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wonderfully written Simran. loved the update corefully. full on fun and masti with family touch in midst. loved Navya adoring Anant ... awiii family senti scene was lovely on navya's part. ha haaa teasing and taunting toh always on others side towards Anya and just love the way Anant feels weirdly lovely and navya turning red on their talks and reactions. ha haaa anant to clean the utensils and lovely was anant entering navya's room and their scene was good one. so family heading to picnic in bus haaan.

😃 Thanks Rasmi di...Thanks a ton for your Love...Love you di...😊 Will update the next part very soon...😳
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Superb Simran...eagerly waiting for Anya's confession😊

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"Oh, this is your son Anant. He's become so big since I last saw him and he's become so much more handsome too,"😉 said Deepak and Renuka, Harsh and Rishita giggled behind their father. 😆

😉


she slipped and fell on Anant and both of them landed on the bed. 😳 *Eyelock* 😳
( Love this part especially ) ☺️

punishment for the losing captain would be to gift all the girls a Dairy Milk Silk because all the girls were chocolate fanatics.
Mee too love silk...😆 😛



Well, Simran I just Loved this update...I must say you write so well...👏 Will be waiting for your next update eagerly...Update soon...
Most awaited part AnYa's Love Confession... 😳
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Beautiful, Emotinal, Romantic and funny too...In short, a Fabulous update...👏 Loved it to the core...Do cont soon 😊
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Originally posted by: AlienaKapoor

"Oh, this is your son Anant. He's become so big since I last saw him and he's become so much more handsome too,"😉 said Deepak and Renuka, Harsh and Rishita giggled behind their father. 😆

😉


she slipped and fell on Anant and both of them landed on the bed. 😳 *Eyelock* 😳
( Love this part especially ) ☺️

punishment for the losing captain would be to gift all the girls a Dairy Milk Silk because all the girls were chocolate fanatics.
Mee too love silk...😆 😛



Well, Simran I just Loved this update...I must say you write so well...👏 Will be waiting for your next update eagerly...Update soon...
Most awaited part AnYa's Love Confession... 😳

😃 Thanks a ton dear...Glad u liked it...will update very soon...😊
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Beautiful, Emotinal, Romantic and funny too...In short, a Fabulous update...👏 Loved it to the core...Do cont soon 😊

Thank you so much dear...will update soon...😊😛
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Thank you Guys for all your love and Support...🤗 Without wasting much Time, I give you Chapter 6 😊

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CHAPTER 6 - Love Confession ❤️

"Baithe, baithe kya karein, karna hai kuch kaam. Shuru karein Antakshari leke God ka naam" said Sugandha and pointed towards Mohan. Mohan immediately sang,

Maa ki kasam bhari item
Koi ladki nahi ek loaded gun hai woh
But, lekin, kintu, parantu..

Thobde pe chaanta, ho gaya hai sannata
Sooli latka hai gala
Jabse pata hai chala ke
Uska boyfriend hai Chandu...

Woh aayi bhi muskayi bhi
Usne lee angdaai bhi
Chandu ki saali ho gayi setting
Mere dil ka The End
Chandu ki girl friend

Chandu ki girl friend
Qaatil beemari
Chandu ki girl friend
Janhit mein jaari
Chandu ki girl friend
Abla naari
Chandu ki girl friend
Sab pe bhaari...
Aaa... Chandu ki girl friend

Hey.. Hey... Hey...
Prrr p prrr...
Jo dil ki thi bandage ab dil ka ghaav ho gayi
Jo sabki thi darling, Chandu ki daav ho gayi
Iski Maa ki, fit ho gayi hai re goti
Iski Maa ki, Kauve ki chonch me moti

Koi ghar mein naa jhaanke
Chal neeche kar aankhe
Meri toh phir bhi hai ye, Bhabhi
Teri hai behen! 😉

And then finished on N. The whole time, Mohan was pointing to Sugandha and his dad indicating himself as Chandu and Sugandha as his girlfriend. 😉 Rushika sang from N in the other team.

