NAVYA'S SHAYARI CORNER UPDATED Pg No 157 - Page 27

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ar.arsh

hayeee!
manoj srsly, i don't mind repeatimg myself .i love ur postsss!

thanks a lot yaar😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: harini2010

😆.....2day z d best amongst ol...rolf😆...no words ...amazing super brilliant fantastic ...lyked each n every line ...laughed a lot it was very funny ...n impressive too
😆

thanks harini i was waiting for that .
yeh even i felt this 1 was more comical than others 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Another wonderful shayeri manoj 👏 👏... loved it 😊

Specially these lines:

inke pooja ka drama dekar dimag sabka BARMAYA
is besuri chudailya ke gale mein lata didi jaisa awaaz kahan se AYA
aakhir aa gayi jis ghadi ka taa sabko INTEZAAR
budiya ke kamar matkane ke liye hua ja rahe they sab BEKARAAR 😛

parivar aur doston ke khushi mein doond rahi thi Navya apni KHUSHI
par is koshish mein huyi nakaam aakhir thi uske zindagi mein anant ki KAMII

takle ko bi dikhana hai apne udi giri ka KEEDA
suspense ke naam pe de raha hai viewers ko kitni PEEDA

👏 👏 Keep writing... hilarious

thanks a lot princess 😃
glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chucklebuddy

hey... i think i need to search for words 4 describing your shayari... awesome... well written... 👏

thanks sandy G aakhir gharib ko darshan de diya apne😉
just kidding😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manojshonafan


thanks sandy G aakhir gharib ko darshan de diya apne😉
just kidding😆


sry manoj... woz busy wid my fnds... but everyday i will read n comment surely yaar... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fridays Update :-

Aaj ka episode tha thoda chatpata thoda KHAAS
pehla segment mein chalta raha chudailya ke parivaar ka BAKWAAS

chudailya thi takle baba ke faisley ke bare mein sochkar PARESHAAN
magar cartuniya aur unki ammaji they tensionfree dekar jise hui vo HAIRAAN

chudailya suspensva ab bardasht nahi kat PAA RAHI TII
tensionva ke mare anant ki bhabhiG mari JAA RAHITI

faisla kia ab lagai gi vo pata takle ke dimaag mein kya chal raha PLAN
tabi aagai booh aah dadi leke udi baba ka FARMAAN

idhar navya ki dadi behti gange mein apne haath dohey JAARAHI TII
bechare navya aur uske doston se khambakt dadi apni malish KARVA RAHITI

navya aur uske doston ko apni bak bak se usne khoob PAKAYA
uski sari batein kisi ke samaj mein nahi AYA

Dadi se bachne mein lagi thi Navya aur uski SAHELI
pakao dadi amma nahi chod rahi ti unhe AKELI

tension ke marey chudailya hall mein chakar LAGARAHITI
cartuniya puppy ke jaise uske peeche dum HILARAHITHI

aakhir udi baba ke khopodiya ki batii JHALI
Anant aur saagun ke sagai TALLI

sunkar udi baba ka faisla khil ghai Anant aur Mohan ke chehre pe MUSKAAN
par dadiyal uncle ne aakar kar dia unhe thoda PARESHAAN

Kismet ka bi hai khel bada NIRALA
kabi miley gham ka haar kabhi khushiyon bari VIJAYMALA

ek taraf Anant ki khushiyon ka nahi tha koi TIKHANA
dusri taraf Rama aur uske parivaar se khushiyan hui BEGAANA

Anant ka dil apni zindagi navya ko khush khabar sunane ko ho raha tha BEKARAAR
idhar chudailya ne thana nahi manegi ithni asani se HAAR

Navya ki dadi kar rahi thi sabke naak mein DUM
Aaj ke episode mein koi Anya scene na hone ka hai sabko GHUM

Precap:
Anant ne aakhir sunaiye navya ko khabar Jhoomkar hokar BEHAAL
udhar chudail ke khopadiya se chali nayi ek CHAAL


It was a very good episode .finaly the zombies proved they still have something called brain in them😆 .but the Rama is determined to manipulate things around .lets see what store in for us.
Anyways but the cardinal point is AnYa lovestory gonna blossom soon .cant wait for Sunday now😍
Sunday= revelation = Anya together = First date = Fans happy = happy moments for some time = more drama is on its way 😉



Request:- All the new members even silent ones if u read my post n find it worth ur time then hit the LIKE button so that next time i can pm u all😳

Please dont forget 2 hit the button

EVERY1 CAN SHARE THEIR SHAYARIES HERE . 🤗

Edited by manojshonafan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Post.😊..
Best lines..
tension ke marey chudailya hall mein chakar LAGARAHITI
cartuniya puppy ke jaise uske peeche dum HILARAHITHI
aakhir udi baba ke khopodiya ki batii JHALI
Anant aur saagun ke sagai TALLI

sunkar udi baba ka faisla khil ghai Anant aur Mohan ke chehre pe MUSKAAN
par dadiyal uncle ne aakar kar dia unhe thoda PARESHAAN

Kismet ka bi hai khel bada NIRALA
kabi miley gham ka haar kabhi khushiyon bari VIJAYMALA

You rock👏👏⭐️, Keep writing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
grt post manoj👏

luved tiz lines...nd keep writing more...😳

tension ke marey chudailya hall mein chakar LAGARAHITI
cartuniya puppy ke jaise uske peeche dum HILARAHITHI
aakhir udi baba ke khopodiya ki batii JHALI
Anant aur saagun ke sagai TALLI

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: barbie2011

Awesome Post.😊..

Best lines..
tension ke marey chudailya hall mein chakar LAGARAHITI
cartuniya puppy ke jaise uske peeche dum HILARAHITHI
aakhir udi baba ke khopodiya ki batii JHALI
Anant aur saagun ke sagai TALLI

sunkar udi baba ka faisla khil ghai Anant aur Mohan ke chehre pe MUSKAAN
par dadiyal uncle ne aakar kar dia unhe thoda PARESHAAN

Kismet ka bi hai khel bada NIRALA
kabi miley gham ka haar kabhi khushiyon bari VIJAYMALA

You rock👏👏⭐️, Keep writing...

wow barbie i hope u dont mind me asking do u actually wait for my updates coz its a 3rd time ur the first 1 to comment here.its quite overwhelming 😃 i m really touched thats so sweet .Thanks a lot barbie .its readers like u who urge an amateur writer like me to strive more

hope u enjoy the episode😃

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