RS: Bebasi dard ka alam-completed

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Posted: 12 years ago
#1
im back again...

part 1...


it was a fine afnun we anant n navya came to meet their fans...fans wer very happy ...they gave them so many gifts n took pics with them...both of them had a nice time as they met after a long time..but they cudnt talk in private...they wer surrounded by their crazy fans...who even had a ride with anant in his car...

later anant made an excuse to them that he n navya had another appointment n they need to leave...

n finally they both bid adieu to their lovely fans n leaves together...

it was almost evng 5 n anant was driving the car silently...even navya didnt utter anything..there was a deep silence betwn them...they didnt even look at each other...but both wer sobing at their hearts...navya didnt ask anant wer they wer going..she was in agreement to go anywer he took her...

they slowly entered anant's favorite place THE HELIPAD wer they cud see the beauty of setting sun n the wholeee mumbai...

he stopped the car..but remained in his seat...navya too...

after sometime...he huskly called..."navyaa.."

navya was sitting with her head down...almost at the verge of crying...eyes full of tears...n she replied..."hm..."

he cud sense the shivering in that reply...he slowly moved his hand towards her n hold it...n that made her burst into tears...

he too was veryyy sad as he cudnt meet his pataka since 3 months...he dint stopped her from crying...he still hold her hands tight...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
he pulled her towards him with all force closed his eyes n hugged her tight ...she was crying n crying...n he let her cry..as he knew her pain which he too had...

A:(still hugging her) navya...main tumhare saath hoon...ab bhi aur hamesha rahoonga...
N:(in betwn her cry)mujhe patha hain anant...lekin main iss tarah tumse doorr nahin reh sakthi...duniya ke saamne main hasi mazak main rehthi hoon..lekin tumhare bina ek ek pal main marr rehi hoon anant...mujse yeh sehan nahin ho rahi hain..

A: haan..navya...mujhe patha hain...mera bhi halat aisa hi hain...lekin filhal hum majboor hain..humhe yeh dooriyan sehanna hi hoga...

N: lekin kab tak anant...kab hum duniya ko bathayenge ki hum ...

A: patha nahin navya..shayad woh din bauhaut door nahin hain...

they break their hug...anant wipes her tears...she looked at him with pain in her eyes...which he cud clearly read...
they kept looking at each other..

(remember anant-navya car scene during shagn enggmnt track...)

N:(in a low tone)kya hua anant...

A:main dekh raha tha ki meri jhalli ki woh raunak kahin gho gayi hain...woh bholi bhali hamesha hasnewali chehara kitni murjhaa gayi hain...

N:jab mera sunshine mere paas nahin hain tho mere chehare pe khushi aur raunak kahan se aayegaa????????????

anant felt like crying...he had manythings in his mind to say...but wat came out of his mouth was..

i lov u navya...kissed her cheek...

but she dint reply for that...as he knew her reply...she just hugged him...


Edited by loveshamya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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they remained silent, hugging n feeling each others presence...

A: navya...ek baath kahoon..tum bura tho nahin manoginaa..
N: (eyes closed n remainig chipku to him)..nahin...kaho anant...

A: kyo tumhee aajka poora waqt iss car ke andar baitne ka irada hain kyaa?????????humhe baahar bhi kaam hain...

N: kaam...kya kaam...
A: hm..batatha hoon..pehle baahar nikaloo...

both of them get out of the car n move towards the cliff with hand in hand..

they sat on the bench there n navya resting her head on his shoulders n anant his head on her head...

they wer enjoying the beauty of the evng sun holding their hands tight...

N:anant kya tumhe lagtha hain ki main apne friends ke saath kuch zyada busy hogayi hoon aur main tumhe ignore kar rahi hoon?

A: nahin..mujhe aisa nahin lagtha...lekin shayad humhare fans ko aisa lagtha hain...aur tumhare ajeeb mystery tweets bhi naa...

N:anant patha hain aisa kyun hain? jab bhi akeli rehthi hoon mujhe tumhare bauhaaat yaad aatha hain...aur main tumse kaisse mil sakthi hoon...tum shayad imagine nahin kar sakthe ki main tumhee kitnaa miss karthi hoon...tab main unn loogon ke saath masti karne ki koshish karthi hoon...phir bhi...itne saare logoon ke beech bhi main kitni akeli ho jathi hoon..tumhare bina...main kya karoon anant...

A: mujhe patha hain navya...mujhe bhi hameshaa tumhari yaad aathi hain..lekin mere paas aise masti gang nahin hain na...issiliyeee mera akelapan mujhee bauhatt dar dedatha...patha nahin main kab tumhe apne saath le ja saktha hoon...kab ayegaa woh din jab mere saare akelapan door hojaye aur mujhe meri pataka hamesha keliye mil jayee...

navya goes sad again hearing his words...but he doesnt want to make her low any more...

