A Walk Down The Memory Lane: An AvNeil FS CH 2

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Kathy_927
This is really very interesting dude. I can't wait much excited
Have read your other works too they are amazing.
I hope you are fine now.

With Love
Kathy ❤️

Thanks Kathy, glad to find a new reader for my stories. Yup I'm absolutely hale and hearty, it's just the writer's block putting me off. Will post the next chapter soon.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Naina168
Wooowww Nivi! Ur writing is beyond description! U r fabulous, dude! Srsly u r so imaginative n creative! U hv made me think that u r lying when u say u r not a full time writer! ever thought of publishing Ur work?😉
p.s
lll call u as Nivu, coz it feels thoda ajeeb when you call someone else with your name😆

Thanks a lot, Nivi (I hope I got your name right). Flattered after receiving such wonderful compliments from you, you got me blushing. Nah, I ain't any full time writer. Just a person who likes to let her thoughts flow in guise of words. I have never thought of publishing my works, my writings are not that great or worthy enough to be published. You can address me with anything that pleases you, I wouldn't mind.

Love,

Nivi (Nivedita).

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ...SA...
Nivi..🤗.. that's amazing amazing start... totally...n is Super interesting
That's how they meet?
Or they already Know each other?
Avni..❤️ heart breaks can shatter a person completely..😒
Arjun gives me Ali vibes..can i imagine ali as Arjun?
Continue soonish

Thanks a ton, Sanju. They know the presence of each other in Arjun's life, but haven't met each other properly. It's the first official meeting. Break ups are heart breaking, especially if the relationship was for a long time. You're free to imagine anybody as Arjun, I have penned his character with traits of Ali only. Next chapter should be up pretty soon.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sugar_candy15
Lovely ❤️
Update soon.

Thank you so much, Rachna. Sure, will do.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: __pohu__
Its just WoW... 👏
I don't think that even my well phrased comment could match up with your skill for writing. .. its that phenomenal.!!
Keep up the good work...and keep them coming.

Thank you so much, Pohu. Feeling heaving after knowing such high opinion you have about me. It's great to hear. The chapter is getting processed in my Word Pad, should be up in no time.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
I was confused and shocked to read the 1st part . Then when I saw the dates I understood 😆
I dunno why I am getting south indian flavor
Say me AJ is inspired from Bepanah ? And this guy is giving me Ali vibes 😆

Haha, koi nahi. Ho jata hai kabhi-kabar. South Indian ke flavors, not exactly but you will witness an epic saga of complicated language flavors 😉 (giving you a very big hint). I don't watch bepanaah, so I am not aware of AJ from that show. Does he share the same name Arjun Jaiswal or something in that lines? Keeping the traits of Ali, I have penned down Arjun's character so ho ought to behave like that 😳.

Love,

Nivi

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Hey Nivi

First of all ...sorry for commenting late...was caught up wid things.

So this is really interesting.Avni had a breakup and then she meets Neil.I'm already liking this.

Also loved d beginning .The scene where a preg Avni is telling her her unborn child her love story is adorable.

Continue soon...

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Haha, koi nahi. Ho jata hai kabhi-kabar. South Indian ke flavors, not exactly but you will witness an epic saga of complicated language flavors 😉 (giving you a very big hint). I don't watch bepanaah, so I am not aware of AJ from that show. Does he share the same name Arjun Jaiswal or something in that lines? Keeping the traits of Ali, I have penned down Arjun's character so ho ought to behave like that 😳.
Love,
Nivi

AJ is Arjun Hooda . Adi's younger brother . He uses as a pen name in his show . He is a RJ .

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: drbeth
Hey Nivi
First of all ...sorry for commenting late...was caught up wid things.

So this is really interesting.Avni had a breakup and then she meets Neil.I'm already liking this.
Also loved d beginning .The scene where a preg Avni is telling her her unborn child her love story is adorable.

Continue soon...

No apologies are accepted coz I don't need any. Personal life does get hectic, I can totally understand Tapasi. Thanks a bunch for dropping by. I'm glad you found the plot interesting. Will continue soon.

Love,

Nivi