NAVYA SHAYARI CORNER 2 UPDATED Pg no 75

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: -Liana-
EDITED

Manoj aj ka tumhara ye update dil ko bara pasand aya

CSB,DU&BD k liye jo bhi kaha woh hume bohah lubhaya

Aaj ka update tha bara nirala

shayeri k andaaz mein tumne sach bata dala 👏

lines jisne mujhe bohat hasaya

majnu paar tho chad gaya sunny deol ka josh
tikhane lagane they budiya aur sanki ke hosh

🤣 🤣

Anant raha chup loonys ke quilla se nikalne keliye kadam badaya
sanki ne Anant ko filmy way mein dhamkaya viewers ko pakaya

so true yaar 🤢 tht DU 😡 hate him

Anant ne tho liya thaan mangega Navya ke papa se maafi

hayeee☺️ love his determination 😍

as usual DA Sr hui hysterical assu bahaye do char balti

what else we cn xpect frm dukhi atma's 😭

jab sanki ka padne laga DA Sr par zehar
viagra goli khaye hue joshiley mard jaise taklu baba bole KHAMOSH chilakar

🤣 🤣🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 manoj hasa hasa k marne ka irada hai kiya 😆

loonys taklu baba ko dete rahe apni harkat ka justification
Taklu ke silence ne layi unke mann mein tension

taklu ho na ho zarur tha pichle janam koi zeherela saap
scheming aur plotting main ye hain Rama ke bi Baap

so true he is truely a zehrila saap, scheming aur plotting mein he is rama ka bada baap 😆 but i have full faith k his plan ll b flopped,

sanskar navya mein hai bajpai family se jiada

haas ke dur karegi woh apne raste ki har badhaa

agar anant ka ho saath

fikar ki na hogi koi baat

thanks a lot lia u r such a cookie 🤗

thanks 4 the wonderful words

really yaar i felt taklu baba was high on red bull or some viagra pills .itne mahio baad itne josh kahan se aagaya😲😆 .daal mein kuch kaala i guess gulbudhan needs to find that out or who knows us impress karne ke liye TB ka naya paitra 🤡

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: -Liana-
edited my post on pg 71

reply kar diya 😛

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Dharshini

@Hi_Friends

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Hey..just read ur shayari...
Fabulous work..👏👏
Great..
👏

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: manojshonafan

thanks a lot lia u r such a cookie 🤗

thanks 4 the wonderful words

really yaar i felt taklu baba was high on red bull or some viagra pills .itne mahio baad itne josh kahan se aagaya😲😆 .daal mein kuch kaala i guess gulbudhan needs to find that out or who knows us impress karne ke liye TB ka naya paitra 🤡

my pleasure manoj 🤗 & u r really a sweeti 😳 & whatever i hd told u is 100% & i think u dserve more than tht 😊 tumhare amazing shayari k age my 4 words r nothing & about udibaba i also think he hd something 😆 Embarrassed ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.

