AvNeil OS : 'Tu JAHA Mai WAHA..!'

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docritu99

@docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

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Posted: 7 years ago

Riyaaa !!!!! It brought tears in my eyes dear...which happens with difficulty! It's so beautifully penned. Mein Neil ko dead kabhi imagine nai kar sakti... Moreover tat too when Avni is expecting a child...

I mean tat character is so inscribed in my mind and it's so dear tat it's impossible to take tat Neil's dead.

The bond Avneil shared has been described beautifully...Few lines touched me... amazing work and thanks is all I can say... 😊

Ps : you made this suni suni Saturday a nice one

Pls do write more

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

Ri... I know this...

Res...

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Heart wrenching !!!!😭 yet Beautiful..

I remember when i read this for the first time...I was numb.. i cried soo much...

Even Today...i couldn't stop myself from crying.

U are an amazing writer! And i love you...❤️😭

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

I can never imagine Neil dead . He is the breath of the show just as Avni. I thought you were going to end with delivery but you shocked me by showing him dead . This was so beautiful and heart wrenching . 😭 Moi Neil amar ho gaya . Your title is so apt ! Tu jahan mei wahan ⭐️ Avni is almost living in trauma . I'm loving the fact that she isn't hurting herself . His memories are becoming her strength and reason to live and remain happy .

But if the same happens with Neil he will be not less than walking corpse . He will become numb .

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Mein jaldi nahi rothi hoon di.par apne rula di mujhe.starting mein mujhe pata chalgayi.aur rona shuru.mein tillu ko kabhi mara huwa nahi dekh sakthi.😭pls,kehdo voh zinda hai.😭😭😭

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-WingsOfFire-

@-WingsOfFire-

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Riya you've made me cry.I'm literally crying.Saari nadiya beh rahi hai meri aakho se.Can't even think of naamkarann without neil.It will really be incomplete.😭