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Saumya96

@Saumya96

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Posted: 10 years ago

TUM AAYE TO...

Hello friends.. I am here after a long time. Actually I have quite hectic schedule but excuses apart I have decided to start a new FF named as TUM AAYE TO... I know my previous FF has not completed but I vl definitely complete that along with this one... so get ready for another new one...

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MUMBAI...

ANANT BAJPAYEE- 21 years, cool, dashing, handsome, intelligent, smart and a dream boy of every girl... He is interested in singing and in cricket. He is silent and well mannered boy who is from typical joint middle class family. He was very fun loving but something had happened in his past by which his heart broke and now he is totally against love and marriage. He now believes that love cannot be true and can be broken up easily...

NAVYA MISHRA- 20 years, beautiful, smart, intelligent, fun loving, chirpy girl. She is very much fond of dancing. She is a girl who can win anyone's heart by her nature and her talking. She also had her past by which she also believes that love is only a fairtale and not possible in real life. And that is why she had decided to marry the guy which her parents choose for her...

This story is about two young people who are complete strangers till they meet in college and became classmate and then later became friends or else say best friends. This story is about how two people who completely are against love but falls in love and changes their life from worst to best... that is why it is said as tum aaye to...!!!

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Guys please tell whether you like this introduction or not. and whether to continue this FF or not.. I am waiting for your comments...

Edited by ILuvAnya - 9 years ago

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sweety71

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful introduction dear nice to see u in forum after long time. I really miss your FF's. Thnak you soo much for coming up with the new FF. Continue soon please waiting for your updates

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ankita20

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Posted: 10 years ago

looking ahead for the update!! decent concept 😊 loved it

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loveshaMya40

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Posted: 10 years ago

mast storyline!! waiting for the next 😊

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NeetikaRana757

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Posted: 10 years ago

Welcome to forums after long time was missing ur updates...waiting for ur updates..!!!

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juthee alam

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Posted: 10 years ago

Woww awesome.. Continue soon :)

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Suman.K

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks a lottt for coming up with new Anya FF.

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son_s

@son_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

Welcome back dear. ..it seems a different but interesting story. .please continue soon :-)

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NeetikaRana757

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Posted: 10 years ago

You know what interesting thing happen to me,while watching shamya's "Sempurana"duet i read ur ff luv by chance n surprisingly it matched so well!""" truly magical feeling...
waiting for ur nxt upd,cont soon.
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Saumya96

@Saumya96

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Posted: 10 years ago

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MUMBAI...

A new morning and a new start of a day for the people. Its a refreshing monday morning after a lazy sunday. The same routine is going to start for the people for next six days. Here in this hectic world a beautiful girl is sleeping quietly having a smile on her face as in she have dreamt about her beautiful life...

MEETA- navya...

Calls meeta from kitchen of a normal middle class home. navya, her daughter, sleeping quitely in her room and meeta like a typical mother starts shouting...

MEETA- he bhagwan.. ye ladki ab tak so rahi he..

said meeta seeing navya still sleeping. she goes near her and started tapping her hand to wake her...

MEETA- navya... navya uth na beta... kitna soyegi..??

she started tapping but there was no response...

MEETA- tu late horahi he beta.. bhul gayi aaj tera pehela din he college ka..

hearing this suddenly navya got up.. the beautiful and charming eyes having lots of dreams, the shining long hair, the fresh and refreshig face, the million dollar smile, and sweetest voice these were all qualities of ms navya mishra final year student of science college...

NAVYA- kya ma.. pehele uthana chahiye tha na.. me late horahi hu...

said navya yawning..

MEETA- ek thappad padega.. kabse utha rahi hu..magar tu he ki uthne ka nam hi nahi leti..

navya makes face while meeta continues...

MEETA- ab to badi hoja navya..is sal 21 ki hone wali he. shadi hokar sasural jayegi tab b kya tu...

NAVYA- ma plz...

interupted navya in between...

NAVYA- kitni bar kaha he apse, shadi ki bate mat kiya kijiye...

MEETA- q? shadi to tjhe karni hi he na kabhi na kabhi... aur abhi se adat lagegi to badme problem nahi hogi..

DEEPAK- kya bate horahi he ma aur beti me...???

deepak enters having newspaper in his hand...

NAVYA- wo hi roz ki bate aur kya...

said navya giving a look to meeta while meeta nodded her head in disbielief...

ting...ting... navya's ell rang...

NAVYA- hello ritz...gud mrng...

RITIKA- madamji.. gud mrng nahi bad mrng kahiye.. aaj se college shuru hiraha he...

NAVYA- kya ritztu b...

navya started talking with ritika while deepak takes meeta outside...

MEETA- dekha na aapne.. jab b is ladki se shadi ki bat karti hu ye taal deti he...

DEEPAK- meeta.. kta tum b...kitni bar tumse kaha he use time do..abhi wo shayad readty nahi he,,...insecure feel hota he use is topic se...

MEETA- insecure..??? shadi insecurity nahi he...

DEEPAK- ha magar shadi k bare me bat karna shayad insecurity he navya k liye..

meeta pouts and folds both her hands...

DEEPAK- dekho meeta...jamana badal gaya he.. aajkal baccho ko pyar, shadi, commitment, ye shabd mazak lagte he.. plus insecure feel karwate he.. hamara kam he unhe samajhna aur samjhana... samjhi...???

meeta looks at deepak whike he continues...

DEEPAK- aur waise dekha jaye to umar hi kya he navya ki..?? hamara jamana thodi raha ki 18 k hogaye aur shadi hogayai... use thoda time do, sochne do.. mjhe pura yakeen he wo samajh jayegi.. ohk?>>

meeta nodded in yes...

DEEPAK- hash... chalo mrs mishra ab mjhe chai nashta do.. office k liye late horaha he...

MEETA- ji me layi.. aap tab tak harsh ko dekhiye wo utha ya nahi...

DEEPAK- he bhagwan... ye dono bhai behen bilkul ek jaise he.. apni ma jaise...

meeta looks angrily at deepak while he goes from there laughing...

RITIKA- oh.. to ye bat he...

NAVYA- tu itna litely kaise bol sakti he ritz...

RITIKA- to kya bolu..??

NAVYA- rehne de kuch b mat bol...

RITIKA- navya... mene tjhe kitni bar bola he... jo hua he use tu badal nahi sakti.. par kam se kam bhul to sakti he na...

NAVYA- mihir k sath bitaye mere worst past ko me bhul hi nahi sakti ritz...

navya becomes sad and started remembering her past...