New FF: Opposites Attract Part 28 @ Page 141 & 143 - Page 75

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting plzz update it na
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved your lovely comments to the core😊. Here is another one
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Part 23😊:
He reaches a restaurant for lunch around 5 kms away from the fort and stops and to lets Navya get down. 'Navya!' he called but there is no reaction. He looked back and sees she is not there

'Where is Navya?' he moves back to original position and muttered.

He takes out his cell from his pocket and quick dial's her number but she is not picking. It's ringing on the bed of their hotel room. Along with that her wallet is also lying there. He called many times but no response.

Without delaying further he turned his scooter and headed back to the place from where he just came now. He is very worried and at the same time very scared on where he has left her. Is it in the fort or on the way somewhere? Forgetting about his consciousness, he is looking at each and every point if he can see her somewhere.

Navya was standing there looking at the other end of the road with upset face crossing her arms. Anant runs towards her and turns her towards him and hugs her tightly. She was about to hug him feeling happy that he has come back but her ego came in between and she resists her hands in touching his back.

'Thank god! You are here' he said with great relief and then holds her hands and 'but why didn't you get onto the scooter?'

Navya got more angry hearing this that he didn't even realised what happened to her and said 'I didn't had any intention to stay here. It was you who didn't even notice that I felled down before getting' she said very rudely with the mix of her loosing attentions in front of the dolphins and thinking that he didn't even notice that she is not there.

He went near her again and tried to say something but she again took five steps ahead. He still went to her again and said 'Sorry Navya! You know I am not good at bikes. Please forgive me' on which she still didn't listen to her.

He doesn't know what to do and went near his bike and took it out and looked at Navya and asked her to sit. She went and sat with deeply upset face and Anant checked thrice if she has sat properly or not as he doesn't want to repeat the same mistake.

On the way back he stopped near a restaurant to have lunch. Navya got down and he parked the scooter and came near her and said 'Let's go' to which she said 'I am not coming' and folded her hands and looked at other side. 'Pls Navya! I said, I am sorry!' he pleaded but she didn't respond. He left and went inside the restaurant as he knows that she will come. She waiting for some time for him to call her again on which she will show some more anger but nothing like that happened. She looked back and saw he is not there and can see him sitting in one of the place inside the restaurant increasing her anger more and more. But then she sees a guy devouring prawns and fried chicken which reduced her anger a bit but increased her hunger for food. She went inside the restaurant and sat opposite to Anant who was looking at the menu. Anant looked at her and smiled but she didn't look. Knowing that if he ask what she wants to eat, she wont respond and it might create a scene in front of the waiter, he ordered rice with fish curry and dal tadka. Hearing this, Navya wants to say that she wants to eat prawns too but she stopped.

After sometime the waiter got the food and they had without talking to each other. Not that he didn't try but she was not ready to look at him.

In the hotel room, he closed the door and hugged her from back and said 'Sorry Jaan!' but she removed his hand and went and lied on the bed covering her face with the pillow. Anant felt really pissed now and kept his camera and went to the bathroom making a small noice with the door. Hearing this she slowly unhide her face and felt that he is angry now. But who cares. Even she is angry. She thought in her mind. And then she sees that camera and becomes eager to look at the pics. She took it and switched the button on and starts seeing the pics. Firstly she finds a lot of pics of nature, few of his friend's. But then when she surfed more she could see that there is no dolphins captured in his camera. Instead it was only she who was been captured during the boat ride. Few with happy face seeing the creatures and few angry faces. The pics are looking so natural and clear. Actually Anant while he planned to take the pics of dolpin's he saw Navya's beautiful face from his camera. Soon the thought came to his mind how about capturing different moods of her to frame and keep in their bedroom because of which he was intentionally asking her to move a little but as soon as he made her face, he captured, that's how expert he is at photography.

Smile curved Navya's face and he got up and bit her lips thinking about it. He came out of the bathroom and she went to him but now it's his turn to be angry. He rubbed his hair and kept the towel on the sofa and got into the bed and switched off the bed lamp and covered himself with the comforter.

The song plays on...and wakes Anant

'Yeh.. raat ruk jaye
Baat tham jaye..
Teri bahoon mein

He removed his comforter and looks and sees Navya dressed in a pink satin short nighty with her hair open. Getting a shock he removed the whole cover and sat on the bed.

Khwaishein jagi hain
Pyase pyase labon pe
Sii..
Khud ko jala doon
Teri aahon mein
Aagosh mein..

She comes near him and pulls his face near lip synching the song and looked seductively into his eyes as if she is going to bite him now.

Mere aaj samah jaa..
Jaane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa ja zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile'

She gets into the bed and touched his forehead with her index finger and bring it down to his nose still looking at him and gives a quick kiss and pulls his white kurta to get him more close to her.

The song is running on her mobile which gives a signal of empty battery. When she was about to sing the next line it's get off and she paused making her eyes bigger. Anant also paused for sometime and couldn't control and bursted out laughing.

To be continued...

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Edited by Shaya_123 - 12 years ago
mevanp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good...😊 Can't stop laughing😆
Ultrachic thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg it was an awesome update!👏👏 .So Anant was taking her pics only by making her angry to shift from her place on the boat😳 and then Navya tries to attract Anant towards her but her phone's battery got low aww.😉😆 Continue soon!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hahah hahaha tooo good phirrr
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahahhha 🤣🤣🤣 mobile battery off too gud shaya plz dnt update too short .
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Posted: 12 years ago
what sud i say like always awesome updt jst tooo good loved the enntire updt cn imagine Navya must b looking too cute while making angry face & Anant als ge angry haye re wht ll happen to this 2 😆 but i found everything really cute & surprising the pic taking part tht ws really sweet of Anant love him alot & the last part at first my heart skip a bit thinking wh t gona happen but whn happened tht make me laugh,, gr8 one 👏 do cont soon cnt wait for next part nw
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont know whether 2 laugh😆😆😆 or b pissed off😡😡dat u latkofied us at such an interesting juncture.now imaginations r running randy(if u know wat I mean).luved everything👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good post. Cant stop laughing... plzzz next update...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahahaahhaah battery off 🤣🤣

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