The Bride of Devil. Updated [Chapter 1] - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hmmm...the story has kickstarted. I can feel the chills. Somehow the racing train in the night imagery makes me feel butterflies.

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Niki

Yeah, I can imagine the train ride... Dark night, with just may be a few lights here and there...the Silence in the train as the others are sleeping, and his on thoughts makes the darkness deeper... The wind through open widow playing with Ansh's hair...
Wonder is His pia is having a restless night, very filmy style
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great beginning. Hope it's gonna be amazing.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start. Waiting to see our couple first meeting!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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awesome...Continue soon... and pm me if possible...

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