne special banati hai iss baar hum uski b'day ko special banadenge










Sukku : ham umesh bhaiyya aap cake banadene kyun ki nishu ko pasand ayega vo chocolate wala









dolly : han han sab banadenge ..meri aakri b'day party hoga is ghar main ye










Keerti : dolly di aap aise kyun kehrahe ho










Sourav : aree buddu dolly ka kehne ka matlap ye hai ki miss dolly banke ye iski aakri b'day party hai. .baad main vo iss ghar ki beti se jyada uss ghar ki bahu hogi










Dolly : sourav tu mujhe tang mat karo









Sourav : accha sacch kaha tho kisiko bura lagraha hai










Jwalu : bas bas ab bohot hua sab kaam pe lag jayiye nishu di shaam ko aajayegi unke aanese pehle sab ready honi chahiye. Ye accha hua kal Sunday hai












Keerti : han Umesh bhaiyya jwalu aapdono Milkar cake ki tayyari kijiye or main sukku dolly di or sourav jake orphanage main baat karke kal shaam ke party ke bare main baat karke sab intezam karke aate hai









Dolly : han or San yad rakna nishu ko iss baare main kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye












And all left for their entire works...nisha already informed viraj that she is not able to meet him on sunday , she want to spend time with her family..all ghangwal cousins making some trick to snatch nisha cellphone but it doesn't works...












Finally its time to celebrate nisha's b'day it's 12 a.m. .








dolly : jwalu nishu kya kar rahi hai










Jwalu : vo laptop leke kuch kar rahi hai







Sourav : chalo Sab bars banke hi wala hai lakshmi aunty uncle .sab ko bulake ayi










ramesh : hun sab aagaye hai beta











Dolly : dadaji aap bhi! !!










Dadaji : kyun beta main nahi aasakta hun kya ?









Umesh : aisa nahi hai dadaji aap kabhi aise iss vaqt nahi aate hai na isiliye










mohan: vo kya hai ki kal main or bauji ajmer jarahe hai kuch kaam hai isiliye rho kal hun nahi rehenge hum parso hi aane wale hai












Sourav : accah hus chali ye sab umesh tune cake liya hai na thi sab chalo










And all went to nisha's room and all wish her happy b'day and she cuts the cake and rake blessings from all the elders and all five her blessings and gifts to her after celebrating her b'day all went to bed











It's morning










sukku : jwalu nishu ki phone se number kiya hai kya tune










Jwalu : nahi bro nishu bro ne phone chodke kahi nahi jarahi hai












Sourav : iss keliye hi be sirf 2 log help karsakte hai











Dolly : koun? ?












Sourav : bunty and dadi











Keerti: how blah vo kaise teekse batana










Sourav explain his plan, and dolly convince dadi for this










Bunty : nishu di nishu di









Nisha : kya hua bunty













Bunty : please nishu di aap apna phone do na mujhe game khelna hai
.Please mana mat karo please sirf ade ghante please









Nisha : accha teek hai par sirf ade ghante keliye vo bhi mere samne bait kar khelo









Bunty : ok and he started to play












Sourav : keerti dheka maine kaise kaha tha vaisa hi horah hai nishu ne bunty ko vahi bitadiya








Keeti ; han yaar ..main dadi ko message karti hun or rukma ki bhejti hun










Rukma enters in nisha's room











Nisha : rukna kya hua ti aisa kyun aarahi ho










Rukma : nishu di pata nahi dadi ko kya hua hai vo achanak se bahot tez se saans lerahi hai aap jaldi aao na mujhe dar lagraha hai











Nisha : kya !!! kya hua dadi ko (she rushes to daddi's room) Dadi dadi kya hua hai aapko







Dadi : manne ke hua hai beta tu itna tension main kyun hai










Nisha : dadi ye rukma batarahi thi ki aapne bohot tez se saans lerahi thi










Dadi : han tho iska matlap ye nahi hai manne kuch hua hai main tho yoga kar rahi thi Vo t.v main kal dhikaya tha aise saans lena hai usse dekar shayad ye galat samj gayi hai












Rukma : mujhe kya pata tha ..









