Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 24

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Nikki and Madhura

I was thinking to write one about Piya and Adi like how he blasts her for leaving him alone. But don't know when I'll be able to write it.

You guys have any suggestion like questions that Adi must ask or points that Piya might present?

Well, your idea is a good one but right now, I have my plate full with this story, my FF and that Rishi-Neha story

To abhi dimag main kuch aur nahi aa raha hai...

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Of course we are! We have a different level of love when it comes to Pari. 😈 😈 😈

But I would want both the parents to be strict. Because in the show I felt, Piya was biased towards Pari but she didn't really value Piya and took her for granted. I would definitely love if you address that issue too.

But anyway, good luck with your story! 👍🏼

Of course, hence I said both being strict. But Ansh taking more lead, cos at times a father needs to take.

If you ask me, Pari took Piansh for granted and they gave her way too much lease.

Like Adi though, Ansh loved him, at points he was strict too, now that mess of not believing him was overdone, but in general too he was. Actually I still won't forgive makers for not utilising kids track and showing such things, rather than that stupid police and Barkha track.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Of course, hence I said both being strict. But Ansh taking more lead, cos at times a father needs to take.

If you ask me, Pari took Piansh for granted and they gave her way too much lease.

Like Adi though, Ansh loved him, at points he was strict too, now that mess of not believing him was overdone, but in general too he was. Actually I still won't forgive makers for not utilising kids track and showing such things, rather than that stupid police and Barkha track.

Agreed.

What I meant was, Adi was craving for Piya but he never disregarded Ansh once she came back.

Ansh I could still understand that he missed Pari's childhood.

But they didn't utilize PiyAdi bond, she chose Pari over him and in the later part too, she was always Pari Pari Pari!!! So I was really annoyed at her.

Like I can't get over Ansh throwing Piya out of the house, I can't forgive Piya too for leaving Adi and preferring Pari always.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Agreed.

What I meant was, Adi was craving for Piya but he never disregarded Ansh once she came back.

Ansh I could still understand that he missed Pari's childhood.

But they didn't utilize PiyAdi bond, she chose Pari over him and in the later part too, she was always Pari Pari Pari!!! So I was really annoyed at her.

Like I can't get over Ansh throwing Piya out of the house, I can't forgive Piya too for leaving Adi and preferring Pari always.

True.

Though I loved Piansh and Pia as a parent, I have to agree to this. Bias was too much.

True!! Hence, whatever be the case, I actually loved that dialogue which Adi told her, it was rude but true.

When in picnic Bhas attacks the car and Adi tells her, to leave, and she was like a mother doesn't leave kids and he was like, but you did before.

Even if we give benefit of doubt after they stayed together too, Piansh gave too much bias to Pari and she used to boss way too much.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

True.

Though I loved Piansh and Pia as a parent, I have to agree to this. Bias was too much.

True!! Hence, whatever be the case, I actually loved that dialogue which Adi told her, it was rude but true.

When in picnic Bhas attacks the car and Adi tells her, to leave, and she was like a mother doesn't leave kids and he was like, but you did before.

Even if we give benefit of doubt after they stayed together too, Piansh gave too much bias to Pari and she used to boss way too much.

Couldn't agree more.

Piya definitely deserves that and that's why I am thinking to write an OS on PiyAdi.

You can add ideas if you want. 😊

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Couldn't agree more.

Piya definitely deserves that and that's why I am thinking to write an OS on PiyAdi.

You can add ideas if you want. 😊

😃

That's an awesome idea. Well, keep it straight and heartfelt Conversation. Something on the lines of you know how Ansh was confessing to Adi in blanket, how a parent tries to be good, but can't be both..

Something on that lines, where Adi confesses and Pia understands and introspects, then talks.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

😃

That's an awesome idea. Well, keep it straight and heartfelt Conversation. Something on the lines of you know how Ansh was confessing to Adi in blanket, how a parent tries to be good, but can't be both..

Something on that lines, where Adi confesses and Pia understands and introspects, then talks.

Okay! I'll try my best. 😊

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Okay! I'll try my best. 😊

It was just a suggestion. As I say, always at the end it's your story and choice.😃

Originally posted by: Madhura..

It was just a suggestion. As I say, always at the end it's your story and choice.😃

Still, suggestions help a lot. My last story wouldn't be so good if I hadn't incorporated your and Nikki's ideas. 😊

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Still, suggestions help a lot. My last story wouldn't be so good if I hadn't incorporated your and Nikki's ideas. 😊

My idea?? What did I suggest??

Anyways, the next chapter of this story will be a little late as my mood is totally off today...