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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Guys, For those of you who don't know me my name is Zara.
This is the first time I've written an OS on this forum so please ignore the mistakes and let me know on any feedback good or bad. Thank You 😊

Wonder

I sat at the window looking out at the grey clouds as the rain drizzled slightly thinking and wondering. If my husband were to see me like this he would most likely tease me and say I look like a character out of a book who was sat wondering, but I couldn't help but wonder. Wonder what my life would be like if I hadn't had come back for Aman. What if I didnt go to my "supposed" suicide place as Neil likes to call it, then I wouldn't be the person I am today and I wouldn't have my happy family today and I wouldn't have Neil, My Neil.


We had both come so far and had faced every storm that was thrown our way together, as one. Dayawanti Mehta was dead and Ragini Pandit in jail, it gave my heart a strange sense of peace that I could finally live a normal life with the person I love, I had finally avenged my mother and father without getting blood on my hands. A strange sense of peace had entered my heart with the end of DVM like a burden had been lifted of my shoulders and that I was no longer trapped and tied and didn't have to fear for the lives of my loved ones anymore.


And just as my past had finally stopped haunting me Juhi returned, but I had full faith in Neil he never given me reason to doubt him before and neither now. I had felt for Juhi she had been trapped in hell for so long and set free to find out the person she loved was no longer hers. But that was no fault of mine. Love was never an agenda of mine, but as time shows love does not happen planned it just happened and the was the same for Neil and I. My sympathy for Juhi may have known no bounds until her truth had come forward. Not only was she lying about Mishty being my Neil's daughter who not only me and Neil but also Ali had put our lives at risk for, she had been playing us all along together with Vidyut R. She had been the one to tell him about all our plans to save her daughter who I doubt is even her own child. No woman could make a child go through so much pain. If anger was a person Neil portrayed the part to the fullest, but more then anger I got see the shame in his eyes on trusting Juhi without a doubt.


I heard the door creak open and saw the one person who put a smile on my face no matter what mood I was in. Neil took rapid steps towards me and engulfed me in a hug and in that moment I was reassured that no matter what life threw at us we would be ok as long as we were together.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very beautifully written. Loved it a lot! Do write more :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhavsss

Very beautifully written. Loved it a lot! Do write more :)

Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful. But I wish it was longer. Please write some flashbacks / sequel or something. Look to reading more of your work!
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Beautiful. But I wish it was longer. Please write some flashbacks / sequel or something. Look to reading more of your work!


Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is beautiful. Wonderful job, I hope you will write again
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is beautiful. Wonderful job, I hope you will write again


Thank you dear, and I will try again once I have some free time. 😊
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Im glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Zara.
This was very well written. Short and utterly sweet. Please write more!
Payal. :)
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Originally posted by: Grenade

Hi Zara.

This was very well written. Short and utterly sweet. Please write more!
Payal. :)


Thank you Payal, I'm happy you liked it and I will surely try, I hope you continue to 😊

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