FF:Tumse Kahein Ya Hum Naa Kahein??!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lead Characters: Anant Bajpayee
Navya Mishra


Dear readers, I've been imagining this FF some times ago. It will be written through Anant's point of view.

PS: I'm neither a professional writer nor I'm good at creating situations...But I really wanted to write this FF. So please, do read, comment and like.
We all really want to keep this forum active, don't we?😉
So let's just hit it!!!😊




1st episode:

Anant Bajpayee is a young boy with great aspirations. His parents and grandparents expect a lot from him. Even though he's a boy of this generation, he's deeply rooted. He, who has always followed his grandpa's rules and traditions, never thought he'd ever fall in love, ever. But as the saying rightly states: <<Pyar Kiya Nahin Jaata Ho Jaata Hain, Dil Diya Nahin Jaata Kho Jaata Hain>>

I couldnt' help but stare at Navya, her long silky hairs that kept coming on her face; her perfect pinkish lips that I remember trembles whenever I'm near her; her big round light brown eyes which were lost in another world.

I was lost as well, in Navya's world. Tonight, Ranveer was thinking of going to the movies with Ritika, moreover, Appy was out of town with her parents. I had to think of a way to make Ranveer ask Ritz to ask Navya to come to the cinema tonight, then I'd be able to spend some quality time with her all alone, while the two love birds would be making out!!

Hey Ranveer yaar, suno naa. Aaj hamare saath movie dekhne kaun-kaun aa raha hai?

Pehle to Ranveer ne mujhe sar se leke pauw tak observe kiya, but i stayed cool.

Kyun? Achaank se tumhe kya hua?

Pppfftt!!! I just wanted to avoid this question. But i replied very quickly.

Woh kya hain naa, maine suna hai ki aaj raat shayad theater housefull mode me hoga. To maine socha ke break ke dauraan main ticket kharidne jaa sakta houn agar mujhe pata ho ke kitne log aa rahe hai.

Ranveer zor-zor se hasne laga! Achaank se! As if usse mere haalat ka andaaza tha aur phir bhi mujhpe hass raha tha:

Oh! Toh yeh baat hain! Main to yeh soch...kher...to movies dekhne, main jaa raha houn, tou bhi chal raha hai, Ritz bhi saath aa rahi hain, aur...han..bas yehi!!

I was SHOCKED! Sirf hum teenon? No ways! Main aur kabaab me haddi, hargiz nahin!!
But still, I tried and asked again:

Ritz akeli chalegi?

Then Ranveer started pondering on the matter:

Han, achcha nahin lagega naa...Hum do ladke aur Ritz ek akeli ladki. Lekin kya kar sakte hain? Tumhe to pata hi hain, Appy's out of town...Hang on! Abhi-abhi mujhe ek idea sujha hai!

Main ek dum se samaj gaya that he was going to mention Navya. Tab meri khushi ka thikana hi nahin raha; but I stayed cool. Just then Ranveer snapped his fingers in front of my eyes, drawing my attention towards him:

Han, o main yeh keh raha tha ki tum apne saath...

Main Navya hee kehne jaa raha tha kee...




Precap: On hearing Ranveer, Anant had a mixed expression on his face. 😕

To know more about what happened, will Navya go to the movies with Anant or not..please log on kijiye:
www.india-forums.com on Navya's forum!


Guys, please tell me how was it and whether i should continue!!😳
For any further info, u could PM me...
Thank you...
NB: My name is shyameeta!!!😊



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Posted: 14 years ago
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really nice yaar😊.....but wat did ranbeer say to anant? jaldi update karna...plsssssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
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FF:Tumse Kahein Ya Hum Naa Kahein??!! Episode 2

Han, Sonia ko definitely la sakte ho!

Sonia ka naam sunte hi main ek dum se chunk gaya!

Kya-kya-kya-kya?????

Sonia ko???

Uss gale-paru ko???

Marwaanaa hai kya? Pichli baar bhool gaye kya hua tha? Woh accident, jo Sonia ki wajah se hote-hote bach gaya aur main Delhi jaate-jaate reh gaya? Aur waise bhi, Ritz aur sonia 2 junglee billiyan hain boss!! Main keh raha hoon, believe me, cat-fight ho jayega!

Ranveer laughed more than loudly this time but at least he agreed to what I said. I was happy ki woh mere haan mein haan mila raha tha.

Uske baad, maine ultimate weapon istemaal kiya:

Toh kya tum Ritz ko jaake keh sakoge ki plan cancelled ho gaya?

CANCELLED?? Main jaake bataaoun?? Arre yaar marwayega kya? Tum ruko, main abhi kuch sochta houn.

Meanwhile, I kept muttering under my breath:

Please…Navya-Navya…Please! Please! Please! Please!

Navya! Main Ritz se kehta houn ki who Navya se baat kare!

I couldn't control myself and loudly said:

Yes!!!!

Ranveer was surprised as hell:

WHAT???

Main to darr hi gaya tha, shayad maine kuch zyaada hi openly apne feeling ko expressed kiya; lekin baat ko ghoomaana koi mujhse sikhe!

Yes, yes, Navya's perfect…uhh…for Ritz's company. Who best friends hain aur ek saath reh sakte hain. Lekin Navya ke parents? Unka kya?!

Precap: Navya's tensed; she looks moreover uncomfortable. Woh aa rahi hain ke nahin.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ish-Sajan

Meanwhile, I kept muttering under my breath:

Please'Navya-Navya'Please! Please! Please! Please!

Navya! Main Ritz se kehta houn ki who Navya se baat kare!

I couldn't control myself and loudly said:

Yes!!!!

i just loved this part yaar...i could literally imagine anant doin all this stuff...and now that u have posted the precap, plsss jaldi update karo...plsss...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww, this one's really sweet! :)

It was such a nice read for my break - left me with a smile :D
Continue writing! (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This both d 2 episodes r really very nice... continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely.. its cute. Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its gud yaar..
I m vry xcited 4 d nxt part
plz update soon

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