AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 53

Thank you for updating these day everything about Neil is very emotional😭, I fell pain for both Avni and Neil, is she going to talk about this with her gang, since neela also broke her trust🤔 nicely done. great job plz update soon🤗. I want to know wht will happen next. also 1 April is coming, wht will Avni or Neil do just a thought.😉

Awesome chappy riya...how could u manage to write such an amazing chapter always dear...hats off to u dear ...👏👏it was so intense that i was crying when neil was crying...bechara neil bedard sanam ki vajah se dard m hai 😭😭...koi nhi i trust u riya...tum jaldi hi amazing twists and turns laake story or bhi tasty bna dogi...loved it babes...plz ab next update dedo...intzaar nhi ho rha mujhse😳

Any girl who is in Avni's place will definitely feel betrayal , anger , pain and deceit . Here it has come in a way crushing on her as she never expected Neela of all to hide it from her . As you have explained in words the person who defined the word mother . This is what has escalated the issue level up than we expected . Her past has nothing to do with this as Avni is a person who loses her rationality when things like this happens and goes into her past shutting herself from anyone or any feeling . In spite of all this she couldn't hate or scream or be angry or run away from Neil seeing how distraught he was . Honestly speaking if I were there I would have lost my rationality much before Avni . Abishek has done his job well but any girl who comes across her photos which is taken sneakily will definitely think the guy was stalking her all these days .

Originally posted by: darsh333

Heya buddy, so this is the first proper detailed comment The new update is too full of emotions!it is a great update riya!! so glad to know u liked it

You have beautifully potrayed avni's emotions👏 Awww, Thank u so much. You specifically know how to make me smile.

The whole update despite neil having few dialogues had an awkward silence in it..which made the reader in me actually scared to scroll down further..Riya girl you have done a great job in creating that effect here! Now i am soaring up in happiness. Yes, i made it a little silent from Avni's side and give the feels to this silence. You are quick enough to decipher it.

I loved how you began with those poetic lines..which clearly scared me again😕😆 Hahahaa. It was precisely Neil's thoughts before Avni's reactions which actually were scary.

I just loved how neil didnt let her go off!i had expected her to runaway before he caught hold of her. Even Neil had the hint of it so he quickly acted on his reflexes.

It was a shocker for the reader here to know that the "trust" was broken for avni..poor girl..how is she gonna cope with all this??!she couldnt even utter a word!and lemme tell you riya this was the beauty of this update! Awww, thats such sweet and amazing words for the update. You can clearly see Avni had literally didnt say a single word, she just tried to process his words, all the time. Yet you know her inner turmoil, but she left Neil in dilemma. About the trust issue, she is really acting on her reckless impulse, let the reality sink in her, then u will find a different Avni. 😉

Neil hasn't done anything wrong but he should have certainly given atleast a hint or told her something about this to her..now even he is broken Neil do have some different thoughts and perception you will get to know in further update.

I want to know how neelama and avni's equation will be after this..im actually scared avni might shut her herself away from all and both neil and neelama will have tough time🥱 Well, this is bound to happen knowing how overtly Avni is taking everything. Poor girl just need some time and maube a constant assurance from Neil

I love this abhishek guy!😆as i had mentioned earlier if it wasnt for him we would never had avneil together😃 Very true.

And yes this was a looong update which made me happy!do update the next one very soon!and that too a loong one!😃 Hahaha 😆 Pretty demanding huh, sure i will try my best 😊

Hey darshana
Thank u so very much for ur amazing words for the update and whole story.!
They are what i always look forward to.
So glad to know u are enjoying the story.
Means a lot to me.!

Originally posted by: Redrose1208

First of all... Yyyeeeaaaeee... Update... 'imagine me dancing'...😆 Hahaha 😆 Even i am dancing at the fact that i somehow completed it, which was very tough for me

Nd aaawwwiiieee... Neil... Poor poor baby... My heart broke too seeing him like that...i cn so imagine his tear stained cutsie face... Dat baby... Make him happy soon plzzz...😒 Mine too.! Poor guy is facing everything with no mistake of him and thats more annoying. Dont worry i will give him more happiness soon. 😊

Nd avni... Yes it ws n over reaction bt nt frm someone wid a background as hers... She is justified wid her actions n reactions atleast in d heat of d moment... M sure she will understand when she thinks wid a cool mind...😊 This is exactly what i wanted to hear. Thank u so much for mentioning that as u are so correct. Firstly i never expected people to agree with Avni's reactions, girls be like arey itna accha ladka hai itna pyar karta hai yada yada, how can u blame him n all. But you guys are more than understanding. Also u are very correct when u say that all these is happening in a heat of a moment from Avni when she is not well versed with her thoughts and emotions

Bt we cnt say neil is wrong.. Coz he's not... He did nt noe abt avni's bckground or her insecurities regarding love... Hope dey both talk n undestand each oder really soon... N m sure neela maa is gonna play n imp role in dis...❤️ This is surely going to sort out, just wait for how this happens. Neela is definately going to play an imp role, but will Avni listen to her.?

