Dil tho pagal hai... A NIBIR SHORT STORY - Updated! Chapter-2 Pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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^^
Thank u.😃

@all: Thank you all for liking the SS and your patience. 😳 Plz bear with me for 2 -3 days more, waiting for my laptop to get fixed; till then if u haven't u can chk out my other Nibir OS: budding love. 😳 Thank u.
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Awesome Nikki. Loved it.. Can't wait for the next...
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very nyc one nd cute nibir scenes... update soon n pm me... waiting...
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Really nice 😊 Update soon, want to read more.
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Thnk u Krystal and Amaya!. :) Will update soon...
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Hi friends! So here is the next installment of this SS. Plz do read the first chapter once more to get into the feel of this one. Hope you guys like it. Happy Reading! :)

Genre: Angst monster!

CHAPTER -2



Nisha's pov:


She was angry, very angry but with whom she wasn't clear yet. She wasn't sure whether she was angry with herself, Kabir or her wretched fate which brought him to her. All she knew was she wanted to fling more than just the hair brush on him that morning!

What did he think of himself? Some kind of happy go lucky movie hero who just wants to make everybody happy? Seriously what did he think of himself? He will come, make everybody happy, make everybody like him, make himself indispensable and then what? Just up and leave? What did he think will happen to the people whom he would leave behind?

What would happen to her mom who now considered him as her eldest child? Of her dad who finds him as his newest partner in crime to rebel against dadaji- the one who will literally dance to his tunes? To dadaji who finally found his favorite grandson who has the sole right to call him "dadu ", to both chachus who had a great time bullying him , to chachis who are totally fallen for his honey sweet words, to all her brothers and sisters who believe he is the only one who can manage her at her worst?

Seriously, what would happen to everybody who love him... what would happen to her? Because she tried ... she really really did... to not to fall for him...But looks like fate was having a great time making fun of her...

At first she thought all boys were vile creatures and then came Viraj sir who changed that whole concept...She thought she fell head over heels for him... silly girl didn't know what 'crush' was before that. Then came the heart break and volleys of insults to her and her family's self esteem ... Still she thought it was love ... Well that is until real love found her... Like Julius Ceaser, True Love came, saw and finally and totally conquered her and well now she knew what actual heart break was... for everytime she looked at the calendar hanging in the kitchen, reminding her constantly of the time running out...a part of her heart was silently cracking ...

What's worse were the nightmares... She would get up and search for him in the middle of the night and not finding him in the bed would run around the house searching for him shouting his name... only to be woken by a concerned Kabir asking what was wrong with her and bringing her a glass of water. She would say it was nothing and try to go back to sleep, only this time a little more closer to him...as even though the pillows had gone ,the distance still remained ... He would silently caress her hair until she had fallen asleep ... But the nightmares recurred and the frequency was frighteningly increasing as the day the dreaded nightmare would finally become a reality was nearing...
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TBC

AN:
Sry this was kind of angsty. Next will be Kabir's POV and then finally some ❤️ !

So dears would love to read your thoughts about this so plz do take a minute to share it. And yeah I'm open to concrit too. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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no correction required i hate interfering on the
the writers flow as it is 😆

awesome pov and update..its beautiful waiting for
kabirs pov now 🤗
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welcome and my pleasure buddy 🤗
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It was a nice update!
A bit sad, but I could connect to Nisha's emotions...
Great job
Please update sooner this time 😊

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