FF : In Your Love......*Updated:Ch 8 @ pg.18* - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome to navya forum or I should say navya family :-) please continue soon with your story:-)
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Nice one thanks for starting new FF continue soon please
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Lovely introduction dear waiting for updates
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loved the characterization continue soon please
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Originally posted by: Sanket1

OMG!!! I don't believe it you are praising me. I am a huge fan of you writing . I loved you FF:mere brother ki dulhan. Though initially I couldn't understand it but later my friend explained it to me in English and honestly I loved it.

Oh that's really sweet of u to praise my writing !! 😳 And sorry for not updating my whole FF in English but actually I like to keep the dialogues in Hindi only,anyways would be eagerly waiting to read this story soon !! 😊
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Sorry Everyone made you all wait for so long...But I was preparing the chapter...I am uploading it in a few minutes.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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Chapter 1 : Where It All Began

Silver Apartments, Delhi

*TING TONG*, *TING TONG*

Neeta - Aa rahi hoon baba...he bhagwan pata nahi kaun itti der se bell kaun bajaye jaa raha hai aur yeh .😡 Navya aur Renuka gate khol hi nahi rahi.
Postman- Kya yeh Navya Mishra ka ghar hai?
Neeta- Haan bhai boliye.
Postman- Yeh unka letter.
Neeta - Letter😕...kaunsa letter...accha rukiye. Navya...Navya beta dekh tera letter aaya hai.
Navya- Aai Maa.
Neeta - Dekh to beta tera letter aaya hai, dekh kisne bheja hai.
Navya - *shouts* AAA...
Neeta - *closing her ears by her finger* Kya hua letter me cockroach hai kya.😆
Navya - Nahi maa, Mallegan Groups se letter hai meri job wahan paaki ho gayi hai.
Neeta - Navya job *astonished*😲
Navya - Haan maa vo...
Renuka - *before Navya completes* in madam ne aapse aur papa se bina puche interview diya aur ye usme select go gayi.😒
Neeta - Navya...Yeh sab kya hai.😡
Postman- Mam woh...
Neeta - Bahi aapka kam ho gaya aap jaaeye. Mujhe kisi se baat karni hai *angrily looks at Navya* 😡
Postman - Are mam sign.
Neeta - Dijiye khahan sign karne hain.

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Neeta - Accha toh yeh baat hai. 😲Tujhe job vacancy ka e-mail aaya aur tu hume bina baatye interview dene chali gayi. Aur jab Renu ko pata chala toh usse chup rehne ke liye kaha . Aur Renu tu bhi, aare Navya toh bacchi hai par tu toh badi hai naa phir bhi.😡
Nayva - Maa, ab joh ho gaya so ho gaya. Acchi baat ye hai ki mujhe naukri mil gayi hai.😃
Neeta - Kisne kaha.
Navya - Maa aap bhool gayi abhi ek ghante pehle hi toh letter aaya that *shows her the letter*😕
Neeta - Haan par tu naukri nahi karegi.
Navya - Maa...😔
Neeta - Bas Navya.
Renuka - Par Maa..
Neeta - Chup kar Renuka tere badhave se hi ye bigdi hai. Tu hume bata nahi sakti thi iss baare me.😡
Navya - Maa par..😭
Neeta - Dekh Navya tere papa ko yeh bilkul pasand nahi ki ladkiyaan naukri karen.
Navya - Kyu maa, kya papa ke liye ladkiyon ki koi iccha important nahi. Haan eesa hi hoga tabhi toh Renu di ko bhi job nahi karne dii.😭😭
Neeta - Nahi Navya eesa nahi hai. Woh bohat soch samhaj kar faisle lete hain. Unhone kaha hai ki agar shaadi ke baad kisi ke sasural walon ko job karna accha na lage toh. Is liye hume koi aase aadat nahi dalni chaiye jisse baad me problem ho.😊
Renuka- Maa sahi keh rahi hain Navya.😊
Navya - Aane dijiye papa ko me baat karungi unse.😭
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Bajpayee Mansion, Delhi

Om - Samjhaiye apne iss bete ko Sughandha ji ki faaltu ki baatein na kare.😡
Sughandha- Par suniye toh...
Om - Mujhe kuch nahi sunna, 😡aare jab hamare paas apni khud ki Publication hai toh kisi aur Company me kaam kyu karna.
Trishnaa- Sahi toh keh rahe hain Jehtji are accha lagta hai kya apna khud na itna bada business
ho aur kahin aur kaam kare...Na baba na.😳
Anant- Par papa ...me apna khud ka empire kadha karna cahta hoon khud ka ek publication cahta hoon aur iss ke liye agar kuch saal naukri karni pade toh kya hua.😊
Sanjay - Hota hai beta, ghar ka naam kharab hota hai. Log kya kahenge ki khud ka business hai phir bhi bahar naukri kar raha hai beta.
Anant- Mohan bahi aap kuch kahiye naa papa se.😔
Mohan - *hesitatingly* Papa sahi keh rahe hain Anant.
Anant - *staring* Bahi...😲
Nimisha- Bahi me toh Anant bahi ke sath hoon.😉 Mera selection bhi ushi Company me ho gaya hai.😃
Trishnaa- *shouting* 😡Nimmi ghar ki betiyaan bahar kaam nahi kartin.😡
Nimisha- Kyu maa betiyaan insan nahi kya.?😆
Sanjay- He bhagwan,😕 yahan ek ko samhalna mushkil tha yeh doosri bhi shuru ho gayi.
Om- Sanjay yahan aa jara
*Om take Sanjay to a corner*
Om- Sun inhe kaam karne dete hain
Sanjay- Bahiya..😲
Om- Are sun ek doh hafte kaam karenge toh samhaj jaayege ki bahar kaam karne me aur ghar me kaam karne me kya antar hai.Samjha...😉
Sanjay - Par bhaiya Nimmi toh ghar ki ladki hai woh kaam kaise...😲
Om- Are jab sardar hi chori karna chod de to uske madadgar apne aap chori karna chod here hain matlab jab Anant hi naukri nahi karega toh Nimmi bhi Naukri nahi karegi naa.😉
Sanjay - Waah bhaiya.😃
*They come back*
Om- Humne decide kiya hai ki tum dono naukri kar sakte ho.😃
Anant & Nimmi - Sach😃
Sanjay- Haan
Mohan- *in mind thinks - are yeh kaise* 😕
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Silver Apartments, Delhi
Deepak- Thik hai Navya tu job karle...
Navya- Thank you dad😃
Deepak- Par...ek shart par
Navya- Kya?😕
Deepak- Ghar se sidha office aur office se seeha ghar.
Navya- OK😳
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Percap: Anant and Navya get hit with each other.😳
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How was it everyone? Yes I know only family drama in Chapter one but I'll pay all the romance you missed in chapter one in Chapter two .


Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woow nice update😳 do cont soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
lovely update continue soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome yaaara ...😉 do cont soon ;)

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