FF : In Your Love......*Updated:Ch 8 @ pg.18* - Page 9

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Angela_Grokes thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deliiwalikudi

Awesome updates continue soon please

Thanks! Next update coming soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
lovely updates waiting for more updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Superb update dear.. 😳 Loved it a lot.. 😃 Wow! looking fwd for Anya's romance.. 😃😳 Update the next soon.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SORRY, SORRY BIG SORRY 😳 guys for making you guys wait for so long but I am gonna award you all with a lot of romance in exchange of you patience.😉
Chapter 6 : I Love you
Shimla.
In hotel, Navya and Nimisha's room

Nimisha - Are Navya me toh bhul hi gayi. Mujhe naa Anant bhai ko yeh CD deni thi. Woh actually yeh na "Party Days" movie ki CD hai.
Navya - (*thinks* "Party Days" - yeh toh night movie hai. Matlab Anant aaj raat ko movie dekhega. par night movie😡chee...)
Nimisha - *thinks - mera plan kaam kar raha hai. Navya ko jalan ho rahi hai. Wah iss empty CD ne toh kamal kar diya. Thanks to me and mera dimag.😃)
Navya - Nimmi tum chinta mat karo me yeh Anant to de dungi. (think - aur uski class bhi lungi.😡)
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Anant's room
(there is a knock on the door. Anant opens it.)
Anant - Navya tum. Kya hua?😳
Navya - Anant woh me tumhe yeh...
Anant - Are andar aao na bahar mat raho.
Navya - Kyu?😳
(holds her arm and gets her in. Makes her sit on the bed. Navya looks around, Mohan was not there.)
Anant - Haan Navya ab bolo.😃 😳
Navya - Anant woh...
(Suddenly the lights went off. Navya gets panicky and hugs Anant.)
Navya - anant.😵 Mujhe andhere se dar lagta hai.
Anant - 😲 😳 Navya me hoon na. (He switches on the extra battery lights. )
Navya - (She is still hugging him. She knew the lights we on but she doesn't want to leave him.)
(Anant is also feeling the same. He slowly opens her tied hair while she tightens her hug. Anant slowly kisses on her neck still caught in her arms. Navya shivers with the touch of his lips.)
(While all this was going suddenly the phone rings reminding them that they are not having any relationship like the way they are behaving. Anant attends the call.)
Anant - Navya woh yeh blackout hai. Isliye rooms autolock ho gaye hain toh hum fas gaye hain. Mohan bhai ka phone tha unhone hi bataya.
Navya - oh...(navya feels happy to be trapped with Anant.)😳
(Suddenly Anant holds her wrist and pulls her near to him. They have an eyelock. Anant kisses on her cheek. Navya suddenly realises what just happened.)
Navya - (pushes him back.) Anant yeh sab sahi nahi hai. Hum iss tarah...😳
Anant - Navya kya tum yeh nahi cahti. Kya tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti?
(Navya was left numb hearing what he said. "Kya tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti?" those were the words of question for her but she was confused what to say yes or no. She know she loves him but she cannot say that. It was just then when she realised that Anant has hugged her from behind.)
Anant - Navya I Love You. (he says as he places a kiss on her neck.) Me bohat dino se yeh kehna cah raha tha par hum akele nahi mil paa rahe the. I Love You Navya. I Love You more than my life, more than anyone else. You are my life Navya. Me tumhare bina jee nahi sakta.
(Navya was numb she didn't know what to say. Anant slowly turns her around and hugs her tightly. She tightens the hug.)
Navya - I Love You Anant. Mere liye tum sabse special ho.
(Anant was very happy to her those words from her mouth. Overwhelmed by joy he kissed her on her lips passionately, Navya too responded by running her finger his hair and kissing him with
full energy. They kissed unless they felt that they needed oxygen now to be alive and it was then they broke the kiss. Navya's cheeks were red with shame and Anant was still wanting to kiss once again.)
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Yeah... I know it's short but romantic isn't it?
By the way is anyone alive?😆
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Like (you know you have to.) and reply (how can you not, right.)
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Thank you everyone. Next supery-dupery romantic update coming faster than this one.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Woww very romantic update.. Continue soon dear :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Woow so romantic. ..next part please soon:))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woah just Awesome dear! Loved it to the core yaar! ❤️😳 Yeah it was a very short one.. Plz give us a longer update in the next plz.. 😒😳
Edited by jc_2312 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
missing ur updates...plzz update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK guys. Really sorry for taking so much time to update. I was struck in some personal work.
Chapter 7 : When the closeness got a reason
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Shimla
Hotel, Anant's room

