Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 67

Originally posted by: nushy1995

I agree... The description suits ArMu more than Piansh but kya kare, it is the Nazar forum and stories thread not YMMKD. To Piansh par hi likhna pada...

I think we could share stories in the interaction thread too or make a new one. Because let's face it, Ek PiyAnsh pe aur kitna likhenge? Aur hum jitna bhi amateur kyun na ho, ek hi idea bas different proportion of kissing aur hugging ke sath to present nahi karenge. Because I had read such repeated stories of same writers in the Telly Update website. To kabhi na kabhi to humne aur bhi cheez likkhi hain. To woh bhi share kar sakte hain! 😊

I agree... Ek Piansh par aur kitna likh sakte hain hum log?

And yes, ek hi idea different proportion ke saath to definitely present nahi karenge...

Even I have read a few FFs in the TellyUpdates website... And mostly they use the same concept.

So, yes kabhi na kabhi to kuch na kuch different likhna hi padega...

Originally posted by: nushy1995

One word - SATYANASH 🤪 🤪 🤪

Tabhi to hum keh rahe the that I have brutally murdered the original story... And isiliye I was saying ki ye poora ka poora nonsense hai.

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

I agree... Ek Piansh par aur kitna likh sakte hain hum log?

And yes, ek hi idea different proportion ke saath to definitely present nahi karenge...

Even I have read a few FFs in the TellyUpdates website... And mostly they use the same concept.

So, yes kabhi na kabhi to kuch na kuch different likhna hi padega...

Had you written any other FF on other couples?

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Had you written any other FF on other couples?

Nope... Never...

I had never written any story before. Ek to I don't watch many shows and know about many couples. Then secondly, I was not on IF. And thirdly, I considered my ideas as totally bakwas and crazy.

The Pr track was the first time I ever tried writing anything. Uske baad, since you guys liked that TS, I continued writing other stories too...

So, basically Nazar is the first show on which I wrote something...

Interesting!

I have seen a lot of shows but deep attachment formed with only a couple of them. YMMKD was amazing so I could never think beyond the ending. I read a couple of FFs in their thread but as usual, the one that attracted me the most was left unfinished. Same with another one that I had read on Watpad but only one chapter. Seriously! Writers shouldn't post unless they are absolutely certain about their schedule.

Bhootu - I wrote one only to satisfy myself and then another one when the show got over. Again, out of frustration.

Before that I didn't even know that I could write.

So I just wrote an alternating end for Krishnadasi because they messed it up at the very end. Made a friend on Watpad and letter wrote that customized romantic story for her.

I thought that was it because it actually takes a lot of time to write something at least logical.

But Nazar again prompted me and now I am out of ideas. I guess, I'll complete the current TS for now and don't know if I'll ever really write anything or not.

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

It's a good read Nikki, written well. Emotions, of both were understandable. Pia controlling her emotions, fighting them and Ansh protecting his laptop.

Thank you so much... 😊

But then I felt it had loopholes,

For starters, in heavy rain a single person also gets totally wet with an umbrella, and here both are sharing, so they will be totally drenched with the laptop. Felt you could have used a simple or practical reference than rain, here.

Well, yes it did have loopholes...

Laptop ka to we can assume that the laptop bag is a waterproof one, nahi? 😆

Baaki yes, the setting could have been different but the original one was actually set in rain only... To I got this idea from that setting. Baaki this one is completely opposite to the original one that I read...

They using powers was wise as they could have reached faster, but that's fine as range of emotions wouldn't have come.

Exactly... Using powers was wise but then ye scene nahi ban sakta tha na!!

Also this whole thing reminds me of a show scene, I saw which was hilarious, ofc a different situation.

Achha?? Kaun sa?

😊

Yes.

Okay, 🤣

That doesn't matter, you take an inspiration or anything but the piece you present should make sense, or have some logic.

Yes!! I said.

Well it was from Ishqbaaz, if you want to know I will write about it in daily interaction thread...don't want to bore you guys!

So am gonna merge replies,

Nushy - I agree with, pura Satyansh of original plot, like a coffee sequence in rain or anything more simple also would be great. Some how even I felt, didn't suit much to them. Like you get a block, and as Nushy said, try writing on other couples, characters, crossovers or maybe make new characters. Cos we can't forever keep writing on Nazar, ofc in between we can always be back. Possibly post in respective forums or FF forum too.

Even I have seen people writing same things, on different plots.

Again, I agree on attachment theory and to write, you need a deep connect. Infact, I had tried writing v few on different shows. Would even have liked to share one with you guys, but as we say, connect maybe missing totally and you guys would be like, kya boring hai.

Wow, that's interesting you wrote!!

I agree totally with you, on how can people leave things incomplete, wattpad I quit cos a few of my fav stories, people just vanished. Then, even I did a few times on IF, actually once, cos whole inspiration hit ground, and had warned people pehle hi, that's not my cup. Second time, people wanted me to continue, but I had designed it as a One Shot, and sometimes, you continue it, essence and charm totally dilutes. Hence I decided not to do.

Okay, good luck and about writing, yes, as per moods!

Nikki - Yes, you brutally murdered it!

Actually Madhura, I won't be. Because, it's not just FFs, for how long can we stick to PiyAnsh/Nazar only. As Nikki always says she hasn't seen much and at this point I am not watching anything new so we can't always keep talking about Nazar, no? I prefer talking or even writing on different shows. Like, I know I might bore you guys but as dramatic as it is now, over the years Grey's showed so many things that on each topic we could discuss. One doesn't really need to have a connection to the show to talk about a particular topic. So my mantra is - talk it out. 😆 😆 😆

As far as FFs are concerned, I believe here we have an advantage. Because when we watch, there are a lot of things to consider like dialogue delivery or voice modulation. But when we read, we start imagining it in our head and at that point, it's the writer's and our own vision that works. I had read a multi-fandom FF once and it was amazing. Although there were certain characters that I didn't recognize but overall the writer was amazing and the flow was so nice that it was a story on its own.

So I for one, would really love to read your stories and also share my previous ones. Because, I told you once, even if it's one single person, when we create something, we do like to share our creation. And definitely we have explored other things in those stories.

So go ahead, post yours. 😊

By the way, we have been writing on Piansh, RiAd, the entire Rathod family, Sharma family and Naman and GM.

Now, I feel like writing something on Rishi and Ansh...

Koi suggestions ya ideas???

Once there was an episode in American Dragon that Jake's best friend spud secretly wished for supernatural powers. He wasn't really jealous but you know, inferior complex as Jake was praised always.

So you could try something like that.

P.S. I am gonna start cleaning up my mess after a while. So I'll just quote one of your reply with a smiling emoji. No need to reply. 😊 I'll PM you once its done.