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Posted: 13 years ago
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situation: anant navya had a fight @home n are angry with each other. in the same angry mood they go out to a park n sit in diffrnt benches there n not looking at each other...anant wants to manoify her but she is too much angry n not ready for that..

In the park..

anant: agar usse mujhse baath karni hain tho mere paas aana hoga..main nahin jaoonga usse manane keliye..

navya: woh samjthe kya hain apne aap ko...main nahin jaaoongi uske paas...

n sit in east-west directions..

suddenly a group of college girls arrive there having chit chat n

discussing abt the new heroes n movies...

suddenly they see anant sitting alone in hot black dress looking soo

dashing n handsome.😳...n the girls instantlyyy falls for him...

they are standing near navya n starts discussing abt him but not seeing navya..

1st girl: hey yaar...look at him..he is sooo dashing

yaar...hayeee...i cant take my eyes off from him...
2nd one: me too yaarrr...he is sooo handsome...
3rd one: i wanna marry him yaar...i wont let him go...
4th one: no yaar...he is for me onlyyy...

hearing all these navya starts boiling.😡..but the girls are not aware of this...

they moves towards anant n sits beside him ...anant gets a surprise wen he sees these girls surrounding him...

anant gives a surprised question look to them

g1: jii aap...ka naam...?
anant: i m anant...aap loog kauun???????

g2: hum loog bass yehaan se guzaar reha thaa...aur aapko

dekhaa...aurrr...(starts blushing n shying)

anant understud this..n he got a plan suddenly...

g3: aap kyaa kar rehe ho...student ho kyaa..

anant: nahin..main business kartha hoon...aur aap sab?

g4: ji hum sab college main padthe hain...aur jab aapko dekhaa thoo...

anant:..thoo?????

g1: ji humhe galath math samjhiyega...aap itnaa dashing ho..ki koi bhi ladki pehli nazar main hi aapp par fida ho sakthi hain ...aur...hum bhi hogayee hain...

anant have a naughty smile.😉...while navya's BP is rising n rising n rising...😡

g2: kyaa aap hum mainse kisi ko pasand kar sakthe hooo? humhe aap bahuat pasand hain...tho kyaa aap...sh...a...a...d...i...

anant: haaan haan...kyun nahin...aap 4 tho bahaut pretty ho...koi bhi ladka bhi aap par fida ho saktha hain...

girls get too much excited hearing this...while navya our of control😡slowly gets up...n starts walking towards them..

girls: kyaa aap batha sakthe ho ki aapki biwi kaisi honi chahyeee...

anant: hm...sundar...jaise aap sab...(adds another degree celcius to navyas temperature)...susheel...pathi ke haar baath manne wali...patni ho tho pati se kabhi jhagada nahin karni chahye...aise biwi se behthar koi radio hain...jo hameshaaa bagabag karthe rehthe hain...(navya now about to blast)...aisi biwi ke saath kaise reh saktha hain...kitnaaa boring hoga...tho main tayyar hoon...aap main se kisse main shaadi karooonn?

there was a sudden hit on his shoulder from navya...n starts hitting him over n over again...

girls gets shocked n they catches navya n

ask..oyeee...tum hothi kaun ho humhare wud be se aise behave karne wali...

navya: main kaun hoon??????????? MAIN INKI BEEWI

HOON...SAMJHIII?😡

girls gets shocked...BIWI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kyaa aap shaadi shuda hain anant ji...anant bursts into laughter n says...yesss girlls..sorry...

girls starts cryinggg n leaves...

navya still at hight temperature...

tho tum kya keh rehe the...mere saat tum bore ho jaatha hain...? main radio hoon?????? aur kya kya hoon main? n goes on hitting n hitting...they runs over the park n finallyreaches a lonely place whr anant catches her n holds her tight...

navya had tears in her eyes...anant wipes it n says" kabhi nahin
navya...main tho mazzak kar raha tha...main thumhare saat kitnee saal jeeoon...woh ek ek pal mere liye khaas honge...kyunki..tum mereliye sabse anmol hooo...mere saasoon se bhi zyaada anmol..."

navya breaks down n hugs him ...both share an emotional hug crying out all their anger n frustrations...

later..

anant: kya tum abhi bhi mujse naaraz hoo?
navya :nahin...haan lekin ek baath achhe se samajh llooo...TUM SIRF MERE HOO...agar kisi aur ke naam tumhare saat juda na..main usse mar daaloongi...samjheee??????????

anant: jii maam...jaise aapki hukum...aur yeh bechaara sirf aapka hainn zindagi bharkeliye..aur aap humhareee...

they share a sweet smile n hugsss...


hope u all like it...do comment...

this was my first attempt do comment here also those who missed this..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3100253

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-Divya.S- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waw excellent mind blowing, loved it very much..superb yar.. 👏 do write more..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww this is beautiful, jhalla jhalla naraaz and then manaofying each other - too good but then what was that, some haddis coming between jhalla and jhali thinking marriage hari om prabhuji yeh aajkal ke ladki bhi na handsome ladka dekhi toh shuru ho jate hai . But jhalli made a dhamakedar entry and spelled doom on those chichori's and chachundariya's fantasies. It was thoroughly entertaining and haddis stay away from this jodi- samjhi ki nahin.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful yaar do write more...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanku all...happy that u all liked this one too..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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soo cute..was expecting same in show but cvs😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cute update..😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so gud it does not look like u have written something 4 d 1st tym...well done keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice...keep writing more n more :)

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