(Anant woke up. He checked his cell. It was 12:30 at night but they were still struck in the room. He looked at Navya she was sleeping so innocently that even Gods would smile seeing her.)
Anant : (playing with her hair.) Navya tumhe pata hai ki tum sote hue kitni innocent lagti ho.
Navya : (she was awake but acting to sleep) in mind - Haan. Par tumse zyada nahi.
Anant : Aaj humne ek doosre se apne dil ki baat kah di. I cannot tell you how relieved I am.
Navya : In mind - relieved, kyu?
Anant : Us raat jab Mohina aur me... Par Navya me sach keh raha hoon I love you only... Woh toh pata nahi ki mohina kaise.
Navya : (her head started burning with a hundred questions.) In mind - Mohina...? Yeh kaun he? Us raat kya hua? Kya kuch galat? Kyun?
Anant : Navya me tumhe sach nahi baata sakta abhi par jab sahi samay aaega tab me zaroor bataunga.
(Just then his phone rang, He threw it and went to bathroom. Navya checks the phone once he goes.)
Navya : 18 missed calls! Mohina ke! Kaun... Kaun he yeh ladki? Aur Anant me aisa kyun kaha ki?Us raat kya hua.?
(Just then Anant comes out. Navya hurriedly hides the cell phone and pretends get up.)
Anant : Are Navya tum jaag gayi.
Navya : Haan. Kya problem solve hui?
Anant : Nahi. We are still struck and alone. (He winks with a smirk.)
Navya : (She would have liked the expression he gave but after knowing about this unknown girl it felt like burden to be in a same room with him.) Anant tum kya kehna cahte ho.
Anant : (comes near to her.) Yehi ki hum akele hain aur jawan hain toh kyu na... (winks)
Navya : I'll slap you. Stay away from me.
Anant : Are Navya tum toh darr gayi. Don't worry I was just joking.
Navya : Anant ek baat puchoon?
Anant : Haan.
Navya : Yeh Mohina kaun he?
Anant : (stunned) Woh... Actually...
Navya : Kaun he woh, mujhe janna hai abhi.
( He calls Mohina and slowly tells her something. Then he takes Navya out of the room.)
Navya : Par tumne toh kaha tha ki room locked hai?
Anant : Chup. Bilkul chup. Mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai.
Navya : Kya?
Anant : (He takes her to the terrace of the hotel and just before the gate asks her to wear a black strip on her eyes. Navya does as directed.) OK Navya 3...2...1...
(He opens the gate asks Navya to come with him and then he open the strip.)
Navya : (shocked.) Anant yeh... Kya yeh sach me... Oh God me toh... (She starts crying .)
Anant : Haan. Yeh sach hai Navya. ( He gently wipes her tears.)
(He takes her to the center of the terrace and claps. Music starts. )
Navya : (With tears in her eyes.) Yeh sab... Tum mujhse...
Anant : Haan Navya...
(We are revealed to the view of the whole terrace. I was the true definition of beautiful. Rose path for Navya to walk, candles all over, red curtains with a stage in the center where they are standing and in the sky crackers burst in a pattern making it readable as "WILL YOU MARRY ME".)
Navya : Yes. I will Anant. How can I deny? Is there a reason to?
Anant : (He rises and brings her closer through her waist.) You are mine Navya. These lips, eyes, hair, waist, fingers, neck and every possible part of your body, from you hand to even a single cell I own it, It's mine. Only I should have the access to it. I promise even if someone tries to touch it I will kill that person.
Navya : You too Mr. Anant Bajpayee, remember, if a girl looks at you with lust or you look at her with the same feeling, I will die.
Anant : Your talks are too irritating to handle. Let me put an end to it.
(Just as her expressing saying his feelings he sealed her lips with his. Then he hugged her . Slowly removed her hair from her neck and kissed her neck.)
Navya : Yeh kya kar rahe ho?
Anant : Patenting you. I own you exclusively but patentation is required.
Navya : You have many parts to patent as well.
Anant : Sure, I will also patent them.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
It was really beautiful. ..please continue soon want to see anya's marriage:))

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