Avneil FF: The Red Thread of Fate (Updated Ch 3 Pg5)

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nlisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Not sure if I commented already! But this story is really well done! I'm loving the fact that Neil is alrwsy possessive of her!

I would actually want him to think she's dating VR for a bit for the sake of just seeing his possessive side.

You're a really good writer! I look forward to reading more!

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

So now Neil thinks that Avni & Vidyut are together? That'll be interesting to see...😃 With his emotions all in such a tizzy, it'll be a while before the poor guy can untangle his brain for it to function properly😆

Ali & Avni...how sweet is their instant connection...she so badly needed an uncomplicated friendship!

DD & Neil...aww DD recognizes all of Neilz spoken unspoken emotions...BFFs

Shweta & Neil...Ah so like a mom! Read his heart perfectly & already became jealous of Avni, sight unseen😆

Loved it! Next part please...😃

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sree07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: paayaal
So now Neil thinks that Avni & Vidyut are together? That'll be interesting to see...😃 With his emotions all in such a tizzy, it'll be a while before the poor guy can untangle his brain for it to function properly😆
Ali & Avni...how sweet is their instant connection...she so badly needed an uncomplicated friendship!

DD & Neil...aww DD recognizes all of Neilz spoken unspoken emotions...BFFs

Shweta & Neil...Ah so like a mom! Read his heart perfectly & already became jealous of Avni, sight unseen😆

Loved it! Next part please..q.😃

Thanks for reading dear :)

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Oh man.!! My interest is keep.on incresing chap by chap.
This was very well written.!
Ali is such a munchkin, he is too adorable. I can totally imagine him in apron checking on Avni.
Neil will be typical Neil, always engrossed and involved deeply In Avni's mysteries.

And omg what was that he thinks Avni to be VR's gf.! Chalo koi na Issi bahaney He will try to bond with Avni and feel helpless to be possesive.
Loved it.
Waiting for next update.!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

OMG OMG OMG u have no clue how many times Ive visited this page to see if theres an update😭😭..Gosh if its not too much to ask.. can u plz keep the updates a bit more fast paced?😊😊 Plz plz plz...coz I love your style of writing and this story has grabbed my attention from day1😳❤️👍🏼

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

"She is a stranger..calm down"...bwahahahahaha🤣 I loved how Neil is alrdy restless about knowing the possibility of Avni having an association with Mr Vidyut😛😉...Ahahahahah DDs reaction seeinng Neils ears go red😆..Love how u have described the rel btw DD-Neil here😃❤️..I sound silly but I wanted Neil to see her first😆🤪...khair..Neil wouldnt have been able to contain his feelings then😳...Awww so cutee...they run a rehab center to help out ppl❤️..Arrey waah...hes gonna use her as the key to Vidyut😎...this gets better than ever..Superb chapter👏..Loved it..cant even wait for the next update..and if I havent already mentioned...I luv your style of writing..😊👍🏼❤️

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sree07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: docritu99
Oh man.!! My interest is keep.on incresing chap by chap.
This was very well written.!
Ali is such a munchkin, he is too adorable. I can totally imagine him in apron checking on Avni.
Neil will be typical Neil, always engrossed and involved deeply In Avni's mysteries.

And omg what was that he thinks Avni to be VR's gf.! Chalo koi na Issi bahaney He will try to bond with Avni and feel helpless to be possesive.
Loved it.
Waiting for next update.!

Thanks dear for reading

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sree07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: itsme_aish
OMG OMG OMG u have no clue how many times Ive visited this page to see if theres an update😭😭..Gosh if its not too much to ask.. can u plz keep the updates a bit more fast paced?😊😊 Plz plz plz...coz I love your style of writing and this story has grabbed my attention from day1😳❤️👍🏼

Sorry yaar. Got sick last week ... So could not finish off...I will try to be faster with updates for sure.

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sree07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: itsme_aish
"She is a stranger..calm down"...bwahahahahaha🤣 I loved how Neil is alrdy restless about knowing the possibility of Avni having an association with Mr Vidyut😛😉...Ahahahahah DDs reaction seeinng Neils ears go red😆..Love how u have described the rel btw DD-Neil here😃❤️..I sound silly but I wanted Neil to see her first😆🤪...khair..Neil wouldnt have been able to contain his feelings then😳...Awww so cutee...they run a rehab center to help out ppl❤️..Arrey waah...hes gonna use her as the key to Vidyut😎...this gets better than ever..Superb chapter👏..Loved it..cant even wait for the next update..and if I havent already mentioned...I luv your style of writing..😊👍🏼❤️

Thanks dear for reading. Love your feedback. Will try to add chapters faster,