Avneil TS:'The IMPERFECT Yet PERFECT PROPOSAL' (P2, 2 Nov)

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

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This was so beautiful. You have a way with words. I just loves the way you described everything. So continue this soon. Avni's proposal was so beautiful. I am waiting eagerly for Neil's response.

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: AvNeil_TV
update soon

It will be updated soon.

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: AgnesFan
This is good than the one on-screen . I loved it to bits . Your dialogues were so good . Itni jaldi har li apni dil ko . She started to leave . I can't wait for the next part . Don't make him speak of Juhi . I felt the scene was entirely different . Neil was in his own world .

Oh dont worry dear.! Its completely Juhi free. I tried to make it from viewers POV like how we wanted them to confess.
Ur comment made me grin ear to ear.
Thank u so much for such awesome words of appreciation.
Next part will be up.soon.

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia
This was so beautiful. You have a way with words. I just loves the way you described everything. So continue this soon. Avni's proposal was so beautiful. I am waiting eagerly for Neil's response.

Now m blushing. 😳
Thanks for giving me a deeper perspective of how u like my writing. Means a lot to me.
Thank u so much dear.
Neil's response will be up soon.
Hope u'l like that also.

Edited by docritu99 - 7 years ago