A Anya OS- Jaaniyan part2-pg 6

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so guys most of u dont know me😳😳...so let me introduce myself first... I m Aishwarya...😊😊 n m here with with a OS dat mussu asked me write sum moons ago...n finally i wrote it 😃 hope u guys like it...😃😃

She was walking back with tears in hr eyes leaving behind a person who was jst dumbstruck or should say unable to react to the situation or should say couldn't believe what had jst hapened'.she nvr wanted to do so bt situation had forced hr..she was kind hearted , luving , selfless'n as they say being gud is a sin in this world..she had learnt this lesson too early in hr life'.she had jst started to dream'jst began to live hr life to the fullest'jst began to love' bt all hr dreams were crushed n hr heart was scattered into thousand pieces'. He knew that it was nt her ,who jst passed by him ..leaving him' bt he was forced to believe it by his own ears and eyes'. It all happened exactly 3 years ..n till today all d memories were still afresh in his heart ..her each n every word still echohed in his ears'today he was a successful business man ..he had left his passion singing as it always reminded him of her'n she'no one knew where was she.. wat she did?? Was she evn alive ?? or anything else..every year on this day he used to b disturbed thinking abt the past 'thinking abt hr'think abt the tym they spent together'these were the memories he always cherished'everyone of her frnds gave up hr search bt he '.he nvr thought that she was away 'he always thought she was jst near by 'waiting 4 him..calling him to hr 'to live together once again '.n he always used to sing a song in her memory '.singing which was his passion once upon a tym , his life , was hr gift to him'she too was a singer n luvd singing' wenever he sang she would gt lost in dat world..the world of his passion'the world of his luv 'the world of "ANYA"'.!!!

N today was dat day'14th feb..wen they were supposed to gt married'bt she didn't turn up'the most bitterest for him bt d happiest day for his family as he had decided to take up wat dey wanted him to 'they were so lost in their world of happiness in a way the happiness of their success or selfishness that dey nvr saw his pain'today though he was successful , he was nt content 'he nvr showed it up bt he was all broken inside'.sum memories always haunted him'sum memories which he could nvr forget 'today was a party to celebrate his 3rd successful year'.it was at 7 pm ..so he dressed in formal got ready for the party.. as he entered the party he was surrounded by his colleagues , his family members'everybody congratulated him they had dinner 'n finally at 9 the party came to an end 'while driving bak home he took to the place where she had left him.. it had a bench on which they used to sit n sing songs'so he sat on that bench loosened his tie n started to sing 'the last song he wrote n it was after she left 'in hr memory..after dat he nvr wrote songs or evn touched his guitar'he wanted to hate hr bt he knew that he could nvr'he knew he luvd hr'n could nvr despise hr no matter wat..after all she was too gud to b bad..recollecting the past times he starts singing

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwei6C-nWus">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwei6C-nWus

CLICK ON THIS LINK GUYS FOR D SONG N PLAY IT AS UR BG WHILE READING AND IMAGINE DAT ANANTH IS SINGING IT'