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wondering how it happen 😆

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ride_star

@ride_star

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#485

nice one guys , 😆😆😆

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645435

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#486

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Friday's Update

Anant ne bade vinamr hokar

Navya ke papa se mangi maafi hath Jodkar

Navya ki thi Ankhen Nam

Anant ki majburiyan na hoti kabi khatam

Navya ko hai Anant par fakr karti usey vo bahut pyaar

uske ma papa ki izzat ki kadar karta Anant apaar

taklu baba ka tho hai khopadiya nirala

chalein aur plotting pravachan ki zubani boldala

taklu baba tho lagta hai pravachan dete dete sattya gaya

DU aur BD ko apna evil plan samjhane ka ajebogarib 'prachin taknik ' apnya naya

budiya aur taklu baba hai zombies land se ye sabit kiya

uske weird demo mein chipe chaal ko usne samaj liya

Anant ne papa ke samne rakha apna shadi ke decision ka view

samjana chahta tha loonys ko uske Navya ko lekar iraade he noble pure n true

magar loonys tho tehre kale amavas ki paidaish

Anant ki khushi ki puri hone ki nahi karenge khwahish

papa ko apne kareeb ate dekh Anant ki tho darr aur nervousness se hava niklii

taklu baba ko hai yakin shadi ke baad Navya bajpayee's ke rang mein dal jayegii

budiya ko thi taklu baba ke baat manney mein apatthi

pucha usey TB ne kya vo ek choti si ladki se hai darthii

hai Taklu baba ko apne 3rd class zombies land ke adarsho par Aas

choti si Navya kabi nahi diga paygi zombies land ki neev usy hai vishvaas

Anant Navya ki shadi ko TB ne manzuri dii

sunkar DU aur BD ki par se jaise zameen khiskii

Taklu baba ki tho hai Navya ko bi loonys ke rang mein dhalne ki Taiyaari

use kya pata shayad Navya pad jaye sabi loonys par Bhaari

papa ne Anant se unke kanpur mein kiye gaye bartaav ki mangi Maafi

Anant ne unke hathon ko judne se rok lii

Anya ne mani thi sach chupana unki galtii

Anant ko papa ke gusse laga jayaz na bane uska bura kabhii

papa ko hua yakin Anant hai ladka achha

unki laadli Navya ki pasand khaas aur mann ka sachaa

tha Afsos papa ko karna chahiye tha Navya par yakeen

Navya kabi galat na ho sakti kabhi

papa ke bass mein agar hota

tho fauran Anya ka rishta paka hojata

papa ne Navya se apni majburi Jatayi

loonys ke karran shadi na hone ki bebasi samjhayii

na chahte hue papa ne kiya ek kathor faisla

Anant aur Navya ko alag gona hogaa

papa ke faisle se bechain Anya ka mann gabraya

Anant ka pop eye expression phir se Nazar Aya

papa ko tha Navya ki badnami hone ka darr

kahi Anya ka rishta na ban jaye Navya ki zindagi ka kehar

Anant ne nam ankon se papa ki baat Manlii

Sunkar jaise Navya ke dil ki dhadkan ruk padii

AnYa ki thi hamesha ki koshish jaari

khud they gham aur asuon mein doobey dusre par lutani muskaan saari

Anant ko dadi ne khane ke liye rok diya

papa ma ke zor dene par Anant ne unke sath dinner karna maan liya

zombies villa ki tigdi ki conspiracy thi jaari

Anant navya ko apne chaal mein fasne ki thi unki puri Taiyaari

Takdeer na jane legi Anant Navya ke pyaar ke kitne imtihaan

ek dusre ke dard ko Anya kar rahe thhey ankon se bayaan

harsh ki thi koshish Anant ke chehre par laney ki hasii

Navya apne gham bhuli ek pal ke liye hi sahii

DA Sr ki ankon ki balti mein glyecrine tha bakii

unko scenes ko karte hai forward jiske hum mangte sabse mafii

jatey hue Anant ko navya nahi dekh parahiti

us laga jaise uske dil se dhadkar dur jarahiti

papa ko Navya ki halat ka tha Abhaas

kaha Navya ko apne DOST ko darvaje ke paas

Anant ke liye mushil thhey pal pal haalaat

uske tuthey dil ke shabd nahi de parahete labon ka saath

Navya ne uski madad kii

ussey uski halat puchii

bheege palkon se Anant ne Navya se mangi mafii

Navya ko diye hue apni promise na nibha pane kii

nam Ankhon se Navya ne Anant ko bharosa dilaya

nahi vo naraaz Anant ne ki thi puri koshish usey jataya

Navya ne Anant se ek baat kahi

phir kabhi ussey sorry na kegne kii

Navya tho hai Anant ka humsaaya

Anant bhale na kahen uska koi gham nahi Navya se paraya

Navya bhin kahe jaan gayi sachaai

Annat gharvalon se ladkar aya usey baat samaj Ayi

Navya ne Anant ko samjhaya

ussey uski ma ka gham batlaya

Anant ke dil ki tukde hote rahe hazaar

Navya ne jab manga Anant se kuch AKHRIBAAR

Reviews u all know by now 😆

pagalpantii:-(read at ur own risk )

-->i wanna give a round of applause to the mridang vadak who plays the instrument while TB 's intense scenes are shown😆 the notes are so much in sync with budhao's expression

Stare = hi note

gulp = low pitch

stare again = higher note

pause = octave

--> send BD to the dentist pronto .yuck hersmile was 🤢 itne piley teeth tho hamare locality ke pappu ke bi nahi hain

--> Anant's pop eye expression (although it was for 2 sec) shud be edited out .editors valon ko phukat ke paise milte hain

-->some1 give DA Sr a book on 'RONE KE 1001 INTERESTING TARIKEY' her scenes always too gloomy to top it all the 'dahado ' kind of crying

this was it for now .aaage aur jane ke liye dekhte rahiye mera matlab padte rahiye posts hamare😳

Edited by manojshonafan - 14 years ago

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#488

Edited

👏 👏

👏 👏 2 update in same day?? its like a treat!!yay!!🥳

weekend bana bara rangin

perke apki shayari haseen

loved to read each & every line

must say u wrote them really fine

koshish hai meri meri comment tumhare chehre pe laye hasi

kyunki tum hamesha hamare liye ley ate ho khushi...

papa ko hua yakin Anant hai ladka achha
unki laadli Navya ki pasand khaas aur mann ka sachaa

soo true 😳😍 now i really think b4 going to Kanpur our pyare papa left his sensible brain & kind heart at home thts bhaved sooo insane in kanpur

some of the lines wr really touchy & sooo good tht i got emotional

Anant ne nam ankon se papa ki baat Manlii
Sunkar jaise Navya ke dil ki dhadkan ruk padii 😭

AnYa ki thi hamesha ki koshish jaari
khud they gham aur asuon mein doobey dusre par lutani

No doubt AnYa are sooo sweet tht they cn go through frm several pains but wont let any one knw about it

Takdeer na jane legi Anant Navya ke pyaar ke kitne imtihaan
ek dusre ke dard ko Anya kar rahe thhey ankon se bayaan

jatey hue Anant ko navya nahi dekh parahiti
us laga jaise uske dil se dhadkar dur jarahiti

Navya tho hai Anant ka humsaaya
Anant bhale na kahen uska koi gham nahi Navya se paraya

but im really glad that Anant & Nvya understand each other sooo well k its bcom hard to hide something from each other & i think this is the strongest & most unique part of this couple mashallah hope CVs wont ruin it in upcoming track

Edited by -Liana- - 14 years ago