SS:'Friendship,Feelings and TROUBLE'[pt8.pg#17]

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nb.neha

@nb.neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

again well thought of and well written. i really like the way u have taken care of each n every character's personality while writing the dailogues.

enjoyed reading it. natural and lovely!

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ABdaKriticizer

@ABdaKriticizer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

THANK YOU ALL...
4 appreciating...😊

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ABdaKriticizer

@ABdaKriticizer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

PART: 3

-SCHOOL:

As, that guy leaves from there. Ginny see's Sam in the background wid an evil smile.

Ginny goes to her and say " kya kia hai tum nay?"

She continues to smile nd says "mainey kaha tha na? Kay u'll hav to pay...!!"

She leaves from there...

Ginny didn't know whats going on?

Raashi comes there nd says" kia hua Ginny yaha q khari hai? Or wo sam kia keh rahi thi?"

Ginny says "nothing". Nd they both goes to the class..

In the afternoon when the school ends... Ginny again sees that boy. Smiling to her nd waving hand to her. But she ignores him nd leaves...

On the way home. This time Rocky asks the reason for sad face...

Ginny thinks for awhile..
"Kya bhaiya ko bata doon ya nahi?"

after awhile she smiles forcely... Nd says "kuch nahi bhaiya bus bhook lag rahi hai na to is liey".

Rocky "han na bhook to lagey gi naashta jo nahi kia tooney."

-AHLUWALIA'S:

Ginny-Rocky reaches home. Rocky asusuall rockingly... Dances towards his room. But, Ginny again looking sad.

Sweety this time strictly asks "oye ! Ginny bata kya baat hai? Moo q latka hua hai aj bhi tera?"

Ginny "maa... Bhook kag rahi hai. Khana do please".

Sweety gets another point "haan or subha naashta karke q nahi gaee?", "chhal pehle fresh ho, change kar phir khana milega."

Ginny shouts "MAA..!! Khana nahi dena toh mat do."

she goes from there...

Sweety is in big tension now." haye... Yeh meri beti ko kia ho gya ek dum say?"

after sometime...

Sweety takes the lunch to Ginny's room... Asks her again but, this time softly... "kia hua Ginny? Kis baat ki tension hai mujhe bata.."

she is not able to tell anything... Coz she is afraid that sweety will blame her for all this... "kay toonay bet he q lagaaee?"

Ginny says to sweety " Maa.. Kuchh nahi hua...!!! Ap esay he pareshan ho rahi ho..."

sweety says "OK... Accha yeh le khana kha le."

Next morning...

Ginny is nervous but, this time she tries to look happy. She eats Breakfast. Nd goes to school..

-AT SCHOOL:

She is afraid... But suddenly gets a gud news... From Raashi...

That, Sam has left the school. Due to her fathers urgent transfer...

Ginny has her own cute smile back on her face...!!!(she thinks chhalo ab bala tal gayee)

To be Continued...

Note: PLZZZ hit the "LIKE" button if u like. "COMMENT" to appreciate or to point out the mistakes. U are free to Criticize...

Edited by AhsaanBaig94 - 12 years ago

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Sadme-Me-Hu

@Sadme-Me-Hu

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I wanna know what did Sam do, But really happy that she has finally left. I guess She has said something to that boy, so even if she leaves the school that boy will continue harassing Ginny by smiling and waving at her 😲 😆

Anyway, really interesting part! Enjoyed it a lot. Waiting really eagerly for the nest update. (but will have to read after 30th only 😔)

Anyway your SS is really going too good! Keep it up Ahsaan! Well done! 😃 and continue soon!

-Ridz

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Oye wat did dat Sam do...

want to know ...my stomach aching to know d truth😉

nyways ...enough of masti ...

nice part

continue soon👏

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ABdaKriticizer

@ABdaKriticizer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -Ridzzi-
I wanna know what did Sam do, But really happy that she has finally left. I guess She has said something to that boy, so even if she leaves the school that boy will continue harassing Ginny by smiling and waving at her😲😆

Anyway, really interesting part! Enjoyed it a lot. Waiting really eagerly for the nest update. (but will have to read after 30th only😔)

Anyway your SS is really going too good! Keep it up Ahsaan! Well done!😃and continue soon!

-Ridz

To know... What Sam has said to that boy. U'll hav to wait atleast till part 5 or 6 or more...😛. Because i love suspence u know.😆.
BTW thanx for liking... Nd come soon.👍🏼

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ABdaKriticizer

@ABdaKriticizer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tani23
Oye wat did dat Sam do...

want to know ...my stomach aching to know d truth😉

nyways ...enough of masti ...
nice part
continue soon👏

u'll have to wait..😆. ND thanx for liking.