Dil sunta hai, teri sadaa

Aa ru ba ru, ab toh zara

Bechain si, meri zindagi

Sunn kar teri, yeh dastaan

Jeena mera aasan kar, tu mil ke yeh ehsaan kar

Kahin kho gaya chain oh sukoon, tere dard ko ab jaan kar

Jaaniya o jaaniya, bas roye dil mera

Aasu palkon pe nahin hai bewajah

Dil hai gum zyadaa jaaniya

Tujhe paa liya ya kho diya

Iss baat par, dil ro diya

Ke chaah kar, tu naa aa sakey

Tu waqt hai, guzra hua

Tujhe rakh liya, inn yaadon ne

Ik phool sa, kitaabon mein

Iss dil mein tu, rahega sadaa

Aur mehkega, inn saanson mein

Raaton mein tu jal jaata hai

Chehre mein tu dhal jaata hai

Taara hai tu mujh mein toota sa

Neendhon se jaga deta hai

Palkon ko bhigo deta hai

Dariya hai tu mujh mein dooba sa

Har waqt khwaabon ki tarah, tu aata raha

Jaaniya o jaaniya, din kya raat kya

Aahat ho koi, lagta hai sadaa

Ke tu hai wahan jaaniya

Jaaniya o jaaniya, bas roye dil mera

Aasu palkon pe nahin hai bewajah

Dil hai gum zyadaa jaaniya

As he finishes it he remembers the day..the bitterest day of his lyf..the day wen she left him without evn telling him the exact reason'all she said was that "we were nt meant to be.. abhi maine yeh realize kiya ki u r nt d one 'jab maine socha ki kya me sach me tumse pyaar karti hun toh mere dil ne mujhe koi jawaab nhi diya..toh me tumhari zindagi ko barbaad nhi kar sakti''toh isliye me tumhe chod ke jaa rhi hun'pls mujhe maaf kar dena'.n she left'

bt d truth was sumthing far away 4m this'or should say exactly opposite of it'she luvd him to d zenith..n she did it for his sake..he wantd to take up singing his passion as his career n she herself being a singer , encouraged him in his passon which made his family members despise hr n made dem go against hr'they felt dat due to hr , he was nt taking up wat dey wanted him to'.n they always expressed their hatred wen she visited his house'n day before their marriage his family members meet hr n emtionaly blalmailed hr'n she being a selfless girl..took d drastic step jst to make his life better'.she had realized dat coz of her his family members began to despise him'.she left him for his sake 'to make him a person wat his family wanted to make'..till today nobody knows where is she'in which part of d world'bt wherever she is she luvs him d same way she did n will always luv him unconditionally''

so guys how was it ??? my first Anya OS'hope ki accha laga ho..😳 agar bakwaas laga toh srry..😭 n feel free to comment ur views'😊 😊

INDEX-

PART 1- PG 1

PART 2- PG 6

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Parsh_shamya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me first yuppie...
Hey aishwarya this is akhila..
Wow awsum os anthr mystery rs im luving it...waiting to read mre continue soon...
Edited by shamya-holic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aishwarya,tis Os was like that i'm watching Aashiqui2 bfore my eyes

I loved loved loved loved itā¤ļø,awestrucked update yaar,and the song it touched my heart,the feelings of Anant made me to cry,Navya left Anant for his career and his family,very sad,lovely awesome mindblowing update,too gudā­ļø

Edited by gowripriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamya-holic

Me first yuppie...
Hey aishwarya this is akhila..
Wow awsum os anthr mystery rs im luving it...waiting to read mre continue soon...


hey akhila...😊

thnks a lot ..m glad u likd it bt its jst a OS yaar ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowripriya

Aishwarya,tis Os was like that i'm watching Aashiqui2 bfore my eyes

I loved loved loved loved itā¤ļø,awestrucked update yaar,and the song it touched my heart,the feelings of Anant made me to cry,Navya left Anant for his career and his family,very sad,lovely awesome mindblowing update,too gudā­ļø


aww thnks 4 d luvly comment dear ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tareyfan



hey akhila...😊

thnks a lot ..m glad u likd it bt its jst a OS yaar ...


ohh ws it oly a single updt??
but the stry is incomplete ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamya-holic


ohh ws it oly a single updt??
but the stry is incomplete ..


i noe its incomplete bt jst wanted to write a different kind of story coz all stories dont end on a happy note...so jst a try to write dat kind of story...u want a happy end kya ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tareyfan



i noe its incomplete bt jst wanted to write a different kind of story coz all stories dont end on a happy note...so jst a try to write dat kind of story...u want a happy end kya ??


yeah it wuld be gud..infactn awsum...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamya-holic


yeah it wuld be gud..infactn awsum...


ok den i'll make it a two shot or three shot n den will complete the story 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii Aishwarya. This is Rashmi.
Wonderful update yah. felt emotional to some extent on Navya's decision. Anant pity on him. seems fascinating.

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