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I knew that kiss was too good to be true, bu a girl can dream. I love this little family and how well Neil has mixed with them all. Truly the best of friends. Ali is the joker of the group for sure but bachara when will his partner come in. Being the only single one in hs group seems tough! Anyways, Neil again is stealing my heart, he just wants to spend time with Avni. Him just wanted to be with her is so sweet it just melts my heart, and I'm sure Avni also wants to spend time with him. Her hug last chapter is proof of her liking him too! You mention that dialogue based chapters are not your forte but you sure do write them well. Really Riya your level of writing is unmatchable! And if I'm not mistaken, this is a hobby? Truly commendable! Can't wait to watch the rest of the story unfold, I really want to see Angie and Aakash's problem get solved. Usually I just get attatched to Avni and Neil but here all the characters are so lovable I hope things work out for everyone.
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