Niraj Ss- Intezaar part 2 up

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys before you want to bash me I am really sorry that I had not been posting my FF's..my work scheduled has become very tight and with my marriage getting fixed, no time for breathing.I felt after starting an FF ,giving a part and leaving it hanging was not nice. But now have come up with an SS..Hope you do read. Will try and update this fast.

Niraj Ss-Intezaar

Her POV..

" It has been 2 years now... I am returning back to Jaipur Many things changed and so did I... Oh Wai Guru! Please give me the strength to face them all."

She felt his manly hands slide into hers locking it.She looked at him and his eyes suggested support, belief, confidence and everything. Her life support.

The flight from Dubai landed in Delhi and she made a call.

Lakshmi's hand trembled as she kept the reciver down.

Sukku in a second knew who it was..

80 miles away..

Umesh ran behind his daughter with Aman tailing behind them.

The little angel ran and clung to her Chachu ,her superman...

Angel-" Chachu me no milk...yuck..."

Viraj singh Rathode picked up the little angel..

Viraj-" Nishu you should have milk or how will you take care of me?"

The little one pouted and took the milk glass.

The whole Gangwal family along with Viraj were about to start when Umesh walked in wiping his tears...

Dadi got up and immediately asked him what was wrong..

Umesh-"Nisha she has come to India..."

The word Nisha was the one which connected them all ..It brought emotions from joy,happiness ,love and finally guilt in many members...

The time had come to redeem themselves...

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achirasingh16 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start...and welcome back!!
but a confusion...chachu means father's younger brother, no?????is viraaj having any elder brother???
plz update soon...i wanna clear the confusion...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its really nice but one cofusion...ummm is the little girl Nisha??? N she is calling viraj chachu and who's younger brother is viraj???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excellent story👏👍🏼
Waiting for untying of knots
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Posted: 10 years ago
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good start with many confusions
pls clear them soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations dear..fr ur marriage...
Its an superb start..pls try to update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations on your marriage and all the best.

Nice start,even I am also slightly confused.

But can wait and please do continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting concept! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Past of this story is a continuation of story from the current NAUC track

Part 1a

Nemichand Gangwal aged 75 had come a long way in his life .Pride and honour mattered the most but it had cost him the most. Two and a half years back, his one wrong decision had cost his family's happiness.

Nisha Gangwal got down and dragged her suitcase to the car.India, brought back lots of her memories..

Umesh patted his daughter Nishita to sleep. Aman was teary eyed as she gazed at Nisha's photo on the bed stand. The one Umesh clicked after Nisha climbed the Jaipur fort.

Arjun Palace...

Viraj barged in hurriedly startling Vasundhra..

Viraj-" Ma she is back..."

Vasu -" Finally"..A big burden from her chest was lifted.

Viraj rushed to open the door of his room. He looked at the various photo frames of Mrs.Nisha Rathod

Nisha closed her eyes as tears escaped her eyes. She clutched the mangalsutra in her hand. The last knot which held her back to Viraj Singh Rathod. She leaned back as memories flashed in front of her.

Flashback

Nisha closed her eyes as her Maang was filled. The mangalsutra came next. She was feeling completely numb .She tripped and was about to fall but was caught .She opened her eyes to come face to face with Viraj Singh Rathod...

The car's break brought her to the present.

Nisha rang the bell and waited as she heard the footsteps from the other side. Ramesh felt his happy song before he even saw her.

Nisha felt better as her father hugged her.

So what do you think? Some points cleared? New twists coming up..Flashback will be in bits and pieces.So who do you think is Nisha's husband? Please comment to know this soon.

Edited by smritiz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Are Viraj and Nisha marrieed? Very confused...But please I want only them both to get married...Amazig start..Whe will you update next

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