AvNeil SS: Us Against the World | CHAPTER 15 UP: PG-39 (Apr 17)

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Chocolatebond

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Jealous tillu is as delicious as chocolate loved it yaar update soon

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swati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Awesome too good lovely waiting for next

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theodyssey

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Posted: 7 years ago

#113

you are so hard-hearted! i can't believe you ended it there!!!! please, do update as soon as you can. right now would be perfect! Hahaha, it's too good!

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Veenapai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#114

It's awesome. Please update soon.Waiting...

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

You had me at V for Vishal, v for Voldemort. 😆

Neil is a potterhead. That makes me more happy than it should.

Great update!

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Amayrasharma18

@Amayrasharma18

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Hey Simi !! This was a treat !! Ur way of story-telling is really really unique...Beautifully written with prominent words !! Neela is a gem...Jealous Neil..ohh god..!! How much we crave to see him like this !!..Ending had me ... Loved it.!! Waiting for the event and see how it unfolds..!!

P.s. Eagerly Waiting for the next part...do update soon plij.!!!!

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Kmhcrazyfan

@Kmhcrazyfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Awesome update

Now is Neil gonna make Avni jealous?????

Totally loved the way he used his post

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18
Hey Simi !! This was a treat !! Ur way of story-telling is really really unique...Beautifully written with prominent words !! Neela is a gem...Jealous Neil..ohh god..!! How much we crave to see him like this !!..Ending had me ... Loved it.!! Waiting for the event and see how it unfolds..!!

P.s. Eagerly Waiting for the next part...do update soon plij.!!!!

Thank you so much!

Yes, Neela is mommy goals, and Tillu is well, hubby goals! 😆

Updating the next part now 😳

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me
You had me at V for Vishal, v for Voldemort. 😆
Neil is a potterhead. That makes me more happy than it should.
Great update!

Haha! Thanks!

Yes, Tillu is a Potterhead in my head!

And a proud one at that 😉😆