OS: Bedakhal...(1 Year Down the track!)

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nuttycleo

@nuttycleo

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Posted: 13 years ago

Note: I am not as creative or good at writing stories, but laughed my head off when i thought of this sequence..hence sharing it with u. It is in hindi as no other lingo would justify a dialogue between Shankar Bajpayee aka Udi Baba...& Saraswati(what was her last name again??) aka Bua Dadi! It has been broken into 2 parts to sustain decent readability!😊

Gist: UB & BD are talking about all that has happened ever since AnYa walked out (or as UB chooses to believe, were thrown out) of the house! Let me know if u dont understand any word or want an English translation...Hope u enjoy!😳 Feel free to leave comments...

Part 1

Shankar: (in a commanding voice)Jal laao..

Saraswati: (jhatakos mundi & grumbles): Abhi toh aake baithe the...(aloud) Laate hai

Shankar: (Frowns)Aap baithiye, Lakhan ko boliye, woh leke aayega..

Saraswati: (sighs) Aaj who bhi chala gaya...

Shankar: (Astounded ,annoyed & angry) Kya!!Uski itni himmat!!Aapne jaate huye usse kuch kattu vachan kahe ya nahi??

Saraswati (jhatkos mundi again & grimaces):Kadva bolte bolte thakke nahi aur sab chale gaye!! Isko rokna bahut zaroori tha..ab sara kaam kaun karega?!(Aloud) Itni der woh ruka hi nahi ulte humko sunane laga ki humare ghar mei woh toh kya koi aur bhi naukri nahi karega!

Shankar: (Angrily)Aapko pata nahi humei koi chorke nahi jaa sakta!Hum us se pehle sabko bedakhal karte hai!!

Saraswati: Hari Om Prabhuji!! Hum sab jaante hai! Humne hi iski shuruaat ki thi!Par humari phuti kismet... Anant aur uski bahurani ko nikaalne se pehle humko laga woh kuch din mei vaapas aayenge. Aapne unko samuche hi bedakhal kar diya! Uss karam jali ki kismet toh dekho...sadak pe takraye bhi toh kisse? Amar babu se! (jhatkos mundi again)

Shankar: Unhone koi yojna banayi hogi!

Saraswati: Kauno yojna bani ho ya nahi...naukari aur ghar dono mil hi gaya. Humari kami kya khalti unhei! Phir Mohan ka bhai prem!! Who bhi sar uthaaye Rama ki bina sunne...

Shankar: (Retorts with false pride)Nahiii!! Humne us nalaayak ko bhi bedakhal kar diya tha jaane se pehle!

Saraswati: Haa usse bhi, Rama ko bhi aur unke peeche bhaagti Sugandha ko bhi!!!

Shankar: (raises an eyebrow & asks) Haan toh?!Humari parampara aur naam itne chote nahi ki chote humei baar baar chorr ke jaayei! Aapko yaad hona chahiye ki uss wakt bhi Om humare saath the!

Saraswati: Arrey...Om nahi hota toh aaj hum dono iss aalishaan ghar ke baahar hote! Is haathi ka bill kaun bhar raha hai in dino?!

Shankar: Aap kehna kya chahti hai?

(To be continued)

Edited by nuttycleo - 13 years ago

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nuttycleo

@nuttycleo

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2:-

Saraswati: Humne itna kaam apni saari zindagi mei nahi kiya jitna pichle 6 mahino mei kiya! Jab tak Savita thi, usse ragad ke kaam karva leti thi, lekin aapka nikamma beta Sanjay jo uchalne laga! Nimmi ki shaadi kya tuti, uska zimmedaar bhi humei banaa kar dono ko lekar chala gaya!Ghor Kalyug hai...Hari Om Prabhuji!!(jerks her head yet again!)

Shankar: Usse toh humei bahut pehle bedakhal karna tha!!Uss mei humne vidroh ki jhalak bahut pehle hi dekhi thi, par usmei itni himmat kabhi bhi hoti nazar nahi aayi thi!

Saraswati: Jaane ye kaun kisko bedakhal kar raha hai?!!Hum teeno iss ghar mei akele aur sara parivaar Anant Navya ke ghar mei ek saath!! Rama beech mei phone kar leti thi unko todne ki yojna banana ke liye, par jab se Mohan aur uss mei sulah hui hai...us ne bhi phone karna chorr diya hai!!

Shankar: (V angrily)Kya kahaa aapne? Aap Rama se baat karti thi?Humare vachan aapko yaad hai ya nahi? Aapko kisi se bhi koi sambandh nahi rakhna tha!

Saraswati: (Scared now & tries damage control) Arrey nahi bhai sahib..mera matlab...

Shankar: Aapko bhi humari parampara, izzat ka koi khayaal nahi raha!!Humari baat ko aapne nazar-andaaz kiya!!Hum aapko bhi...

Saraswati:(holding her ears & shaking her head)Nahiiinn!!!!humko mat pheko ghar se bhai saheb...Kamlesh ne naata toda aur bakiyo se humne rishta toda...hum iss umar mei kahaa jaayee'

Shankar interrupts: Jahaan jaana hai jaiyee...humare ussool, humare aadarsh humei yeh ijaazat nahi dete ki hum aapko iss ghar mei rehne ki anumati de!Aap isi wakt iss ghar se nikal jaaiye!!

And a dejected Saraswati walks out thinking...kabhi chup hi reh liya hota!!

The End!

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Noaddict

@Noaddict

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome Pooja...👏

My heart is all gadgad reading ur take😆..ah! elated at the thought of golden days returning..😃

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mysterious17

@mysterious17

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice..on the whole i really liked this word " bedakhal" 😆

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soniadutta

@soniadutta

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Posted: 13 years ago

gud one dear...keep posting more

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nuttycleo

@nuttycleo

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Posted: 13 years ago

@Nidz...awww...Thanks hun...guess i am on a mad writing spree today!! LOL... I liked the idea more than how i put it down...hopefully someone can make a proper story out of it!😛

@Surbhi...😆 trust me...the word kept haunting me till i wrote this pc down! Chalo...even renamed the OS Bedakhal thanks to ur comment!!😊 Thanks for reading it in any case...😳

@Sonia...Thanks for the encouragement dear...but seriously...u dont want to read too many of my posts...🤣 I am left questioning my own sanity most of the times!!

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soapliker

@soapliker

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Posted: 13 years ago

Pooj welcome hun. You are amazing

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

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Posted: 13 years ago

Pooja this is epic!! I am laughing like a banshee here..The only mental image I have in my head is all the bechara loonies leaving one by one out of their own willand Creepy Baba running after them, screaming out "Oh no, not so fast! You are banished from loonie quilla! Hear that??" and then thinking to himself "Isse pehle ko hamare pavitra quilla ke bahar kadam rakhein, humne unhe keh diya ke hum unhe nikal rahe hain, ab hum is chain se so sakte hai ki humne unkhe nikala, woh apne marzi se nahin gaye".. 🤣🤣