AvNeil TS: The Heart Wants What It Wants| EPILOGUE UP-PG 11| Jan 03

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Kaiina

@Kaina.Ain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Beautiful. ..As Always 😃

Love It

LOVE IT...

Sooo Much!!

Waiting for the next part eagerly...😛

Update Soon. ...

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docritu99

@docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Wohh.!! What was that.!!
I am spellbound.!

First of all let me do my dance. Oh yeah! My guess(s) were right.!

A. Neil has actually Fallen for her amidst the stupid bet. And both are sailing in the same boat though miles apart

B. There actually was a misunderstnading. Though the most cliched one. Not that i am complaining. Avni heard the half convo and ran away.

C. The little girl was actually related to him and they met through her. Yayy.!! Mithali is Neil's sis. 😆 that was an unexpected shocker though.

Omg. They can feel each other's presence. That was so beautifully written. Infact the whole story is written with so much depth and conviction. Loving it to the T.

The Facebook connection is bang on. Avni ne abtak uska Confession bhi nahi padha hai(i am asumming this)

Brilliant update.!
Next one soonish plz. I guess i wont have much patience esp for this one. And i hope they clear out their misunderstanding soon.

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Loved it. Awesome awesome awesome awesome. Superb update. Beautiful. Wow, they can feel their presence. It was an misunderstanding. I cant tell you how eagerly iam waiting for next update. Wat mithali is neil's sis. Yeh kese huwa? I cant wait to read next update. Pls update soon.

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: avneil2
Loved it. Awesome awesome awesome awesome. Superb update. Beautiful. Wow, they can feel their presence. It was an misunderstanding. I cant tell you how eagerly iam waiting for next update. Wat mithali is neil's sis. Yeh kese huwa? I cant wait to read next update. Pls update soon.

Haha!

Thanks! Mithali is Neil's cousin. No third-angle here! Neil ain't a virgin, but he is a very nice person, you see 😆

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Tunailuvsahil

@Tunailuvsahil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Interesting concept lovely storyy

Plz continue soon im waiting

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

It was an amazing update.

Gosh I wanted to kill Neil when I read he was showing her messages to his friends😡

But then I love the fact he fall in love with her while talking not after loosing her which I expected. He protected her privacy. He realized how stupid he was to agree to that bet. Gosh I like that he was so guilty and suffering for it. Gosh poor boy he never knew why she went away. A part of me feels like he deserve it and then another part feels really bad for her.

I m happy finally he met her. It's going to be hard to convince Avni this time.

Btw I have a confusion where is the school in USA or in Delhi???

Please update soon. I can't wait to know what will Neil do and what will be Avni's reaction

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Arieltabi
It was an amazing update.
Gosh I wanted to kill Neil when I read he was showing her messages to his friends😡
But then I love the fact he fall in love with her while talking not after loosing her which I expected. He protected her privacy. He realized how stupid he was to agree to that bet. Gosh I like that he was so guilty and suffering for it. Gosh poor boy he never knew why she went away. A part of me feels like he deserve it and then another part feels really bad for her.
I m happy finally he met her. It's going to be hard to convince Avni this time.
Btw I have a confusion where is the school in USA or in Delhi???
Please update soon. I can't wait to know what will Neil do and what will be Avni's reaction

Thank you so much!
I guess somewhere both were at fault, Neil a bit more on the primary context, but I guess the next update will also highlight how Avni let her low self esteem outshine everything else.

The school is in New Delhi. However, AvNeil are currently in NYC!
Avni as a doctor practices in the states while Neil is there for a business project :)

Will update the last part sometime tonight depending on the feedback :)

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

It's really intriguing totally worth reading I don't know why I got vibes of Ranbir Kapoor rubbed off on Neil they way he lost his virginity in his early stage of teenage and how he dates girls randomly yet deeply attached and searching for avni in every girl he meets this reminds me partially of adhm but seriously loved it please update soon I'm eager to know how he reacts seeing his long lost lady love infront of his eyes after 8 years and what does avni feel seeing him wait will she recognise him? what made her completely Disappear for these many years? does she still has feelings for him ?so many questions popping up in my mind so please do update dear

Edited by Afsana103 - 7 years ago

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

It was totally awesome. Each part dedicated to both of their individual personalities and what a miss for Avni. Had she stayed a little longer, she would have known the bet is no longer a bet whilst Neil Khanna was already in love with her. But destiny was otherwise that it got them to wait 8.5 long years before they could ever meet again. Totally well written. Loved every bit of it and I wish the next update comes soon. Can't wait to know their reactions, their turmoils and their acceptance...