AvNeil 4S: Past Connections; Last Part, Pg 12, Updated 9/3 - Page 6

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Sample pieces 😆 Absolutely!! 😆They have bottled up their feelings for past 3 years! IKR! How could they?? I swear both of them are tubelights! At least Neil has bucked up and ready to accept whatever the fate has for him in it's store . Finally!! You had given emphasis to every small attraction he has towards her minute mannerisms. I enjoyed his pov totally.So glad you liked it! The way he describes his laughter /smile was best 'spring with a possibility of rain' and makes him feel like a kindergarten kid plucking pigtails of girls 😆 I chuckled at it . She has totally unravelled his childish side with a tinge of jealousy whenever he finds herself easy with his brother . Who is this something brother of him 😆

This lines totally cracked me up 'his size 9 foot always ended up in his mouth'😆 Yep, he contracts foot in mouth disease whenever he sees Ananya!!😆 Btw, I enjoyed writing that too!!😉

Aag barabar hai dono taraf se ! Let's wait for her reply

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Hey Payal...um. .I guess I'm a little late and I sincerely apologise for it Hi! No need to be sorry! You are here, that's what matters!

Omg! You described Neil's feelings so beautifully... Thank you!😃 I mean I just love him Me too!😛(never mind I love all ur creations😆) Awww...so sweet of you to say that!😳

I don't know but why do I feel that Neil Khanna jealous of his own brother is the cutest thing ever? A jealous Neil Khanna is definitely a sight to behold! Add a dash of childishness to it & viola! 😉 Uff Payal what have you done to my chotusa dil😳 😆😆 It's all Neil Zara, all Neil...don't shoot the poor messanger!😉 Hmm... toh aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai.. Absolutely...aag to 3 years pehley lagi thi ab to blazing inferno hai!! I wonder that when Ananya will come out from her cubicle, will Neil be there already? I don't think he should enter a women's washroom...but you never know...he has afterall done this previously too!😆

I can't believe they have done the toughest job of bottling up their feelings for three long years! 😲 They are not tubelights for nothing!😆 their confession would be lit and I'm waiting for it but never mind I expect the unexpected from you😉 Ah good! I'm liking the fact that my readers now know that I don't like going the usual route!😉

Neil is literally a kid... I loved that ruffling her feathers part... how cute! IKR! & it was Ananya who brought Neilz inner child out to play...

I feel nostalgic, you made me miss the initial Ananya vs Neil days... I miss their banters Awww...I miss those days too!

Continue soon😃

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

Hey paayal 😊 Hi! I really do not know how I missed this beautiful piece ! Sry for being late...No issues at all & please don't be sorry. Just read the 2 parts at once..

I must say that the writing style of this ss is superb and unique...! Awww...thank you so much for saying that! 🤗 But this is not a SS just a simple 4Shot, whose 3rd & the penultimate part I'll be posting shortly! I appreciate that you've written both their pov... I could very well visualise der story :)) M so glad my written words were able to do that!😳

So now both are thinking to make a move... I'd love to read sooner to know more about this suspense :)

Much love :))

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey😊

Ohk...so dis is what past connections means.Nice.Its pain and the comfort they found in each other's company dt binds dem.Nice touch.

Okay nw u can call me a tubelight here😒...but I feel I'm not out of the woods just yet.

So the girl is definitely Ananya.But I'm.confused if the guy is Neil or his elder brother.

I'm sure u'll answr all my questions in ur last part!

So waiting for it more eagerly than ever before.

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome story

Update soon