A: achha woh sab chodo...tumne mujhe yeh kyun nahin poochaa..

N :kyaa?

A: this is not fair navya..tum kais GF hoo? tumhe aathe hi mujhse poocha chahyee thaa naa...

N:kyaa poochnaa anant?

A: yehi ki..maine tumhareliye switzerland se kya laaya hoon?

N: smiles...jab meri zindagi ki sabseee bada aur anmole gift mere paas hain ...mujhe aur kya chahyee anant...

A:hm...woh tho sahi hain...main hoon hi special...n raises his shirt colar..

navya got amazed with his answer n hits him...

A: phir bhi poochonaaa...

N:tho iskaa matlab mera chikna bomb mereliye kuch laya hain...right?????(nnow she gets excited n starts searching in his his hands n pockets..)

A:navya yeh kya kar rehi hoo...main tumhe dedoonga..pehle aanken band karoo...

Navya closes her eyes...
he takes a small box from his pant pocket n gives it to her..

she opens in n was surprizinglyyy shocked...

it was THE STAR PENDANT...⭐️
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️


Edited by loveshamya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
navyas mouth got wide opened to see that pendant...

N: ananttt..yeh...yeh thoo...tumne...tumne uss saloni diya tha naa..

A:mainee???????nahin..maine kisi saloni ko kuch nahin diya..woh tho uska husband ne diya hoga...main tho yeh apni pataka keliye laya hoon...😉

navya was very much happy n excited to see that pendant as she loved it wen she saw it on the show..

N: anant...sach kahonnn? jab maine iss pendant ko dekha tha show main..tab mujhee yeh bauhat pasand aayi thii..aur wished ki agar yeh mujhe bhi mil jaayee...aur tumne kaise meri dil ki khwasish pad liya anant????????

A: smiled...kyunki tumhara dil tho mere paas hain...hain naa..😳..n pulled her cheeks...

navya was overjoyed...she hold around his neck n kissed him...🤗

thanku anant..thankuu sooo much...sach main yeh tho mereliyee sabseee surprizing gift hain...maine kabhi nahin socha ki tum mereliye yeh laoogee...thankku ananttt...

A:arey...issmein thanku kahan se aagayaa...main tumhe kuch detha hoon aur tum mujhe thanku kahogiii????...

navya was still in her excitement...smiling n blushing..

anant opens the box n takes the pendant out..make her sit to her back..moves her hair to one side n make her wear it...

she was soo much happy..that she again hugss him...she had happy tears...

A:arreyy...tum phir shuru hogayi...ab kya hua...(wipes her tears)..
Navya dont reply...just nodds her head..

A:hm...tumhe tho rone ki bahana chahyaaa hain naa...khushi ho ya ghamm...
n kisses her both cheeks...n make her smile...



Edited by loveshamya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
suddenly it started raining sligtly...n small drops of water started falling on their faces..

N:anant...baarishhh...
both got excited...

A: dekha navya...nature ko bhi humhara saath pasand hain..issiliye tho humhareliye baras raha hain...

navya runs towards a big rock n climbs over it with her hands spread apart n enjoys the soft rain n cool breeze...

anant was happy n smiling from his heart to see his jhalli happy now...he had a drop of tear in his eyes...

N:anant chalona...saat main mazza lethe hain...

he too joins her...

both starts running around...enjoying n doing masti..

it was almost dark n sun was about to set..n there was still soft rain n breeze...n it was time for them to return...both wer sad..

N:anant...ab humhe jaana hoga...lekin...agli baar kab milenge hum...?she was sad again...n he tooo..

he pulls her towards him n huggs her tight...as if he dint want her to go away from him...not that moment..never ever...she to dint want to free herself from him...she grips tight with her fingers on his backk...

N:anant main jaana nahin chahthii...
A:main bhi navyaa...

they wer feeling each other with all emotions...which dint let them go separate...
the sun was setting...darkness started getting up...but navya n anant was there...locked in each other...

n her long beautiful hair was flying in the cool breeze which embraced them...


hope u all liked navya anant's private appointment😉
😉😉😉😉😉😉...waiting for ur valuable feed back...

Edited by loveshamya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely rs dear...miss anya and shamya so much. Continue soon
Edited by navya19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls jaldi jaldi update karona plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice RS dear. I too feel the same now that she is trying to show that she is happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz jaldi update karo na ... waitinggg
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aapka rs dil ko chooo gaya... eagerly waiting for next two parts...😊

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