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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry for being late, here you go with the chapter 2.
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FEBRUARY 15th, 2017

Avni's Residence

7:00 a.m.


Sun rays danced all the way into the room dodging the shield of sheer curtains held together with a velcro strap. Neil blinked hard, unable to adjust the sudden flash of light on him. His head throbbed and there was a severe pain in his vertebral column. Pulling himself up from the hard floor, he glanced at the sleeping figure of Avni on bed with a blanket secured around her.


He had his Psychology classes to take, but should he leave her alone like this, Neil was in a dilemma. Arjun had trusted him with his best friend, he cannot disappoint him and so Neil decided against leaving her alone in house. He quickly bathed and changed into track pants and sweat shirt, an extra pair of clothes he always carries in his car.


Pulling the curtains together, he made his way down stairs towards the kitchen. He wasn't a nice chef, not a chef as a matter of fact but he had to take control of the breakfast for now. After a wholesome 10 minutes, he readied two mugs of piping tea and sandwiches. Just as he was about to go to her room, his phone began ringing. Setting the tray aside, he fished out his mobile from the pocket.


'Good morning Arjun.'

'Morning Neil. How is Avni?'

'Better. She's sleeping.'

'Sorry for disturbing you, yaar. I will there in some time, please take care until then.'

'Don't worry Arjun and in no way are you disturbing me. No, it's okay. She is alright now.' And the line went dead. Neil deeply sighed, before proceeding to her room.


Avni pushed herself out from the blanket and settled her back on the head rest. She fell asleep, she remembered. How did she get here, to her house? Her clothes were the same she worse previous day. Before she could ponder harder, recollecting the incidents, she heard a male voice from the threshold.


'Good morning' Neil greeted her with an exuberant smile. She smiled weakly, hundreds of questions already invading her mind.

'Aap?' She asked. He evaded her question for few moments, placing the tray on night stand.

'Yesterday, Arjun told me to drop you home, you were in a deep sleep. He asked me stay here, in case you needed anything. So I had to be here.' He answered.

'Thanks.' She avoided looking in his eyes, lest he would see them getting moist. An uncomfortable silence spread across the room very quickly.


'You..you should get changed. By the time, I will re-heat the tea, it must have gotten cold.' He took the tray back, leaving her alone. She silently stood up from bed and entered inside the bathroom.


Switching on the shower, she slumped onto the watery floor. She pulled herself closer as waterworks began in her eyes.


Parking her scooty, she strode towards his apartment. She smiled at the watchman while his face lost its colour seeing her at the threshold. Instead of taking the regular steps, she opted for the elevator. Pressing number 5 button, she waited caressing the bouquet of red roses she brought along with her.

Ting! The portals of lift opened. Avni marched off to his flat, 5 C, and moved her hand to ring the bell when she found the door unbolted. Entering the hallway, she called his name out,

'Varun' 'Varun' but alas! She got nothing as response. Turning around, she thought to leave when she heard a scream from the bedroom. Initially reluctant, she decided to take a peek at the ongoings in bedroom. She knocked once, twice but finally gave up and pushed the door.


'Varun!' She gasped in horror, seeing him in an intimate position with another girl, barely left in any clothing. He was too busy to even notice her standing at the threshold. No longer holding her tears back, she quietly exited the room.


'Avni, are you there?' She heard Neil's voice from outside and realised she was sitting under shower past fifteen minutes. Reaching out to the knob, she turned off the shower.


'I will come down in five minutes. Aap ko agar bhookh lag rahi ho toh, please nashta shuru kar di jiye, will join you quickly.' She replied.


'Will wait for you/'


'Thanks'


Ensuring Neil left her room, she came out wrapped in a towel. Changing into almond-coloured kurti sharara, she applied her regular moisturiser and made her way to living hall cum dining area.


'Sit' Neil, upon seeing her, ushered her to the couch.

'Thanks Neil. You are a very nice person. Ek ajnabi ke liye itna sab kuch kar rahe ho, it speaks a lot about your greatness.' Overwhelmed, words came out instantly from her mouth.

'Please do not embarrass me, you are Arjun's friend which means my friend as well. Aur kisi mahapurush ne kabhi kaha hai dosti mein no sorry, no thank you and no welcomes as well.' Avni chuckled hearing his words.

'Shall we have our breakfast?'

'Sure, Neil.'

Silent thereafter, they munched onto the sandwiches prepared by him. There was a ring on the door. Avni stood up, walked to the door. Upon opening, she looked at him with emotionless expressions.


'Let me explain.' 'We're done.'


Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Amazing update Nivi...
Neil is psychology student very interesting...what is his psyc about avni??

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I was wondering how Neil comes to know Avni . So he is AJ's friend !
Being a psychology student Neil should have some role in Avni coming out of this heartbreak . Wow ! Neil has a new profession here 😆
Is Varun so heartless ? I felt disgusted the way he was breaking up with Avni 🤢
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update.TBH the story is keeping me hooked.
Neil is such a caring guy.He stayed wid her through the night to take care of her .He even prepared breakfast...how sweet of him.

The way Avni found out abt Varun must hv been devasting for her...dts y she was so broken.

Can't wait for d story to progress.
Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's intriguing. Feels good to see Neil so caring.
The line "we're done" if I'm not wrong is from
Avni. Can't wait for next update.

With Love
Kathy ❤️
Edited by Kathy_927 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting

update soon

Thanks a lot! Will do so.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: srain10

Amazing update Nivi...

Neil is psychology student very interesting...what is his psyc about avni??

Thanks a bunch, Sonal! Neil is a psychology professor here, not a student. His psychology right now says nothing about Avni but in future it will be Avni and only Avni.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I was wondering how Neil comes to know Avni . So he is AJ's friend !

Being a psychology student Neil should have some role in Avni coming out of this heartbreak . Wow ! Neil has a new profession here 😆
Is Varun so heartless ? I felt disgusted the way he was breaking up with Avni 🤢

Apart from friend, he is a roomie too. He for sure has a major role in Avni coping up with the betrayal. Oh, yes he has a new profession too 😳. Socha thoda hatke se try karti hoon, I love to experiment with the characters' professions. You will know about Varun more, will reveal in the fothcoming chapters. Thanks a ton!
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: drbeth

Interesting update.TBH the story is keeping me hooked.

Neil is such a caring guy.He stayed wid her through the night to take care of her .He even prepared breakfast...how sweet of him.

The way Avni found out abt Varun must hv been devasting for her...dts y she was so broken.

Can't wait for d story to progress.
Update soon.

Thank you so much, Tapasi. Delighted to know I have kept you engaged to my story. Yup, he is very caring and supportive, irrespective of anybody with whom he is with. His protective nature will be unraveled in upcoming chapters, I hope you will enjoy reading them. It was a relationship of 6 years, surely finding him cheating her, leave alone Avni any woman in her place will be distraught. Attempted my best in giving words to those emotions. Will try to do so.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kathy_927

It's intriguing. Feels good to see Neil so caring.

The line "we're done" if I'm not wrong is from
Avni. Can't wait for next update.

With Love
Kathy ❤️

Thanks a bundle, Kathy! Glad to hear you loved the Neil in my story. He's gonna get a lot more caring in future updates. Rightly said, the line is from Avni. Will try my best in doing so.
Love,
Nivi

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