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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
kya yaar! Mein to padh ke hi emotional ho gya. Kitna dard hai is pure scene mein. Agar ye sach ho jaye toh...kitna acha ho.

Dekhte hue dukh toh hoga,lekin shaheer ki fab acting dekhne ko milegi.

CV,S sun lo...hamari dua.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
plz plz plz yaar continue..its so wonderful ..i imagined the entire scene...very very well written...👏

I am happy i am getting to atleast read what I want to watch 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice part...loved it...pls continue soon...pls pm mee if possible...take care...love aish...
Edited by aisha_ranbir8 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

Continued….

After anant leaves…ritz appy n ranbir come to navya.,..rita hugs navya….navya also hugs her back..n starts crying badly…ranbir comes there..

Ap=kya hua?? Anant chala gaya????

Ra=ha..mere bahar tak janese pehlehi..anant ja chukka tha….

Ap=navya..tune yeh kya kia?? Tune kuch kaha kyu nahi????

Ritz made navya sit on the bench..n sat beside her..trying to console her…

R=appy..pehle..usse chup to hojane de…

Ap=nahi ritz…aj iski yeh halat…iski khudki bewakufi ki wajase ha….tune dekha nahi kya?? Anant ne kitna kuch keh diya..woh to bechara..tayyar ha..sabse larne..usne to apna pyaar humare samne.. apne apse.. accept karliya ha..woh chup ha…kadam nahi bara raha ha..sirf isiliye kyuki navya piche reh chuki ha..aur aj…anant ne hath baraya tha..navya keliye..par isne..tujhe ho kya gaya ha navya???

Navya looked at appy…..ritz didn't say anything…as appy was rite…

N=guys…mane…

Ra=navya..mujhe tum donokeliye bura lagraha ha..i no..ke tumhare lie..ye sab asan nahi ha..par navya anant ke bareme to sochooo…who bechara kis dorse guzar raha ha..ma janta hu..jo anant aj tak apne parivar ke khilaff jake…ek kadam tak nahi baraya …usne aj…tumhare lie….tumhara sath pankeliye…apne parivar ke khilaff kadam baraya ha..sirf..tumhare liye..apne pyaar keliye..to kyat um uske lie….apne pyaar keliye ek kadam nahi bara sakti?? Kya tumhe..anant par…ape pyaar par bharosa nahi ha?????

Navya looked at ranbir….

Ap=rehne do ranbir..ye humeshasehi esi ha..kabhi bi..koi fasla..sahi nahi lesaktii..

N=appy..tu…ese….

Ap=sahi to kehrahihu ma navya…tune yeh theek nahi kia….tu meri best frend ha..par..aj mera maan karraha ha..ke ma anant ke pass jau..aur usse sahara duu…..kyuki us bechareko iski zyada zarurat ha….

Saying appy left from there…

R=appy sun to…appy rukh na…..

Ra=ritika… usse hum badme samjhayenge..filhaal chalo…ma tum donoko ghar chod deta hu….

Flashback ends

Anant closes his eyes..n remembers what happened just a few hours ago..he angrily came back home..n locked himself in his room…

A=mujhe shayed navya ko waha..ese chodke nahi ana chahiye tha…mane…uspar itna gussa kia..usse itni zorse pakda..usse dard hua hoga…mane yeh theek nahi kia..mujhe usse baat karni ha…

Anant picks his cell..n dials navyas number….

Navya was in the car with ritz..n ranbir….when her cell rings..she sees it was anant…n looks at ritzz…

R=navya…soch kya rahiha?? Baat kar usse…who tujhse bat karna chahta ha..phone utha…

N=ritz..mujhe samajh nahi araha ha..ke ma kya kahungi usse?? Wohh…itna naraz ha…mane….

Ra=navya..plzz..pehle..tum baat too karoo….anant ne tumhe call isiliye kia ha..kyuki usse ehsaas hua ha.ke usne tumhare sath rude behave kia ha..

N=par..ranbirr..

Navya was confused…should she pick up the call..n there anant was waiting for her to answer the call…but navya didn't pick it….n the line was disconnected…..annat was more heartbroken…

A=navya..tum mujhe itni jaldi bhula dena chahtii ho..ke mera phone tak lena nahi chahtiii…

R=tunne yah kya kia?? Call kyu nahi uthaya???

