AVNEIL OS:-THE KISS

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Note:-In this os Avneil had confessed their love to each other already.In this avni is working as criminal counsellor.Angie,Riya,Mithali ,Nidhi are her colleagues

Avni is getting ready for her girls night -out at Angie's house .She was wearing a beautiful red off shoulder dress .She gets ready and is about to leave
As soon as she reached the door ,neil comes inside.He is mesmerised on looking avni.He keeps on staring her
A(snaps her fingers infront of him):-
Neil will you move away from the door?I have to go .I am getting late.Mithali is waiting outside to pick me up
Neil moves closer to her
A:-Neil...I am getting late.Plzz move
N:-wifey relax Mithali won't run away .She will be there
He adjusts avni's mangalsutra which was hidden under avni's dress.
He fills avni's hairline with sindoor
N:-Now you can go
A:-You are behaving like a typical husband.
N:-Wifey if you go out like this,any body can come and propose you
I won't let that happen.That's why I did these to show them that you are mine
A:-Someone is jealous.
N:-If your beautiful wife gets out of the house like this ,any husband will be jealous .
Neil was about to kiss avni's cheeks .Mithali blows horn
A:-Neil I have to go .I will come tomorrow morning.Byee
N:-This girl is such an ajooba.Mithali had to blow the horn now when I was trying to kiss avni.She spoiled my moment.I will assign more work to Mithali from tomorrow

At Angie's house:-
Angie,nidhi ,mithali ,riya and avni had watched a movie for some time.They had eaten dinner
(R-Riya,An-Angie,M-Mithali,N-Nidhi,A-Avni)
R:-Guys let's play a game
An:-Good idea.But which game?
N:-Truth or dare
M:-No its boring
R:-I have an idea.Everone present here is engaged.So everyone has to tell about their first things like first kiss,first proposal ...Do you understand?
A:-Is it necessary to play this game?
All of them glared at avni
An:-Don't be a spoilsport avni.Let's play the game.It will be fun
A:-ok .Riya you will start first
R:-Mee?why?
A:-Because this stupid idea is yours
R:-Ok.My boyfriend abhay is very romantic .He decorated the room with flowers and candles.He brought a red rose and proposed me .And then we had our first kiss
An&M:-How sweet!
An:-My husband Akash too proposed me in a beach infront of so many people.We were chatting.Suddenly he kneeled down and gave a red rose to me.
A:-That's so sweet of him
M:-Mine too similar like riya's.Manish proposed me like that
N:-Well mine was an arranged marriage.When I had to go for a work for 7 days ,I felt very sad.After I came back ,when I entered our room,kabir kissed me suddenly .That's our first kiss happened
All:-Ooo
R:-Avni your marriage is also arranged .Tell us about your first kiss
A(in mind):-We haven't kissed yet.Is it necessary to ask like this?This riya is stupid .What should I do?
An:-Yes avni don't be a spoil sport.Tell us
A:-I will tell you how neil proposed me.He gifted me a car and white dress.
When I came out wearing that dress,he wasn't there.Later I was arrested by police and they took me to police station.When I asked about my crime,they said that I had stolen
When I asked that what I had stolen,then
All:-Then?
A:-Neil came forward and said I had stolen his heart.
All:-Awww
A:-He asked me that if he could arrest me forever in his heart to which I agreed instantaneously
All:-Wow
An-Neil is so romantic.No one can beat him in romance
R:-If proposal was this much romantic,then think how their first kiss would have been?
N:-Avni tell about your first kiss
A(in mind):-I will kill this riya some day
A:-As per game I had to tell only one.
I did.Let's do something else
R:-No we want to know.Tell na plzz
An:-Avni haven't you both kissed yet?
N:-No something might have happened between them for sure
M:-speak something Avni
A:-Stop all of you,I am going to sleep .It's already 3.Gud nyt
An:-She is feeling shy .Haha.Let's sleep
All:-Yeah .

At Morning:-
Avni came to khanna house .She saw neil sleeping peacefully
A(thinking that neil is sleeping):-Look how he is sleeping.All happened because of him.I had proposed first.
Now I am feeling that I may have to initiate for kissing also
Haww! No way.He has to initiate first.
She takes her clothes and goes into bathroom angrily
Neil opens his eyes
N(to himself):-Acha Mrs.khanna wants a kiss .Hmmm.If avni wants something,how could I deny be it a kiss or something else.Wait n watch wifey
Avni was eating angrily at the dining table
Neil knew the reason.But he wants to tease avni..
N:-Avni what happened?Why are you looking so angry?
A:-Nothing
N:-Nothing had happened
A:-That's the problem
N:-What?I didn't understand
A:-I was saying that nothing had happened.
She finished quickly and goes out of the house unable to bear Neil's teasings
(P-PRAKASH PAPA)
P:-Neil why are you teasing avni?
N:-What have I done?
P:-Neil I understood everything.Stop teasing my avni
N:-Ok dad .I will sort this out soon
P:-Hmm .Sort it quickly
N:-All are taking avni's side only in this house
Ohh god what I have to do?
Bebe pats on neil's shoulder
Bebe:-Dramebazz !Stop acting
N:-Bebe you too changed your side
Bebe:-First make avni smile and then talk to me
N:-okay

At Night:-
(In Avneil's room)
Avni is talking to herself
Neil comes there and chuckled at avni's antics
N:-Wifey What happened?Why are you angry at me since morning
A:-Nothing
N:-How will I know if you won'ttell me?
A:-Everything can't be explained.You have to understand some things on your own
N(huskily):-Acha what are that things?
A:-Don't talk to me neil.I have to do everything first.Normally boys proposes girls.But I proposed you first
N:-When did I say that you are a girl?
A:-Haww neil I really don't talk with you now
N:-You didn't give the answer
What are that things?
A:-Ooo
You tell that I am a tubelight
But you are a tube light
Neil came towards avni's ears and says:-Now you came to know how I would feel when you are behaving like a tubelight.
A:-You are not that innocent.You understood what I was talking about.You were acting till now.
Haww!,How dare you?
Avni starts running around neil in the room.
While running,they both falls on bed
Avni was about to move away from neil
But neil helds her tightly.
A:-Neil let me go
N:-I will never let you go away from me avni
They had an eye lock
Neil swapped their positions.
A:-Neil what are you doing?
N:-That you wanted me to do
Avni blushes
A:-You know everything
N:-I had heard when you are talking in the morning
A:-Neilll
Before avni could say anything,neil kissed her lips
Avni clutched Neil 's hair and moans in pleasure
After some time,they parted due to lack of breath
N(huskily):-Wifey do you want me to do some THINGS else?
Avni blushes hard hearing neil's words and hugs him not making an eye contact with him
Neil smiles at her
They both sleeps in each others peacefully

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this is so cute 😳 you always write cute os 😊
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I actually luvd mitali nd riya..impssible thng bcm pssible..cutie one😳
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Originally posted by: roshni_az

I actually luvd mitali nd riya..impssible thng bcm pssible..cutie one😳

Riya is OK
You luvd Mithali😕 why yaar?
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