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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Superb update Gowri. The game and Anya conversation was so nice. Loved this Navya character so much, always helping others.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Just love it. The game was too good😊. Do continue soon

Edited by Shaya_123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Loved the updates. please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Wow lovely update gowri...loved the game part & cute anya eyelocks :)))
update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
great going👏👏..cont. soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
a nice update... please do continue...its going good 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
good one...update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

sry i made u all wait,i was little busy in some works.

Thank u so much for ur likes and lovely comments😊.Here is the next update.

PART5:

The gang were chit-chating with each other.Anant was so sad.Shiva noticed him.

Shiva:wht happened anant?r u k?

Harry:Mr.Romeo's Juliet went away na.So he feels bad for her absence am I right anant?

Shiva:Stop teasing him harry

Harry:I won't tease him here after.But shiva u too developed a feeling for shivani,na?

Appy:oye,When tis happened?

Harry:uguys didn't notice but I'm the best detective hai na?

All cheered upshiva and asked him to propose her.

Shiva:How can i?i can't

Harry:see,tis boys hai na.they know to love a girl but don't have the courage to propose her.

Anant:shiva,u can doit.i'msure thatshe'll accept ur proposal

Everyone shouted "shiva shiva shiva shiva".Time passed.It was evening.But navya haven't return.Anant was watching the door for navya's return.Then he remembered that shivani called navya in his phone sterday.He found the number in dialed list.He started texting her"Navya,where r u?Come quickly,Boring yaar,I'm waiting for u by anant".he texted abt20 times.But no reply.Tis made him verangry.He throwedhis phone on the table.At the same time ranbir received a text and went out.After some time hecame in.

Anant:what happened ranbir?who was on phone?

Ranbir:It's my mom anant

Anant:oh

Time passed it was 9:00pm.Anant didn't eat anything.every one forced himt to have some food.But he refused to eat.

Anant:no yaar,I'm not hungry.i feel sleepy.i'll take some rest.

The only thoughts movingin his mind is abt navya."How a girl could be tis much irresponsible?Y she didn't even reply atleast once?I thought she is a nice girl.but she is like every girls.i won't talk to her from now onwards"reminding all these things.he went to a deep sleep.suddenly after some time,he was disturbed by some noise and opened his eyes.He woke up and sat.It was 12:00am.The lights were switched off.He couldn't find anyone.

A:Guys where r u all?

A candle blown.He couldn't see clearly who is there.Someone is coming near to him with the candle.It was navya.

A:Navya,you,here?

Navya placed her finger on his lips and smiles at him.

N:shh..you shouldn't say a word.

She sat near anant.

N:I'm sorry anant.I couldn't text u.i was little busy at that time.

Anant was still in an angry mood and turned not facing navya.

N:Happy Birthday anant

Anant curving a light smile in his lips and turned towards her..He was very surprised that how did she came to know that his birthday 2day.He himself forgets his birthday.He was very much excited.

A:But navya how did u know?

N:I've cn ur id card

Suddenly the lights were switched on.The Room was beautifully decorated with colors and balloons.The gang started singing birthday song.Navya too joined them.He was super excited.Anant cut the cake and Feed everyone.They were overjoyed.

Anant:How u all made tis without my knowledge?

Ranbir:Navya texted me at evening.She arranged all tis only for u.

Anant and navya were smiling at each other.

N:k,guys its too late,u take the keys and move to house and take some rest.I had prepared dinner for u.

Shiva:k,bye,Anant.

They bidgud bye to anya and leaves.

Anant was continuously luking at her.

N:Wht?

A:so u have done everything for my happiness na?

Navya nodded and wished him"happy birthday anant" and presented a gift and a greeting card.In the card she has written"Thoughts of u r full of love and the wishes they bring for a beautiful life today,tomorrow and forever.I'll be always with u.These memories can ever be erased.If u feel lonely close ur eyes and think abt me.I'll come near u.ur strength will be evevn more strengthen by our memories by ur friend navya" and ends with a smile.Tears rolled down from his eyes lightly after reading those lines.

N:My Superman should not cry.Be brave and always keep smiling.k, now open the gift.

He opened it with a msile.It was a wooden board that was neatly sculptured with words wishing him happy birthday with anant and navya's photo sticked at each corner.

A:Thank u so much navya.I'm ver happy today.tis is my bestest birthday forever.They were luking into each other's eyes.He felt that tis happiness should be with him for life long.

N:oh, shit how could I forget tis?

A:wht?

She is searching for something in her bag.

N:surprise

A:another surprise?

N:haan,k,now close ur eyes

A:wht is it navya?

N:I said u to close ur eyes right now?

He closed his eyes.She bought something near anant.she asked him to open his eyes.He slowly opened his eyes.He found a bowl of noodles in navya's hands.

A:wow noodles.

Then they were started feeding each other.

A:it was so yummy.But how do u know that I lu noodles?

N:I know u won't eat anything since u were angry on me.so I asked ritz abt ur fav dish.

Anant smiled at her.(MyHeart goesall dhin tana played at background).Then she asked him to sleep.But he was so adamant and not wishing to sleep.he keeps talking.Navya was listening to him and was wondering at his expressions.Atlast ho found that she felt asleep near his bed.He slowly moved his hand towards navya to caress her hair.somethinjg stopped him to move forward.

A:bichaari navya.

He was admiring her continuously.she even luk more beautiful who was sleeping like a new born baby.Then he too felt asleep.The song ends.

PRECAP:When Anant is in washroom,his phone rings.It was from his home.Navya attends the phone.

Hope U all like this friends plz hit the like button and throw ur comments.😊



Edited by gowripriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
awesome 👏 👏
simply brilliant👏
Edited by shamya_for_life - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
wowiii wonderful update.. Angry anant was commendable waiting for navya.. loved the way navya gave surprise on anant's b'day n the joy on his face seeing d surprise. loved the feel anant had on navya while caressing her hair.. wowii noodles surprise was even more good

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