19-07-2015, NIRAJ - FF -SECRECY - CHAPTER 8 at page 24 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

Wow Nishkala

Its amazing
I could imagine the scene with every passing word👏

Thank you ...I'm glad that you could imagine ...I was sacred that whether everyone would scold me ...lol...just kidding ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: heart_nishkala

Thanks a ton dear...
I actually now came to know that this chapter is good after reading these comments ...
10 times is a lot ...you must be having it recited by now then ...lol...
Thank you so much ...I'll update I LOVE HER ANYWAY first and the this ...


yah...i have memorized it.i too think so😛😛
i will wait for it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: heart_nishkala

Actually really I have no idea how I write...lol...but ya ! You try once ...actually , don't go to think much about the ff , just write whatever flashes to your mind about a particular scene ...that's what I do ...like in the first chapter , my only thought was the raging them with Nithya ...and as I kept writing the chapter came out ..that's it ..try once ...
Thank you so much 😳👏

Thank You so much for the tips! 🤗 Will definitely consider them. I actually have to do an assignment for school on writing so that's why I was asking you. And these tips will definitely help! So once again thanks!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Thank you so so so so much ...

NIRAJ OS : SECRECY : CHAPTER 2 :

PRECAP : Niraj talk ...

After that they both sit beside each other in the first row ...both hearts and beating widely and now and then their faces are turning into tomato ...and then they didn't really realise that nisha's name was called ...The principal was amused by nisha's new behaviour ( principal that is shekar knew Nisha from when she was young )...he again called her name and she came out of her dream land ...This is the first ever time that Nisha was lost in thoughts ...She went and received the award ...
After the ceremony , the principal called her to his cabin ...

Shekar - " Nisha , how come you're hear ? "

Nisha - " what do you mean sir ? "

Shekar - " no ...like I mean how come your father agreed you to study here in India ..? "

Just then shekar received a call from Ramesh singhania ( nisha's father )...

Ramesh - " Shekar ! You know what! Nisha has gone missing from the past one week ...She left a note saying that she'll be alright and she has to find herself and she'll be back when she feels to come back ...is my security suffocating her ..."

Shekar was shocked to hear this ...but manged to lie ...

Shekar - " don't worry ...sometimes you have to let your child be free ...you can't always keep her in the cage ...Even a bird doent want to be in a cage and why does she need to always be under your protection ...now relax ! And take care of your health and incase I get to know something about Nisha , I'll inform you ..okay"

Ramesh - " thank you so much shekar ...I felt relaxed hearing to your words ...Anyway , thank you ...your my best friend ...bye ..take care ..."

After they finished talking shekar came near Nisha ...

Shekar - " nisha ! How could you do this ...? Look how much worried is your father ...why did you come to India ...you always had whatever you need in New York ..."

Nisha - " please sir ...can't I have my own freedom ...I feel caged there ...uff ! Always two bodyguards behind me and everyone respects me so much taht I can't even make friends ...yes ! Of course I can make friends but I didn't even get a true friend from 19 years ...and you still think that I should have been like that ...and if you tell anyone taht I'm singhania , I'll not be here anymore and no one in the world will be having and idea where I am ? Decide what you want ...! "

Shekar - " okay ...I'll not tell anything to anyone but incase your father comes to know about your presence hear ...you know waht happens ...right ? "

Nisha - " I'll look after that ...okay then I've my first class ...I'll take your leave now "

Shekar - " one minute , you're good at archery right ...so you can practice shooting here anyway , you're into shooting and if you need I can change your time table ..."

Nisha - " thank you so much shek! Oops , sorry sir "

Shekar - " it's okay ...actually , I feel good if you call me shek ...As you've been calling me like that from 18 years ..."

Nisha - " no ...I have to practice calling you as sir ...otherwise without my knowledge I may call you shak in front of everyone ...which will turn to be a disaster "

Shekar - " okay then , have a good day ..."

Nisha - " thank you ,..."

Viraj was hearing all these from outside ...actually , he wanted a sign from shekar to a application and heard the conversation ...he was shocked to hear that Nisha came here without seeking permission ...technically , she ran and came from her house to the school...viraj did understand this as he was also similar to Nisha ...

After some hours of classes , it was finally lunch time break ...Nisha went to the canteen ...She didn't know where to sit ...She wanted to be alone but now she didn't have any problem to make friends as her true identity was concealed ...
She looked around and saw only a seat left and that was of course beside viraj ...She smiled that she got another chance to get to sit with him and went and sat beside him ...All the eyes was at niraj by now ...( actually , at VHS - Victoria high school , juniors don't sit with serious and that too viraj singh rathore)...

Viraj - " so miss singhania , no one knows that you are here ...! " he whispered

Nisha who was eating pizza dropped her pizza down and it feel on the table ...

Viarj - " I heard the conversation between you and principal ..."

Nisha got so frustrated that he heard the conversation and just went from there without speaking nor having her lunch ...viraj was like ' what the hell ! She didn't even have her lunch '...
Nisha went to the shooting ground and went to the first table where the gun was kept ...She took it and aimed and shoot one after another ...All went and hit bulls eye of course ...
Viarj saw her there and smiled at her and came near her ...he held her waist tight ...Nisha was shocked ...chills went through her spins ...he came near her ear and whispered " I promise that I won't tell it to anyone angel ..."...She was like ' I just want to hug him now ' ...He held her hand and waist more closer to him and shoot and it of course hit the bulls eye ...
This was the first day of school and Nisha felt as if she had loved him for decades and was always with him ...her life maybe existed in him , she thought ...
Here viraj never in his 20 years he felt like This ...and nd that too this was Nisha's first day of school and it was like love at first sight for them ...they were so close now ...both felt embarrassed. ...they hardly knew each other ...but they were so close ...

Precap - niraj will stay In the same house ...

P.S : do leave your likes and comments ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yipee! First one to comment!! OMG OMG OMG!! I was literally waiting for ages!! This was AWESOME!!!! Its so cool to see that they don't really have any "formalities" between them...Please update the next part soon...
Edited by CrazyMe_04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤗G
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Waiting for next apdate

Edited by dreamyfarah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome as usual...:D...and d precap..niraj will stay in same house...very interesting...:D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U r an excellent writer nishkala...its really gods gift to u...that u r blessed with such an awesome talent...about d update..I seriously don't hv words to appreciate... Ur imagination level is too good dear..jus awesome... 👏 👏 thanx fr d PM dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg...that was soo good...its like all new niraj...but still that old magic is there...plzzz cont asap😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazyMe_04

Yipee! First one to comment!! OMG OMG OMG!! I was literally waiting for ages!! This was AWESOME!!!! Its so cool to see that they don't really have any "formalities" between them...Please update the next part soon...

I'm so happy that you liked it ...finally the update is up ...and thank you so much ...yeh !

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