Hoping fr a lot mny chapters ahead... Update soonish... Yes a lot many chapters are in the making.

PS: dorsum of hand... Itne emtional chp ke beech mein na comic relief ban gaya tha vo... Hahaha 😆 What else can u expect from a medical student.? Shukar manao mai medial lateral me nahi samjhati 😆 I was like... Hopefully all ur readers r biology ppl.. Physics maths wale toh sochte hi reh jauyenge yeh dorsum of hand kya hota hai bhai...😆🤣 This os so true. But i guess most people know it inspite of being a layman.

Thank u so much buddy for ur kind words.!
Means a lot to me.!

Originally posted by: Athira_nv

Finally u updated.as usual the chptr is cute😊Plzz update next chapter as soon as possible.ur story has become an addiction😭😭.luv u for this amazing story.waiting for the next ...

Thank u so very much for ur amazing words.!
I hope its a good addiction 😉
Yeah i will try my best to update Asap.!
Much love.!

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

superb

update soon

Thank u so much dear 😊
Will try my best.!

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Riya. Hey doc

This was an totally amazing update.Completely emotional and you are potrayed it so beautifully through ur words. Thank u so much for saying that

Beginning was so apt with a poem describing their inner turmoil. Yes, it was mainly Neil's Anticipation for Avni's reactions and somewhere he knew she is not gonna take it calmly.

I understand how Avni feels right now.But inspite of her trust being broken she couldn't see him broken.Dts how love is.You cant see the other person hurting even though he has hurt you. Exactly my point.! Even in a heat of a moment of angst, in her impulse, in her discordant thoughts, one thing is clear, her concern and love for him. You cant help but feel it. I hope Avni can forgive Neela Ma soon.She just wanted Avni to give Neil a chance cz she knew he was a gud guy. that is something for which we'l have to wait and read 😉

I understand Neil too.He just wanted to find out who she was. He never meant to stalk her. And he never meant to hide it too. You are soon going to know much from his side too

The best part for me was where you hv described the expressions on both der faces, the exact same way yet totally different frm each other. Awww, Thank u so very much for mentioning that. Glad to know my readers read in so deeply to point out such things.!

This Abhi guy is so cute. Same thoughts. 😉 who knows, he may add up in the friendlist of Avneil.

Update the next part soon.Waiting to knw wht happens next

Thank u so much dear for such a hearwarming review.!
It brought a content smile on my face.!
Much love.!

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Ri😭 Saf 😊

Poor avneil🥺 Indeed, they are

U know wat ri, after reading ur note I was so scared to read the chapter. Why so.?

Its so emotional. Neil poor boy I really felt bad for him. He dont know wat to do. Mee too.! He is facing everything with no mistake of his own

Avni was so right in her place. Normal person ki reaction nahi thi avni ke reaction. Bcoz her childhood background was not normal. U perfectly described her emotions. I am so glad u can relate to her inner turmoil and agree with my protrayal of her Emotions and thought process.

I was like pls avni yesa math soch neil tera trust nahi toda.

Her trust broked? Omg its scaring me. Meri avneil.😭 It is much of a instant surface feeling for her now. Lets see how she thinks deeply and take this matter.

I loves ur poetic lines. It was awesome. Starting lines r beautiful. Thank u so much

Feeling very bad for neil. Bcoz he didnt stalk her. He just want to find out about her. mee too feeling so bad for Neil

He cried. But even after her trust being broken avni cant see him like that. Its called love.❤️

Hope she understand him soon. I know neela ma will help him. Hope avni use naaraz na ho. lets see how Avni will take this matter. This is something u'l have to wait and read

Abhi Is so cute ri. I really like this guys. Hope avni ke saamne na aajai. Sheri vardegi itna stalk kiya hai usko. He is a perfect professional Detective. And who knows Avni may become a friend of him.

Cznt wait for next update. Pls pls jaldi dedo ri.

I want to know how NENE team win back their love.

Continue soon ri. It was awesome.

Thank u so much saf for ur never ending encouragement.!
Means a lot.!
Love yah.!

Originally posted by: radhikrishna89

Kinda imotional one. Filled for both. Awesome pdate.

Thank you for updating.

Waiting for how Avni will deal with the situation and come out with new beginning with neil

Thank.u so much for ur amazing words.!
Will update soon so that all ur questions will be answered.!