Ra=ritika..tum shant hojaoo…ma ghar jakar…anant se baat karunga..

N=lekin ranbir….

Ra=navya..trust me…..ma sab sambhallunga…

They reached navyas home…

R=chal..ma tujhe drop karke ati hu..

N=nahi..ritz..ma chali jaungii…plz..mujhe akela rehna..tum log jaoo..aur ha..appy ko sorry kehna..woh mera call nahi uthayegii..

R=tu appy ki chinta mat kar….apna dhyan rakh…

Navya nods..n goes to her home….

Scene shifts to anant..he..was standing near the window..n crying..his eyes were red….n thinking about the moments which he spended with navya…the project time… in the car… in the rickshaw..the rain moments… there first hug….the moments in the taxi…anant kissed navya on her cheeks… the most memorable two nights…they were all alone…free from all kind of issues.. lost in there love….anant was remembering each n every moment…when nimisha came there…

N=bhaii..

Anant didn't notice her..he was still thinking about navya…nimisha comes n stands beside anant n keeps her hand on his shoulder..anant comes out of his thoughts…

N=bhai..ap roraheho????

Anant wiped his tears..n turned around..

A=nahi to..ma kyu rounga?? Tu bata..yaha kaise???

Nimisha closed the door..n then came infront of him….

N=mujhse to jhut mat bolo….ap is shadi se..is rishtese khush nahi hona????

Anant didn't say anything…trying to control his tears..but still tears were falling from his eyes…he was looking down…..here n there..nimisha..holds his from shoulders..n makes him look into her eyes…

N=dekho..meri taarf bhaii..tum mujhse share nahi karoge??? Tum kya mujhe rama bhabi..jaise samajhte ho??

A=nahi..nimi…

N=phir?? Ma acchese janti hu..ke bhaii..ap is shadise…bilkul bhi khush nahi ho..ap shagun ko pasand hi nahi karte…ap to navya ko pasand karte ho na/??

Anant looked at her…his sis knew about his feelings…

N=mane theek kaha na bhai?? Ap navya ko pasand karte hona?????

That was enough…anant no more..could control himself..his feelings..his tears..he hugged his sister…n cried as much as he could…nimisha at first was shocked..to see her brother at this state..but later..she hugged him back..to console him…

Scene shifts to navya…

She enters her home..n wipes her tears…trying to be normall..but it was impossible for her to control herself…she comes inside..n sees her papa..ma… dadi..were sitting in the hall..

Navyas papa(np)=are navya beta..tum agayii…

Navyas mom(nm)= navya..beta..kya hua???

N=kuch nahi ma…bass thak gayi hu….

Da=are..to idhar aja dadi ke pass…thori der beth ja..bate kare…theek hojayega…

N=abhi nahi dadii..ma kamreme jati hu…

Nm=par..navya..

N=maa..ma theek hu…bass aram karna ha..

Np=theek ha beta…jao..tum aram karloo…

Navya comes to her room..n locks the door…she runs to the bed..n starts crying…

N=mujhe maaf kardoo..anant..im soryy..ma janti hu..mane tumhe bohot hurt kia ha..im really soryyy…mujhhe maafff kardooo…

Scene shifts to anant…

N=bhaii..sambhalo khudkooo…

A=ma usse nahi khona chahta nimi..nahi khona chahta..aur nahi..ma usse bhul sakta huu…aur nahi ma usse khona chahta huu!!

Nimisha breaks the hug..n makes anant sit on the bed..n she sits beside him…

N=bhaii..mujhe to pehlehi pata tha..ke is rishtese ab zara bhi khush nahi ho..bhai kehte kyu nahi ap baba se? daro mat..bhai,….jo hoga…dekha jayega..par ap baat to karooo…

A=kaise karu?? Aur kya kahu??? Jab navya hi mera sath nahi dena chahtii..to ma….kya karunga baba se sab kehke?? Yeh sach ha..ke ma ye shadi nahi karna chahta..aur nahi yeh sagaii…Par..tu bata…ma kya karunga sab kehke??? Navya…nahi chahtii..ke ma parivaar se laruu…parivar ki baat manta hu..to shagun se shadii..shagun se shadi karnepar navya ko dilse aur zindagi se nikalna parega aur esa karneka..matlab ha..ke apne apko bhul jana..ma navya se door nahi reh pata…aur nahi reh paunga…usse bhulneka to sawalhi nahi uthtta…