Nakkadwaley Disco, Udhaar Vale Khisko,

Oh Nakkadwaley Disco, Udhaar Vale Kisko

And then stopped singing telling them to sing from ko. This sparked an argument between Mohan and Rushika which was very entertaining for the others. They argued back and forth,

"This is against the rules. You can't sing just two lines. You have to sing at least four lines and they should not be repetitive. You can ask Deepak uncle or my mom. You won't be getting points for that song."

"Oh please Mohan. You can sing 2 lines or sing 15 lines. It's the person's wish. Remember we could start and end anywhere?"

"Maybe you didn't hear the rules properly Rushi, but we can only begin from whichever part we wish, not finish. If you want to, ask uncle or anyone in your team. Eat almonds. Your memory will improve" 😆

The others who were getting tired now stopped the two of them and let Rushika get away with it but warned their team that this was the last time they would let this happen.

This time, it was Renuka who sang the song.

Kaisi teri khudgarzi
Na dhoop chune na chhaaon
Kaisi teri khudgarzi
Kisi thor tike na paaon

Ban liya apna paigambar
Tar liya tu saat samandar
Phir bhi sookha mann ke andar
Kyun reh gaya

Re Kabira maan jaa
Re Faqeera maan jaa
Aaja tujhko pukaare teri parchhaaiyan
Re Kabira maan ja
Re Faqeera maan ja
Kaisa tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya

This time, everyone was silent and speechless hearing her beautiful voice. Suddenly, they heard a very, very odd voice singing,

Yamla pagla deewana
Oye main jatt yamla pagla deewana
Ho rabba itni si baat na jaana
K k k o mainu pyaar kardi hai
Saade utte woh marrdi hai
K o mainu pyaar kardi hai
Saade utte woh marrdi hai
Main jatt yamla pagla deewana
Ho rabba itni si baat na jaana
K k k o mainu pyaar kardi hai
Saade utte woh marrdi hai
K o mainu pyaar kardi hai, hai hai hai
Saade utte woh marrdi hai
Main jatt yamla pagla deewana

O sohneya, mann mohneya

Aisa nahi hota toh woh aise, sharmaati na
Mujhe aate dekh sadak pe bhaag jaati na (haye sohniye)
Aisa nahi hota toh woh aise, sharmaati na
Mujhe aate dekh sadak pe bhaag jaati na (mann mohniye)

Everyone closed their ears and opened it as soon as Harsh finished singing. 😆

"Harsh, shall I say something? Please try not sing from next time. Navya told him and everyone burst out laughing. 🤣

"Okay. Let's get back to the game. You guys sing with e. Come on" Harsh said. Everyone was thinking when Navya sang,

Guys, do listen to the song. It's amazing. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFDDTS96sog

Ek lau hai, sau parchhai hai
Duhai hai, duhaai hai
Aankhon ne yaadein barsaai hai
Duhai hai, duhaai hai
Chahat ki zara koi pooche hai
Duhai hai, duhaai hai
Keemat kya dil ne chukaai hai

Ek lau hai, sau parchhai hai
Duhai hai, duhaai hai
Aankhon ne yaadein barsaai hai
Duhai hai, duhaai hai
Abb mujhe koi shiqwa nahi bas duhai hai
Abb mujhe koi gila nahi bas duhai hai
Hothon pe koi duaa...
Hothon pe koi duaa nahi bas duhai hai

Ho... bandishon mein jiya kiya
Jiya kiya main toh
Ranjishon mein jiya kiya...
Yaaron mujhe le chalo, le chalo
Le chalo tum wahaan
Yaaron mujhe le chalo tum wahaan
Ho jahaan har khushi, dosti, pyar bhi
Ho jahaan zindagi har
Nafas mein basi
Le Chalo...

Ab main chala hoon wahaan
Jahaan bas rihaai hai... Rihaai hai...
Khaali rahegi jagah jo dil mei banayi hai
Duhaai hai...

When she was done, everyone clapped for Navya and they had tears in her eyes. The elders especially since they had all lost someone dear and could connect to the song all too well. Sugandha went forward and hugged her and said, "Navya, you have a beautiful voice. You should try going in to the field of singing." 😊

Mohan said, "Yeah, you should. I recorded the song too so if you want to you can give it to a recording company."

