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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: son_s

Its a beautiful storyline...but yest it is incomplete and for anya everything should be perfect so if u could pls continue and bring the OS to a happy note😊


thnks dear 😊 n ya i'll continue it n will end it on a happy note 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: mussu

oye hoye..luv u shreeshu...awsum is the only word i can tell...loved it...anant's feelings were beautifully potraied and that song perfectly matched the scene..gud job yaar..;) ...aur maine bola tha naa ki anya fans bohot zyaada crazy hai..;)..we wnat anya to always remain together..waise seriously are u gonna make it a two shot???...any ways i m very much ready to read it..luv u dearie...


thnks 4 d luvy comment yaara ⭐️ n waise song tere hi choice ka tha 😳😆 n ya yaar evey1 wants a happy ending ...so gonna make it a two or three shot 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...!! Amazing...Awesome...Loved ur OS...!! You are such a good writer...!! Keep it up dear..!! 👍🏼 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Simran.

Wow...!! Amazing...Awesome...Loved ur OS...!! You are such a good writer...!! Keep it up dear..!! 👍🏼 😳



thnks 4 d luvly compliment dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome to writing world 🤗 ... navya kahan gaye ?? 🤔 ... usne anant ko kyun chod diya 😕 ... feeling sad fr anant ...plss update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandni4433

welcome to writing world 🤗 ... navya kahan gaye ?? 🤔 ... usne anant ko kyun chod diya 😕 ... feeling sad fr anant ...plss update soon


thnks dear 🤗 n ya will updte soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

will update it day after 2marrow 😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tareyfan


will update it day after 2marrow 😳😃


okk dear ..will be waitng fr 2morw 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandni4433


okk dear ..will be waitng fr 2morw 😳


here i m with my update dearoo...😃 bt u r off9 abhi ..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO GUYS HERE I AM WITH D 2ND PART OF MY STORY...HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT...😳😃

It had been three years since she left him..she left everything

related to him'the city , the memories n to d extent evn hr

happiness n most importantly singing'which was hr passion once

upon a time'she too had nvr been happy'evn she was

subjected to abject heart break bt she nvr showed it as she

wanted him to excel in his lyf 'she had becum a barrier in his

way to success n in his way to take up wat his family members

wanted'. Though d feeling was nt mutual bt atleast she thought

so...she had totally changed'she was nt d same bubbly , kiddish

n naughty girl'.she used to b within herself'smile was sumthing

for which evn hr mirror had been craving ...she would always

console herself thinking abt his success and put on a fake smile

bt she knew wat hr heart wanted'bt she evn knew at wat cost

she would achieve it'at d cost of him separating from his family

, at d cost of hatred from his family n wat nt'.she had left hope

of living a content lyf'.she had becum a robot who only knew

wat agony , pain n sadness meant'it had becum like happiness ,

luv , friendship had nt been programmed in hr'it was nt like she

nvr tried to forget hr past bt her past nvr let hr forget it'she

wanted to get bak to normal , she wanted to smile , she wanted

to make friends'bt she jst couldn't move on.. or actually she

didn't want to..she could nt accept hr lyf without him' the only

thing she knew was that she had to away from him no matter

wat'though he had becum her lyf bt she was ready to leave hr

own lyf 4 his sake'the mere thought of she leaving him had

stabbed her heart a thousand times'.as they say trying to

forget sumone you luv is like trying to remember sum1 u nvr

knew'.

Once a day early in the morning hr sole friend in hr office

showed up to hr house n asked hr out for a play as it was a

weekend..though she initially refused bt sum how hr friend gt

hr convinced'the play was abt a incomplete luv story which

completes after a long tym...wen both had left hope to live'!! no

sooner did they settle on their seats than the show began'

through half a way of the play she could jst think of one person

n it was him'the moments of joy , the moments of troubling

each other jst den sumthing broke hr continuity of thoughts' it

touched hr heart n it was a song which she thought was

perfectly meant for hr '.it was part of the play bt she was lost

in hr own world while listening to this song'

Link for d song- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AZiJsjrGTJA">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AZiJsjrGTJA



Bheegi Bheegi Si Hai Raaten
Bheegi Bheegi Yaaden

Bheegi Bheegi Baaten
Bheegi Bheegi Aankhon Mein Kaisi Nami Hai

Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha

Sapnon Ka Saya Palkon Pe Aya
Pal Mein Hasaya Pal Mein Rulaya
Phir Bhi Yeh Kaisi Kami Hai
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
( Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagaani Zindgaani
Hamari Adhuri Kahani )' (2)

Aadhi Aadhi Jaagi Aadhi Aadhi Soyi
Aankhen Yeh Teri Toh Lagta Hai Royi
Lekar Ke Naam Hamara
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha

Rutha Rutha Rab Chhuta Chhuta Sab
Toota Toota Dil Tere Bina Ab
Kaise Ho Jeena Ganwara
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
( Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagaani Zindgaani
Hamari Adhuri Kahani )' (2)

Bheegi Bheegi Si Hai Raaten
Bheegi Bheegi Yaaden
Bheegi Bheegi Baaten
Bheegi Bheegi Aankhon Mein Kaisi Nami Hai
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha

Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagaani Zindgaani
Hamari Adhuri Kahani
( Na Jaane Koi )' (2) Hamari Adhuri Kahani
Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagaani
Hamari Adhuri Kahani

Hamari Adhuri Kahani Kahaani'


n at a time wen almost everyone thought dat nothing

could happen of them both..they will nt b able to live with each

other..they'll have to part ways n such things'they see a ray of

hope for both living together wen they fight with tym n people n

make it a happy ending'this play unknowingly filled hr with

optimism of dem both reuniting n living together once again'

irrespective of wat would b d circumstances'the thing abt

which (the circumstances ) she thought d most till yesterday nw

no longer mattered hr'she was ready to face the

circumstances that would cum hr way of they living together'

she nvr knew if it would happen for real as wat she jst saw was

a play bt she who had lost hr belief in fate n God found herself

once again believing them n she unconsciously was praying for

the same'.she remembered what she once heard.. God always

takes tests of times 'she wondered if was it was hr tym nw'

after 3 years of suffering will God nw granted hr wat she

wanted..or wat she wanted was always with hr it was jst dat she

didn't have d courage to do so..situations had made hr

weak..thinking a lot makes a person weak on his will power n his

abitility to do things..thinking so she was nw bak to d bubbly yet

"strong on hr will" girl who could do anything 4 hr luv n for hr

luvd ones'she once again had begun to dream'dream of

getting bak to normal , dream of fulfilling all hr dreams dat

were crushed , dream of living with him..n this tym she was firm

on hr will'!!

lets see will dey both get bak together..if YES den how n if NO den y ..?? bt all of it in d nxt part'😉


FEEL FREE TO SHARE UR

VIEWS'.CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM IS

ACCEPTED'.😊

PS- I KNOW GUYS IT WAS LITERALLY A CRAP'BT PLSS

PARDON ME THIS TYM AS I WROTE IT IN HASTE AS MY

COUSINS ARE AT MY HOME N DEY DIDN'T LET ME WRITE

PROPERLY..I HAD MANY IDEAS FOR THIS ONE BT I COULD

BRING IT OUT THAT WELL'.SURELY D NXT UPDATE WILL

B BETTER DAN THIS'😊

Edited by tareyfan - 12 years ago

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