Dadi : chalo koi baat nahi issi haha ne mare poti ko mare pass baitne ka mokha tho mila. ..beta todi mare pass bait na aaj







Nisha : teek hai dadi .rukma tu ja hun donokeliye ek acchi si chai banke le aa











Rukma : teek hai didi










Sukku : guys jaise humne socha tha vaisa hi horaha hai tho jaldi se usse phone karke invite karenge ..and all rushes to nisha's room









Bunty : sukku bhaiyya ye lo phone aapne jaise kaha tha vaisa hi kiya










Dolly : thank u bounty u r the best bro..ab chalo jake khelo








umesh : sab kuch teek hai par ab phone karke bulaya koun











Keerti : sourav karega vaise ye plan usika hi hai










Sourav : main! !! Nahi main kaise mujse nahi hoga









Sukku : aree tujhe hi karna padega sourav











Dolly : ek minit ek minit. .yaha hum sabme choti or bohot samjdar cousin hai Jwalu vo hi phone karke bulayenge tho teek rahega and all convinced her










Jwalu : accha teek hai ..ek kaam karte hai nishu bro ki mbl se hi baat karungi or call history delete kardungi









Umesh : jo bhi karo pehle call karo yar varna nishu aajayega or hamara plan flop hojayega










Jwalu : teek hai yaha recent call list main dost name se ek number save hai vahi hoga main call karungi and she called









Viraj : happy by seeing nisha's name in his Mobil display and immediately received. .hai mujhe lagta ki aaj tu phone nahi karegi










jwalu : main nishu bro nahi hun opps sorry Nisha nahi hun








Viraj : sorry aap jwalu hai na












Jwalu : aapko kaise pata mera naam













Viraj : aapki nishu bro ne hume sab batadiya hai aap sabko bare main or aap jaise hi nishu bro kaha mujhe pata chala aap jwalu hai














Jwalu : wow aap kitna intelligent hai. .. aap hi hai na nisu bro ka dost his se road pe bevajah hi dant lagayi thi vo aap hi hai na












Viraj : ji vo main hi hun











Jwalu : accha aapko pata hai aaj nishu bro ka b'day hai











Viraj : what !!!! Par nisha ne hume kuch nahi bataya iske bare main










Jwalu : vo aisa hi hai. .aap bura mat maniye. ...aaj hum sab cousins ne milkar unkeliye ek surprise party rakha hai isiliye unko surprise denekeliye aapko vaha aana padega please mana mat kijiye it's a request











Viraj : par mera aana teek hoga kya










Jwalu : please aap mana mat karo nishu bro aapko dhek ke bahot kush hogi please kamse kam unkeliye aajayiye











Viraj : teek hai aap itna kehrahe tho mai aajaungi kaha aana hai











Jwalu : 6.30 at orphanage please time se aajayega









Viraj : teek hai and thank you mujhe invite karnekeliye









Jwalu : no mention or ha nishu bro ko mat batayiye maine aapko call kiya tha or main ab call history se aapke naam delete karungi taki unhe koi shak mai hoga










viraj : accha teek hai. .. main time pe aajaungi











Jwalu : hum sab aapka wait karenge bye ..(and she ends the call )










Dolly : am exited aaj bohot maza ayega .sourav sab kuch ready hai na vaha











Sourav : sab ready hai bas shaam honeki intezar hai










It's evening all the cousins reached orphanage except nisha and bunty






Umesh : aree yaar sukku sab ready hai na










sukku : han sab ready hai or nishu bhi aarahi hai









Sourav : par nishu bina kuch sawal kiye maan gayi kya yaha aane keliye







Keerti : how blah sourav vo nishu hai aise kaise maanegi. .vo accha hua jwalu ne bunty ko kaha ki usse yaha aana hai bolke. .usne zid kiya nishu maan gayi











Jwalu : Sab ready hai bas nishu bro ki vo dost nishu bro se pehle aana chahiye











Dolly : han yar...agar vo late aagaya tho










Sukku : aisa kuch nahi hoga vo aajayega ..guys dheko vaha ek car aarahi hai shayad nishu ki dost hi hoga









sourav : ye car tho meri boss viraj sir ka hai









Keerti : sirf tumhari boss ke pass hi aisa car hai kya pagal chalo dhekte hai











Sourav : nahi ye viraj sir hai vo yaha kyun aaye hai kahi ye tho nahi Nisha ke dost














Umesh : dekte hai pata chala jayega









Viraj come near cousins with bunch of flowers and gifts in his hand










Dolly : yaar ye tho celebrity hai hum uske saamne khade hai Jwalu pinch me








Keerti : shut up dolly di











sourav : hi sir aap yaha











Viraj : hi kyun hum yaha nahi aasakte kya













Sourav : nahi aisa nahi bas aisa hi pucha












Viraj : mujhe yaha jwala ne invite kiya









All ate shocked and looks at jwalu










jwalu : maine! !aapko bulaya nahi nahi aapko shayad koi galatfemi hogi maine nahi bulaya aapko Sach main











Viraj : arre aap itna mat ghabrayiye main koi or nahi main vahi hun aapki nishu bro ki dost







All are shocked










Edited by aarvi123 - 10 years ago
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Thank you dear
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Cousins shocked and you rocked!
Awesome update Aarvi!

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