Everyone started nodding and saying yes when Naina cleared her throat and said, "I think we've given the other team enough time to think already," then, pointing towards Harsh's team she said, "You have to sing with ha."

Nimi sang,

HOo teri aankhon ka qaidi hoon
Mohabbat kaam hai mera
Hoon aashiq yeh khata meri
Ke Javed naam hai mera

Arrey tu hosh mein aaja
Ke jo bhi naam hai tera
Nahin maloom hai tujhko
Ke kya anjaam hai tera
Tu yeh bhi bhool jaayega
Ke Javed naam hai tera

Arey aake aazmale hume
Haan aake aazmale hume
Ho jayegi aashiq tu

Humse pyaar kar le tu
Humse pyaar kar le tu
Humse pyaar humse pyaar
Giraftaar karle tu (Repeat once)
Humse pyaar kar le tu
Humse pyaar kar le tu

By the end of the song, everyone joined in because their ears weren't closed and song was also quite peppy. Harsh said, "You guys have to sing from tu."

Mohan's team was thinking because there was only one song that was striking to all four of them and they didn't want to sing that song because they didn't want to get teased. Naina finally picked up the courage after hearing Nimisha and Rushika's taunts,

Tujhse juda agar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi h

Everyone started going ooh and ah including Sugandha and Om. Mohan asked her, "Naina, you didn't tell me you loved someone. Tell me who it is. I will break his legs and hands."😆 "Bhai, I don't love anyone. Anyway, you will be the first person to know so don't worry," Naina said tapping him on his hand and calming him down.

"Okay fine, we've reached now. It's a tie between both the teams until now. We can continue on our way back. It's enough for now. Let's go" said Om, noticing that they had reached. He picked up one of the picnic baskets while Harsh and Mohan picked up the other two. The others carried towels, cards, a ball among other things. As soon as they reached the spot, Mohan opened the picnic basket only to be hit by Sugandha. She scolded him saying all of them would eat together and closed the basket.

Meeta and Sugandha laid out the towels, plate and glasses for everyone and then opened the baskets and removed all the food. They had gotten 2 ice boxes along with them, one filled with ice water and the other filled with ice creams. Everyone had sandwiches, noodles, biriyani, special food made by Meeta and everything was done by the time they finished. The kids fought for the ice creams with the elders calming them down. When they were all done, the younger ones decided to play blindfold catch.

The first person to be blindfolded was Mohan. They were allowed to blindfold themselves so Mohan tied his blindfold tighty on his forehead and loosened it below his eyes so that he could see everyone's feet. He started moving when he saw Navya's feet. Navya who thought the game hadn't started was busy admiring the nature view. Before anyone could warn her, she was caught by Mohan.

"Your turn to be blindfolded Navya. This time, I will be the one tying the blindfold because I know for a fact that bhai cheated" said Nikhita while glaring at Mohan. Mohan chuckled and Nikhita went up to tie the blindfold for Navya. She added, "You also have to count till ten and only then move to catch us."

As soon as she was blindfolded, Anant came out from behind a tree 😉 and signaled thumbs up to Nikhita and Mohan 👍🏼 and told everyone else to remain quiet. He grabbed her by the hand and dragged her and Navya immediately started shouting for help. They reached a secluded are when Anant opened her blindfold and placed a finger on her lips. He said, "You've interrupted me many times but now you'll be silent. I love you Navya...I Love you a lot. 😛 and I want to know whether you love me. Do you love me? Give me an answer." Navya lowered her eyes ☺️ indicating his finger. He immediately removed it. Navya replied, "Finally. Of course I love you Mr. Obvious. Took you long enough to realize that" and then hugged him. 😳 Anant kissed her on her forehead...

Whew! There, its done. Please do like and comment if you liked it. 😛Otherwise Jootas and chappals always welcome...
Will update the next chapter on Monday 😊
Edited by .Simran. - 12 years ago

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