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supria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

awesome...the first word that came to my mind after reading...the poem is so beautiful...i got lost...had to read it twice to let the impact set in...indeed, the cvs with one super episode yesday have managed to bring to fore several amazing topics out here...

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ashakd

@ashakd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Hi Urmi, thanks for the pm. I have never been a fan of shayari, or poetry. But I liked the last one u wrote - a letter from meeta to navya.😊 it was awesome. But this is something gr8 altogether. 👏 Wish I could recollect some grammer from my college days, so that I could use some superlative adjectives. 😃

My hindi is worse then a elementary school kids vocabulary. But somehow managed to push through all my grades 😊. till today, I dont know the difference between bayalis and untalis 😉, or even pachpan and chapan 😛 , but survived so far.

Urmi, there was 3 sentences in the poem which touched me a lot, coz u have described it in a much better way than the serial has done, and its been my favorite part in the serial 😭 I know loads of tears where shed during those days, its when anant disappears. 😕 😕I luve those scenes, bcoz, from there the positive changes took place in the serial.

Halat se samjhota karne ka faisla kar liya tha maine, lekin wo ye faisla kar na saka,

Mujhe rok na saka aur khud aage bhi badh na saka,

Thank gaya wo is ladai main kuch is kadar, ki khud apne ghar tak bhi wo pahunch na saka,

U have summarised those fealings so well...👏⭐️😍, luv it. Wish I could send this to the cv's.

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87jpatel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

awesome poem urmi
loved it

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barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ashakd
First of all before i comment about the poem, tell me why r u not asleep at this hour? 😕

I know it was almost 3.30am, crazzy me😉😆...was working on the peformance report for today's meeting tillmost 12.30..tab tak saari neend ud gayi aur phir... . I wanted to make this post since last week, but didnt get time, as i was busy with work and study. if i would have waited much longer,it would have been too late,with the speed with which this story is gng... I wanted to voice navya's word, i guess i was in that mood to write i should say..., so i was awake...

thanks for your concern dear...

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: bs8889
Wow...it is really beautifully written poem... i got so emotional reading it..especially d last part..had a lump in my throat n was on verge of tears... hats off 2 u..u have expressed so wonderfully that i cud feel exactly wat navya must b feeling...👏

Thank you sonia, i think that's your name, sorry if i am worng...

I am glad i was able to express navya well in my words..this is what i alwys felt navya would be thinking...and thank you for your kind words...

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.DarkandTwisty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Beautifully Written👏👏👏
You take us through an emotional journey of Navya😭
Scenes automatically comes to my mind while reading
Each line is so perfect...i wish CVs see this
Thank u so much for this...Hats off to your talent👏
Keep writing!!

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

IF is not allowing me to write indiviadual replies, says spamming not allowed, so I am here replying everybody individually...

@mridula.shome...thak you for your lovely comment dear...

@newly born..thank you Arvind..

@jignasapatel..Thank you so much dear for liking my poem...

@arushi...love you dear sissy🤗..i am glad you liked my poem..

@supria...Thank you so much for such sweet words and compliments..I must say..there are amazing post all over the forum, CV's have done this time and again...but i have still not seen the last two epis..just visualised it thru Tanu's lovely post..thank you tanu🤗...I wanted to write this since navya left for dinner to be true..but didnt get time...I am happy you liked it...

@nishkala..thank you nisih..for loving my poem...I made an attempt to portray navya's feeling..so the entire credit goes to NAvya...

@sandy..Thank you sissy🤗..i am touched with youe kind words..you bacame my fan..oh wow...even I am fan of your write-up's sweety..so waht if you are not well-versed with shayari..you ahve the amazing talent to add fun into the most tensed scenes..you always bring smile to my face...

@nishi755..thank you for liking it dear...

@bhavyanidhi..thank you for your lovely reply dear...to be true ..i was thinking abt it, for almost the entire week, and took alomost 3 hrs and 3 edits..before posting this poem...I am glad you liked it...

@yaminiraj...i know it is a very long poem..i was afraid people might not read it looking at its length...But i am glad you liked it...

Edited by barbie2011 - 14 years ago

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ashakd
Hi Urmi, thanks for the pm. I have never been a fan of shayari, or poetry. But I liked the last one u wrote - a letter from meeta to navya.😊 it was awesome. But this is something gr8 altogether. 👏 Wish I could recollect some grammer from my college days, so that I could use some superlative adjectives. 😃

My hindi is worse then a elementary school kids vocabulary. But somehow managed to push through all my grades 😊. till today, I dont know the difference between bayalis and untalis 😉, or even pachpan and chapan 😛 , but survived so far.

Urmi, there was 3 sentences in the poem which touched me a lot, coz u have described it in a much better way than the serial has done, and its been my favorite part in the serial 😭 I know loads of tears where shed during those days, its when anant disappears. 😕 😕I luve those scenes, bcoz, from there the positive changes took place in the serial.

Halat se samjhota karne ka faisla kar liya tha maine, lekin wo ye faisla kar na saka,

Mujhe rok na saka aur khud aage bhi badh na saka,

Thank gaya wo is ladai main kuch is kadar, ki khud apne ghar tak bhi wo pahunch na saka,

U have summarised those fealings so well...👏⭐️😍, luv it. Wish I could send this to the cv's.

Hey Asha🤗..thank you so much for a lovely reply..it means a lot to me

...how would i not share my writing with you..so pm to banta hi tha.

..I am glad that my writing makes sense to you and you like it..inspite not being fan of them..

letter from meeta to navya is indeed very close to my heart..there is something abt this show..it touches me deep inside, i can feel the emotions so strongly, i dont know why or how ..that words just comes into my mind...To be true...this is the first time I have written something this long( i was really afraid beacuse of its length to be true)...par navya ki har ek baat yaad aati gayi aur main use likhti gayi...i a mhappy to get such lovely replies..

No need to add any superlative adjectives..your simple words said it all..

the 3lines that you liked are one of my favourites too...I have cried a lot after picnic till Anant's ILU...the dilemma in which he wanders outside the house was really touching..i am glad my words could express it all...

on lighter note... to help you a little..bayalllis is 42, untalis is 48, pachpan is 55 and chapan is 65..😉

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: nuttycleo
Urmi...🤗

that was brilliant... kind of a synopsis of the show so far in words of Navya...u practically missed nothing that was important...the dilemmas, the thrill of new love, the concern for ma...beautiful!

do update as the story progresses...will be gr8!

Thank you for your lovely reply dear...

yes it was a kind of synopsis till the dinner night..as navya shares it with herself...the show has had such great momments that i tried my best to include them all...

I 'll try if i can update it..it depends on how the story goes from here...but thank you for liking it..

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Kajal Gupta

@superdupercool

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

OMG it was too good 🤗

i was lost in navyas world, the way u have described everything was amazing

i really liked ur poem 😍

first when i saw ur poem i thought i am not gonna read it coz it is too long but when i started reading it couldn't stop reading it. I read further and further 😛

👏

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