N=bhaii….navya yeh sab isiliye kehrahiha..kyuki..woh bhi apko chahtii ha..aur shayed isiliye who nahi chahtiii.ke… ap uski wajase…apne apko…apne parivarse door rakhe..isme uska pyaar dikhta ha bhai…ab jo karna ha..apko karna ha..kyuki samay kaam ha…kaal apki sagai ha..bhaii…meri bat manoo..rokh do..is sagaii kooo…

There someone was calling nimisha…

N=ma abhi ayi….

A=nimmi…

N=ha/??

A=darwaja…band kardena….

N=theek ha…

At night…navya was standing..near the window..the moon was shining..both anant n navya were looking at the moon..n thinking about eachother…n the song started playing in the bg..

Jab neend na aye,…..jab yaad sataye

jab dill ghabraye…jab gham tarpaye..

isse kya kahiye…mere rab tu bata.

Ishq hai ishq hai…ha yehi ishq hai..(AnYa are thinking about eachother)

Ishq haar bhi ha ishq jeet bhi ha..

Dilka dushman bhi ha.. dilka meet bhi ha..

Ishq hai ishq hai.,.ha yehi ishq hai….

Ishq haar bhi ha..ishq jeet bhi ha…

Anant is looking at navyas pictures..in the laptop…n remembering the moments

Kabhi ishq banke shama jagmagaye

Kabhi banka gham ka andhera yeh chaye..(he remembers when navya was walking away..without looking at him..in the college garden)

Kabhi ishq banke shama jagmagaye

Kabhi banke gham ka andhera yeh chaye

Ishq hai geet bhi… ishq hai raag bhi..(he remembers when they were in the car..)

Dil jala de magar ishq who aag bhi..(he angrily closes the laptop..n goes to the window)

Aag lagaye… hosh uraye…(anant takes his phone)

Dilko sataye…jaan gawaye….(he wanted to call..but didn't call navya)

Ek deewangi hai isse kya kahu…(throwed the phone on the bed)

Ishq hai ishq hai..ha yehi ishq hai..(he sat on his knees..n started to cry badly)

Dil ka dushmaan bhi ha..dil ka meet bhi ha..

On the other hand navya was feeling the same…

Kabhi ishq dilme..khushi leke aye..(she sees her computer..n imagines she was chatting with anant)

Kabhi ishq asoo in akhome laye..(but at the same time..he was vanished)…

Kabhi ishq dilme khushi leke aye..(navya lied on the bed..n was crying…)

Kabhi ishq asoo in akhome laye…

Ishq mein hai khushi…ishq mein dard bhi(navya takes her cell..n sees anants miss calls..)

Iske sau roop hai..ishq hai zindagi…(she wanted to call..but couldn't…)

Khwab dikhaye…phir chaukaye..(she sits on the bed…taking a pillow…)

Dil ko dukhaye…chain churaye…(n was thinking about anant)

Ishq akhir ha kya..ma bhi haran hu…(navya went to the window..n started to cry badly)

Jab neend na aye…jab yaad sataye..

Jab dil ghabraye…jab gham tadpyaee…..

Both of them were crying n missing eachother badlyy……

Precap: anants engagement,….

Ritz n appy came to navyas place..to take her in the engagement party…

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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
Super and awesome update,continue it ,and thanks for the PM to remind for the update,nice written,i think infront of me the characters👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
well written...👍🏼 i imagined eah n every dialogue as if told by the characters themselves... esp navya... nice... 👏 precap is scary..!! 😕 😭
Edited by chucklebuddy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
wonderful ...👏...too good yaar 👏.both of them are in so much of emotional turmoil...plz plz...shagun ka zaada part mat rkhna next episode mein..uske naam se hi gussa aata hai...



Thanks a lot for the PM dear 😊
Edited by smitasmita - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waww ...awsomee update 👏👏👏👏..u incld th characters as thy r in th show faab 👏👏👏👏👏...percap nahiii😭😭😭😭😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR...😊😊😊

I luv AnYa❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
very nice! loved it 👏

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