Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 31

But if you wish to write, you are most welcome... 🤗

Well, I had planned the ending when I had started the story. So if you could PM me about how you wanted to end it, I'll integrate the basic ideas.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

But if you wish to write, you are most welcome... 🤗

Well, I had planned the ending when I had started the story. So if you could PM me about how you wanted to end it, I'll integrate the basic ideas.

Well, could you pm me about how you wanted to end it?

Nikki, the chapter was written well.

Loved the way Ansh reacted and confirmed from everyone, is he really back to his world. Pia's anger was justified, as she doesn't know what exactly was his secret. Reactions of Naman and Neha were epic and Ansh hugging Pia!

However I was possibly expecting something more, it got too light maybe. But you are planning an end, so cool.

This actually can be a short story or a FF, 😃

Well you guys forgot that even I was gonna participate in writing the story. But then, it's fine you got a flow. Plus honestly wasn't in writing zone too, so cool.

Would actually suggest, you both write the last chapter. Story can have 2 different endings, just a suggestion.

Nikki, the chapter was written well.

Thanks... 🤗

Loved the way Ansh reacted and confirmed from everyone, is he really back to his world. Pia's anger was justified, as she doesn't know what exactly was his secret. Reactions of Naman and Neha were epic and Ansh hugging Pia!

Well, I had planned this since the beginning only... He should be confused in the other dimension and then he should be confirming from everyone when he wakes up all of a sudden...

However I was possibly expecting something more, it got too light maybe. But you are planning an end, so cool.

I agree... It got too light.

And yes, both of us have planned an end to it...

This actually can be a short story or a FF, 😃

It can indeed be one.

Well you guys forgot that even I was gonna participate in writing the story. But then, it's fine you got a flow. Plus honestly wasn't in writing zone too, so cool.

Sorry yaar!

Would actually suggest, you both write the last chapter. Story can have 2 different endings, just a suggestion.

Not a bad idea... Although, I feel that Nushy has written a better ending.

Also, I have updated my FF too... Do give your review there too when you have time... 😊

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Well you guys forgot that even I was gonna participate in writing the story. But then, it's fine you got a flow. Plus honestly wasn't in writing zone too, so cool.

Would actually suggest, you both write the last chapter. Story can have 2 different endings, just a suggestion.

Actually we didn't! 😆

Our basic plan was that I was gonna start it and Nikki would add the Naman flavor. We thought you would add Piya then.

But then you had replied that you weren't in the mood and were excited about Nikki's continuation, so flow flow mein hum dono nikal gaye.

It's an open ending. You can still join the collab as we feel we could add a lot more things to it. 😊

Nikki, that's okay.

I feel, considering you both planned an end. It will be only fair you both write ends individually. So we have an ending by you and ending by Nushy. Like if you both collaborate, certain things will have to be left out. That's my perspective. Think about it.

Yes, give me some time. Am updating my gallery, atm.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Actually we didn't! 😆

Our basic plan was that I was gonna start it and Nikki would add the Naman flavor. We thought you would add Piya then.

But then you had replied that you weren't in the mood and were excited about Nikki's continuation, so flow flow mein hum dono nikal gaye.

It's an open ending. You can still join the collab as we feel we could add a lot more things to it. 😊

😆

Well true, but then Nikki already had an idea and wanted to continue the chapters. So I didn't have a scope to just get in between, cos my part was Pia and Nishant being a team to get Ansh back.

Plus yes, writing mood wasn't there definitely.

Currently not actually, cos it will take it to a totally different dimension. Possibly some other time.😃

Originally posted by: Madhura..

😆

Well true, but then Nikki already had an idea and wanted to continue the chapters. So I didn't have a scope to just get in between, cos my part was Pia and Nishant being a team to get Ansh back.

Plus yes, writing mood wasn't there definitely.

Currently not actually, cos it will take it to a totally different dimension. Possibly some other time.😃

Okay! 😊

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nikki, that's okay.

I feel, considering you both planned an end. It will be only fair you both write ends individually. So we have an ending by you and ending by Nushy. Like if you both collaborate, certain things will have to be left out. That's my perspective. Think about it.

Yes, give me some time. Am updating my gallery, atm.

🤗

Well, yes we both had planned an end to it. Anyways, I felt Nushy's idea to be a better one. So, I have asked her to continue it.

Sure... As I said, you can do it whenever you have time 😊

Anyways, I just have a random idea going in my head... What if there is one WhatsApp group of all the ladies of Prathanayan's family?? Mo, Dola, Ved, K, Pr??